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Posted: 11 years ago
Swayam-tum na iss duniya ki ek hi
piece hai..
Tanai-kya
Swayam-(pats her on d back) galati
kar rahi ho . Dis was my most fav dialog in dis update. Taani is geting tensd day by day nw what wil hap? Waiting fr next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome but i think rey is upto some thing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Update šŸ‘
Can't wait for the next update 😃
Please update soon n pm me 😊
Love: Ale ā¤ļø
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb... loved it... update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
After a long time updated di..!
Awesome update..!
Lol taani is doing all this to distance rey.?!
Gosh she is mad..!
Swayam ne clue bhi diya hai.!
Gosh rey and lathika date?
Shit..!
Hope kuch ulta seedha na ho..!
Update soon.!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww...
lolz...
such a cute update
and really excited for the
nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update
Wow taani sending latika on date by making a deal with her 🤣
She is crazy
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

TAAREY FF-EHSAAS-PART 8



Hey guys,
Thanks for all d comments..
n (raddi,sry yaar,der se updates post karne keliye sry...maaf kardo)
Hope u all will like ths update..
Enjoy reading..



Rey-taani darwaaza kholo..main dinner pe jaa rahi hoon..
Taani-toh main kya phataka phodoon..
Rey-are yeh shirt teek hain..
Taani-ruko kholthi hoon..
Rey-kya kar rahi ho andhar..
Taani-apne kam se kaam rakho
yeh shirt teek hai(Selecting a black shirt)
Rey-main javoon.
Taani-ruko aarthi ke taali le aathi hoon..
Rey-main jaa rahi hoon..

Taani-hey bappa,..
Kaku-aap kahin pe jaa rahi ho..
Taani-ha woh main umm woh main bahar coffee peene keliye jaa rahi hoon..
Kaku-coffee ?
Taani leaves in a hurry..

Taani goes behing rey in d parking lot..
He gets into his car..
Taani gets into her car..
Taani-hey bappa help karna..
Taani tries to start her car but it was not starting..
Taani-bappa main bholthi hoon huh..aap na (n tries to start again n she drives off to get behind rey's car)
Rey stops his car to pick Lathika
Taani stopps right behind..-haaye yeh maine kya kar diya..
Kahin mujhe dekh na le..

They drives for another 20 minutes..

Rey n lathika goes out of d car n enters d restaurant..


Taani goes behind them n sits diagonally opposite to them n holds a menu card to cover her face..

Waiter enters..
He goes to rey's table first n take d order..

Then he goes To taani's table..
taani-haaye ab yeh kaunsi moosibat hai..
Waiter-order mam
Taani-coffee first please,2 percent milk,2 spoons of sugar...
Waiter goes..


Taani sees Rey smiling..
Taani-bappa itna bhi daanth dikhaakar muskurana ki kya zaroorat hai huh..

Waiter enters,,,

He keeps d mocktails on Rey's table n comes to taani's table..

Taani-(luks at d waiter)-are yaar maine 2 percent milk kaha 20% nahi(she tells it in low voice n waiter didnt hear it)
Waiter-kya maam sunaayi nahi diya
Taani(in mind-haaye bappa,kahaan se in namoonon ko bechte ho mere life main)
kuch nahi baaisaab aap chalo..

Waiter leaves n Rey sees..
Taani covers her face-haaye bapa,phir vaat lagaa di aapne..
Rey-taani,aur woh bhi yahaan n gets up..
Taani,tum
Taani-haa main...tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho,tumhe toh woh ,woh dlathika ke saath hona chahaiye na..
Rey-woh bhi yahi hai(confused)
Taani-gud gud acha
Lathika enetrs-taani,hai
Taani-hai
Lathika-tum yahan.
Taani-ghar par bore ho rahi thi,socha ek frnd ke saath coffe pene aajaon..
Rey-aur frnd
Taani-abhi uska msg aaya woh nahi aa raha hai..so main jaa hi rahi thi..
k bye..waiter,check..

Rey-(kya hua isse)
Lathika-weird huh
Rey-uska dusra naam hai yeh..


At night..
Taani"S flat ..IN her balcony..
Taani was sititng in her chair with her coffee..
Rey comes..
Rey-tumhe toh wahaan ki coffee pasand nahi haina..phir
Taani-ha tum aagaye,kaise thi date..
Rey-tumne mere pe check karne keliye aay tha ya phir
Taani-tumpe..pagal kutte ne katta hai kya
Rey-taani
Taani is smiling..
Rey-muskurana bandh karo idiot..
u purposefully set up ths whole date na..
Taani-tum yeh kya bol rahi ho(luking away from him)
Rey-what is going taani
Taani--kya,zyaada peeli kya tumne?
Rey holds her hand n pulled her her n she came crashing on her chest..
Dont u dare luk away from me.mujhe tere har saans ka matlab pata hota hai k..
Taani-rey,leave
Rey-tumhe kya zaroorat thi yeh sba karne ki.
Tumne uske samne deal rakhli..
kyun
Taani looses her control..
Haa kiya maine yeh sab,bcoz i dont want you to stay alone because of me..
Mere numerous reasons hai single rehne ki n main usmain khush hoon n tere liye bhi accha chahtha hoon..Tumhe samjhtha hoon main...
Rey-mujhe kuch samjhna taani..Maine tab bhi kaha hai aur aaj bhi kaoonga,jab tak tumhare life main koi nahi aata tab tak main single hi rahoonga..Do u understand Taani..

Rey leaves but comes back..-Afasos toh yeh hai taani,tum kuch samjhna nahi chahthi..

Tanni looks at d sky n closes her eyes n a tear drops down-bappa kya karoon main..I cant lose him bappa at any cost..Ab lagtha hai usse main ek din kho doongi..
Taani gets a text from swayam-
us din kya yaad rakhoge
tumhe iss din mila tha
Ek baar rokh dete usse..
Uss din kya yaad rakhoge
tumhe iss din mila tha
Bas ek awaaz lagani thi
Par Tumne kiya nahi
Ek din yaad rakhoge tum..

Waah taaliya...
Gud nyt..

Taani looks at d sky-bappa..


Precap-
Rey-I LOVE YOU TAANI.
Taani slaps him..

Guys last update par comments was really less,i sent almost 150-170 pms..
N if d response s so low that means i am really bad at writiing now,
So if thts d matter i will be stopping ths ff by next update..

Sorry if i am being rude but i know many of u r writer too so hope u cn understand what i am telling..

Edited by Lachu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow ...lovely update...

taani rey ki jasoosi karing šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

but rey ko pata chal gaya...

precap...omg...😲

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Really loved it nd rey knows taani soo well
Thanx for d pm
Nd update soon

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