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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks for all d comments n likes...🤗
Hope you all will like this part..
Enjoy reading..


Taarey ff-Ehsaas-Part7


Taani is sitting in d bed with a cup of coffee..
Rey comes..
Rey-abhi tak udi nahi tum?
Taani-ab yeh boot lagtha hai tumhe jo haath main coffee pakadkar baita hai..
Rey-offo..
kya hua? Chehre pe baara kyun baja hai?
Taani (in mind,to her herself)- baara aur band donon bajega jab mera naya kand tumhe pata chalega...
Rey-ab yeh pagalon ki tarah smile kyun kar rahi ho?
Taani-kyun tax lagtha hai..
Rey moves closer to her..
Taani is taken by shock..
Rey-ssshhh
Rey moves further closer..
Taani-yeh
Rey moves closer to her lips..Taani closes her eyes..
But smirks n picks an eyelash frm her face..
Rey-taani
Taani-hmm
Rey opens her hand n places her eyelash..
Rey-jo maangana hai teek se maangna..
Taani-mujhe yeh sab main vishwaas nahi..aur tum mujhe aur late kar rahi ho..mujhe ek bahut hi important meeting main jaana hai..
Rey-k cool
Taani-ab tum chalo,mujhe ready ho na hai..
Rey-k,main kitchen main hoon..
Taani-haa pata hai chipkoo..
Rey-tum(in mind-aise kaunsi important meeting)
Taani closses d door..
Leases her back to d door n opens her hand n closes her eyes n wishes-
Humesha Rey ko khush rakhna..


Office..
Taani wanders here n there in her cabin..
Taani-hey bappa,maine itne tension apne job ke interview main bhi nahi diya..
Taani looks oopar-ab aapko mujhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai,mujhe pata hai main pagal hoon..
ab madad karna hai karo..varna modka khaalo...

Rey-taani
Taani-ab kya hai kadoos?
Rey-tum yeh kiise baat kar rahi ho
Taani-apne aap se..
Rey-kyun?
Taani-i like expert opinion smetyms..
Rey-ok..(thoda confused)
(n leaves)
Taani leaves in hurry..
Opens boss's door-boss give me an hour, i will be back..
Boss-par taani,huamara meeting hai ek hour main..
Taani-i knw u can handle till i can reach...k boss..gtg nw

Boss-taani

Swayam-taani

Boss-yeh ladki mujhko ek din zarror heart attack denge..
Swayam-yes boss..
Boss-what?

Rey-isse kya hua?

Taani is sitting in a coffee shop..
Waiter-usual mam
Taani-haa paji mera usual..
Lathika-hey..
Taani-hey..
Latika-i will hve a carmel latte..
Waiter goes..

Lathika-bolo taani..tumne mujhe office ke bahar kyun bhulaaya?
Taani-actually lathika,its little personal..
Lathika-i am listening..
Taani-tum single ho na?
Lathika-tum yeh poochne keliye bhulaaya
Taani- u knw na i dnt time pass during office time
Lathika-k yaar..chill..i am curretly alll single..khush..
Taani-ha(smilng)
Lathika-huh?
Taani-sry
tumhe rey kaisa lagtha hai?
Lathika-tumhara bff ryt?
Taani-yup kadoos
Lathika-he s handsome n everyone in d office knws tht..
Taani-so tumhe woh accha lagtha haina
Lathika(confused)-ha toh
Taani-k main deals main aur life main seedhi baat karna chahthi hoon..
so main aaj rey ka aur tumhara date fix karoon toh tum uske saath jaoge..
Lathika-what s wrong with u?
Taani-am all good..
Lathika-wait a second..
Tum donon ek saath?
Taani-what? no no no...hum bas 10 saal se bahut hi acche dost hai..u knw chuddy buddies..
Agar tum usse date karoge toh uska aur mera dosti issi tarah rahegi..koi probs nahi hogi kyunk u knw we r frnds..
Lathika-main kaise..
Taani-k main tumhe ek offer deti hoon..tum rey ke saath date pe jao aur dekho if u guys r compatible n all..i will make sure u r on d next singapore deal..k?
Lathika-what,are u kidding..
Taani-i dnt kid abt work..
Lathika-of course yaar..kab jana hai date pe ?
Taani(smiles)-thanks yaar..

Office-
Taani shows actions to lathika to go n talk to rey..
Swayam notices this..
Swayam comes n stands next to her..
Swayam-tum na iss duniya ki ek hi piece hai..
Tanai-kya
Swayam-(pats her on d back) galati kar rahi ho n (goes)
Taani-ab isse kya hua?


Lathika goes to meet Rey...

Lathika knocks on rey's cabin..
Rey-Hey
come in..
Rey was busy searching a file..
Lathika-U busy?
Rey-No i was just searching something..anyway leave it..baito tum..
Lathika-thanks..
Rey sat on his chair..
Rey-bholo..
Lathika-hmm..umm..
Rey-kya hua?kuch important..
Lathika-aisa kuch nahi..k dont get me wrong k..tum aaj shyaam free ho..
Rey-haa..
Lathika-hum dinner pe chale..
Rey-umm..jeez..ab..
Lathika-its k if u r bz..i can understand..
Rey gets up n he sees taani wandering n luking into his cabin..
Rey-k,i will pick u at 7..
Lathika-k...

Lathika goes out n shows a thumps up at taani..
N rey sees it..

Rey goes to taani's cabin..

Taani saw rey coming..
Taani-hey bappa..ab..yeh saree musibat ki quota aapne mera hi sir pe kyun daalthe ho?
aap se baad main deal karti hoon..
Rey-taani..
Taani-kya..(searching btw files)
Rey-kya doondh rahi ho..
Taani-shaanti
Rey-kya
Taani-nahi mere coffe ka mug..
Rey-woh files ke cupboard main kaise milega
Taani-tumhe kuch kaam tha..
Rey-aah woh main aaj Lathika ke saath jaa rahi hoon raat..
Taani(in min,thank u bappa n smiles n turns)-toh main kya karoon..jaana..mera mooh kya dekh raha hai..
Rey-toh main jaon..
Taani-jaa,maine tujhe bandh karke toh nahi rakha hai..
Rey-k..(confused,din pe din iska dimaag loose hota jaa raha hai)




Precap-Its said tht,everything s fair in love n war..
Hmm...sochne ke baat hai..
Suspense n surprise as d showdown nears...


Hope u all liked ths part..
Please give comments n likes..
Silent readers ek smiley de do yaar... 😉


part8

Edited by Lachu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
taani fixed lathikas date with rey :O
Eagerly waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update...
taani seriously ek din sabko heart attack de degi...
i loved it when swayam said galati kar rahi ho...
please continue soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
funtu updt...
taani pyaar to karti hai rey se but doesn't realise it yet...
iske dimag na, kuch bhi chalta hai isme...
ye sab ko heart attack hi degi...
hope taarey jaldi sath sath ho...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super update
Swayam sais tum wrong kar rahe ho... Nice
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
wish part was really cute
omg ye taani samjhti q nai hai kya kya krti hai
waiting to see what will happen wen she realize that she did wrong with both rey n herself
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update. !!
specially the dialogues.. !!
taani is sacchi mein one unique piece..!! LOL..
thnx 4 the update and pm :)
update soon !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
taarey scene
in morning was so good
i love hat part when swayam said
galt ke rai ho
sumthing aisa kuch
update soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo awsm prt
lvd it
tthnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do u realise how late u r
For update
Nice prt taani making
Rey go away n yeah agree
With swayam taani is doing
Wrong hmm update whn u want
I don't care now 😡

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