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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello everyone!😃 as u all I am also a big fan of sandhir. till now I have been a silent reader of sandhir. this is the first time I am writing my thoughts down. this I my first ss, so have a look on it and please comment and let me know how it was.
so first let me make u understand the concept. as we all know our sanyukta's engagement have been fixed and it will take place after 10 months. so the story begins 2 days before her engagement...
here's the 1 chapter

It was a cold windy evening. The ending days of November. There he was sitting leaning on the window, lost in thoughts, in her thoughts. He was so confused about his feelings towards her. He didn't know whether he loved her or it was just a mere attraction, but the fact was that he was badly missed his sanyu. Yes, our Randhir Singh Shekhavat was missing his Sanyukta Agrawal, his biggest enemy. He had met her just 3days ago, but he felt that years have passed since he have last saw her. She was getting married because of her family's pressure keeping her own dreams aside. Randhir have already met Sanyukta's would be husband, as he was the only one who made to agree to marry Sayukta. At that time he wanted sanyukta to be away from him, his life and F.I.T.E, but now he regret for that mistake. how could he see the girl or the only girl whom he had developed feeling for to be in another man's arms, see her marry someone else. It was there between semester holidays and everyone was in there homes, including randir. It was Sanyukta's engagement in 2 days and all her classmates were invited. he was regretting for convincing that idiot to marry her how could he see her marry someone else. his trance of thoughts was broken by the ringtone of his phone. It flashed jiggy's name

Conversation-

Hey jiggy, Randhir attended the call

Hey Randhir bhai, replied jiggy

Kaisa hai? Asked Randhir

Accha ho bhai, aap batao, came jiggy's reply

Theek ho, aur bata kaise yaad kiya? Said Randhir

Mujhe toh bas yeh puchna tha ki aap sanyukta ki sagaai pe aaoge na, enquired jiggy

Randhir felt like his heart was sinking

Ha, ofcource yaar us farzi ki engagement kaise miss kar sakta hoo mai, he tried to sound normal

Accha Randir bhai toh kal ilte hai, bye! Said jiggy

Chal bye, and with that Randhir hung up the call

So kal milte hai Sanyukta Agrawal, he said with a smirk on his face.

And with that he went sleep.

so how was it bad or worst. I know I am a bad writer, but still comment and let me know. good and bad comments all are welcomed, but I have a doute about getting good ones. if you will like it then only I will continue.
buddy me for pm(s)
INDEX-
CHAPTER 1- PG 1
CHAPTER 2- PG 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was good. You're writing for the 1st time. I'm also a new writer. You spell wrong in their names. But it is in fanfiction. How ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start! Thank you for the pm! Do continue soon! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArushiKotecha

Great start! Thank you for the pm! Do continue soon! :D

thanks reading, liking and for comment. i will try to continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER-2

She was standing near her window looking at the morning sun. It was 8'o clock in the morning. Her eyes were red of crying, there were strains of dried up tears on her cheeks, there were dark circles under her eyes. She had cried the whole night.

She was lost in thoughts, thoughts of her friends, her classes, her professors, her mortal enemy, she was missing them all, she was missing her dream collage FITE very badly.

Her chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on her room's door.

Sanyu: come in

It was her mother, she entered the room with a sweet smile and called

Anju: sanyu beta

Sanyu quickly wiped her tears and turned to face her mother with a smile plastred on her face

Sanyu: ha maa boliye

Her mother walked towards her

Anju: beta tum ro rahi ho?

Sanyu: nahi maa, bas voh aisehi voh mai

She was struggling with here words.

Her mother lovingly cupped her face and said

Anju: beta mai samajh sakti hoo

Sanyu smiled slightly at her mother

Her mother backed a little and said in a scolding tone

Anju: yeh kya tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi hui

Sanyu: maa voh

Anju: beta aaj teri sagaai hai aur tu abhi night dress mai hi hai, jaldi kar ladke wale 11baje tak agayege aur tere collage wale dost bhi toh ane wale hai.

Sanyu: maa aap tention mat lo mai tayaar ho jaugi

Anju: achha theek hai tum taiyaar ho mai jati hoo.

With that anju left the room.

Sanyu turned her face towards the couch where here beautiful dress was kept. She picked it up and went to the wash room.

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All her class mates have been invited to her engagement and also all the pre-wedding rituals. But vidhushi and sahil were not able to come for her engagement so only randhir, parth, jiggy and kaustuki had come. They had decided to meet at a restaurant near the bus station so her driver would pick them up. All of them were already there at the restuant with sanyu's driver except parth. His bus had yet not arrived and they were waiting for him. Randhir was getting hell irritated by this, he wanted to meet sanyukta, but his bad luck he had to wait for that looser parth.

Yeh parth us sanyukta ka pacca dost hai, dono late lateef hai. Randhir thought irritatd

Just then he saw a bus arriving it was parths bus. He saw parth coming out of the bus. He singed in relief

Randhir: finally, he thought

As parth came infront of him and said in a cold tone

Randhir: you are late

Parht: sorry but not my mistake, bus arrived late

Randhir: vah! Dono excuses dene mai bhi champion hai, he mumbled

Parth: kuch kaha tumhe

Randhir: none of your business, and with tat he went towards the car.

All of them sat in the car drove towards sanyukta's house

Randhir: so sanyukta agrawal going to meet you after a week , he thought with a smirk on his face.

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please do comment

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Great beginning! Randhir's thoughts were hilarious! Comparing Parth and Sanyu! Bwahahahaaa! xP
Update soon and thank you for the pm! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey! Great beginning! Randhir's thoughts were hilarious! Comparing Parth and Sanyu! Bwahahahaaa! xP

Update soon and thank you for the pm! :D

thanks
and for sure I will try to continue soon😊

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