IN LOVE WITH STRANGER PART 8 UPDATED ON 10-4-2014/ Page 104 - Page 47

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145 likes hui h ab tk aur kitna wait krna h???????
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i m thinking about next update... kya hoga aagešŸ˜›
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šŸ˜‰šŸ˜› drama queen ab kya krne wali h aage??????
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update chaiyeee
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Originally posted by: mirror1521

<font size="4">hii...Richa</font>

<font size="4">i'v become a big fan of u n ur stories since long and cannot resist to read whatever u write.😊</font>
<font size="4">also i've got a request tht plz keep writing n never think to quit IF.</font>

<font size="4">this update was quite different with a flavour of comedy in it...loved it to the core...šŸ‘</font>

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Phew Done with all parts ...

It took few days to read just 6 parts šŸ˜†

I don't know, if i already read few parts or not ...As i tend to read part and then forget the links and move on...to other stories.. Weird naah??? i know ... 😳

Anyways, coming to the story...

Nice thoughts ... I mean, concept...

Geet's ch is pretty Cool ...

Maan is rude, arrogant boss...

poor adi... scared Geet lot and the part where Maan was after Geet with knife was funny... 🤣

Finally mu is cleared and now what ???

waiting for next of course...

thnx for pm dear.. Coz of that i saw this link naa.. šŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: drrose31

<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Phew Done with all parts ...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">It took few days to read just 6 partsšŸ˜†</font>
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</font>
<font size="4" color="#0099ff">I don't know, if i already read few parts or not ...As i tend to read part and then forget the links and move on...to other stories.. Weird naah??? i know ... 😳</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Anyways, coming to the story...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Nice thoughts ... I mean, concept...</font>
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</font>
<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Geet's ch is pretty Cool ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Maan is rude, arrogant boss...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">poor adi...scared Geet lot and the part where Maan was after Geet with knife was funny...🤣</font>
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</font>
<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Finally mu is cleared and now what ???</font>
<font size="4" color="#0099ff">
</font>
<font size="4" color="#0099ff">waiting for next of course...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">thnx for pm dear.. Coz of that i saw this link naa..šŸ˜‰</font>

thank u sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago



PART - 7


ADI & Geet both hates pasta and looking each other to find a solution. Suddenly Geet stood up from her chair. Maan ask the reason and she lied again.


"sir actually maine na Maal me kafi kuchh ulta seedha kha liya tha to ab bhook nahi hai." she made an excuse for getting rid of eating that pasta.

"are you sure?",He asked in a suspected way and she nodded to confirm.

Seeing her Adi too stood up."sssirr maine bhi khaya tha woi sab Geet k sath to mmm mujhe b bhook nahi hai. Haiii na Geet." he fumbbles lying to him but he to wanna leave the table,so he take her into confidence and Geet supports him nodding againg like a doll.

"Hmm." Maan scanned both's faces and allowed them to leave.

When he done,Adi showed rooms to both. One for Geet and another for Maan. He settled himself in a hall as there is no more room in his flat. Both moved to their rooms and Adi laid on a couch. Though bed is not very much comfortable for Maan but as he was tired so need to relax and slept soon. But Geet and Adi,both were hungry. Both stirring coz they are peckish.

"Adi eat something,then only you get some sleep." he talked to himself.

"tab to bol diya now i am hungry. What to do? May i found something to eat in fridge.",Geet to need something to eat.

Both get up. Adi moved to kitchen area without making a noise as he scared of Maan's anger. Geet too come out of her room and straight went to fridge. She too dont wanna make any noise,in order to keep other's sleep,she too doesnt turn on the lights. As a result both collide with each other in darkness and get scared. Both shouts for help thinking might someone invade in house. Both moved to different directions and kept something to protect themselves and to attack each other. They attack with their recpective weapons. Maan awake with the noise and come out. He switch on the lights and viwed both Geet and Adi were standing in kitchen with spoons in their hands. Both first glance each other then to Maan and his narrowed eyes. Quickly both hide their spoons behind them.

"ye kya shor macha rakha hai tum dono ne?" he asked strongly resting his fists on his waist.


"kkk kuchh nahi sir aa aap so jaiye." Adi fummbles scared of his glaring eyes.


"so jaiye. Ite shor me koi skta hai. Adhi raat ko tum dono ne pura ghar sir pe utha rakha hai. Or kaha hai chor?" Maan glared both and scold them.


"sorry sir wo hume laga ghar me chor ghus aaya hai isliye..." Geet apolozise to avoid him.

"by the way bina lights on kiye choro ki tarah tum dono kitchen me kar kya rae ho?" he interogates suspeciously.

"hum khana nahi dhoond rae the,hai na Adi sir/Geet." both said together.

Maan's narrowed eyes widened. "maine kab kaha ki tum dono khana dhoond rae ho?" he caught them and his tone is giving cautioned to both.

"nahi kaha... Achha ha nahi kaha par mujhe laga apne kaha." Geet made annoying face like theif caught by Inspector.

"hehehehehe",Adi laugh funnily on her ans. But his one glare is enough to shut his mouth.

"sir aap so jaiye,promise we wont make any noise." Geet wants to send him away. One she was hungry and secondly he was intraogating them like criminals was not easy to handle by her.

"hmm",he said and moved to his room. Both sighed. Maan was about to step in but stop and slanted his neck to glance back. Both again came to alert position. "or ha agr Sujamal bhaisa or Jodha bai ka fight session complete ho gaya ho to apne weapons rakh do,bachhe b nahi ladte spoon se." he taunts with a smirk and both gulped hard.

"hey babji inhe har cheez kaise pta chal jati hai." Geet cribbed in her mouth.

"Geet pray baad me kar lena.pehle dono kuchh kha lo warna raat bhar aise hi jagte rahoge dono.",Maan caught them red handed and now he taunts both. Both turned stunned and he step inside.

"apko bhi bhook lagi hai Adi sir." she asked cutly making baby face.

"right or tume bhi. Wait i will make tea for us."Adi said with a smile. He prepared tea for both and take some snacks with it. Aferwards both slept calmly.

Now today Maan is all set to take her to KM. Both Maan and Adi get ready but not Geet. Maan get impatient as she is taking so much time in changing. He knocked on her door and shout. "Geet hurry up. Or kitna time logi?"

"ab main kya karu? Is jhamele(saree) ko kaise bandhu?" she asked to herself.

Here Maan get worried for her."Geet are you ok?"

seeing no other option she shout from inside. "sir main ise kaise pehnu mujhe saree bandhni nahi aati."

Maan stunned hearing her reply. His eyes widned again. "WHAT? Tume saree pehnni bhi aati? Kaisi ladk ho tum?" now he really tur frustrated.

"hello ye konsi kitab me likha hai ki ladkio ko saree bandhna zaroor aana chahiye. Ladkiya kya by born seekh kar aati hai?" Geet annoyed and argued with him.

Maan fumed and hold his forehead between his thumb and forefinger. "Gosh ye nammona hi mila tha Adi ko mere liye.", Maan mummred in anger.


"Sir apne kuchh kha kya?",Geet hear his cribbings for her and felt bad.

"No." He replied harshly and moved towards Adi.

"Geet ready ho gai kya sir?", Adi too waiting for her to come out so they move for their next step.


"Its all your fault Adi. Itna wait toMSK ne aaj tak kisi ka nahi kiya." He fumed badly.


"Ppp par sir hua kya?", he asked meakly.

"Hua kya? Ye item piece tumi ne dhoond k diya hai na jise saree bandhni bhi nahi aati." Maan is showring his frustration on Adi.


Adi scared from his gestures. He tried to cool down him. "Relax sir i will do something."


Adi's words not accepted by him. "What? You gona make her wear saree?" His eyes narrowed and brows knotted. His tone turn hard as he gonna strangle him.


"Nai sir main kaise pehna skta hu. Aa aap rukiye main bas do min me aaya." He quickly ran outside for sake of his life. After few mins he came bach with an old lady. His neighbour mrs. Sharma.

"Kaha hai wo?", dhe enquired about her.


"Aunt idhar", Adi sgowed her the room. She knocked and Geet allowed her inside. She was so worried.


"Dont worry beta main Adi ki beighbour hu. Main apki saree bandh dungi." She saw her tensed and assured her that she will help her.


"Thanks aunt",she smile wide.

She not only help her in wearing saree but also make her ready as a bride. Maan is nervous for the first time. He wants to make things finish as soon as possible. After 20 mins Mrs sharm bring her out.

"Lo Geet aa gai", Adi informed him and Maan turned towards her.

Maan saw her in bridal wear and lost his all sences.




He gazing her angelic beauty which looks more divine in her bridal attaire. His mind cautioned him but eyes betrayed and not to follow the instruction of his concious mind. His heart beat raised. He ignore all the cautions telling him not to stare her like this,but he loose control. Geet came to him and mrs. Sharma stood her besides him.


"Dono made for each other lag rae ho." She simply adored both together. Both flushed. "Adi beta now i am leaving."


"Thank you aunt. Aap nahi aye to Geet pta nahi kaise ready hoti." Adi showed his gratitude.

"Its ok beta." She smiled and left.


"Maan sir main kaisi lag rahi hu?" She is very excited.


Maan cuts the topic before he again lost his senses. "Jaisi kal lag rahi thi. Ab kuchh kaam kar le." Maan said in annoying way and she cursed him in her mouth. "Geet ye contracts k papers hai inhe read karo or sign karo fast." He commands her.

Geet read the papers throughly and signed them. Now all 3 are ready to reach KM.




Precap : Maaneet in KM šŸ˜‰


Note:- pls hit like guys...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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PART - 8



ALL are ready to went KM. Maan asked Geet again to make sure she wont do any mistake there.

'Geet sirf woi bolna jo maine sikhaya hai. No need to use your brain. Waise bhi kam hai.' Maan taunts and she pouts,felt annoyed.

'khadus kahi ke. Pata nahi khud ko kya samjhte hai. Hitler.' she mummered in her mouth.

'sir chale? Waise bhi pta nahi sab kaise react karenge.' Adi cautioned him about their reaction.

'thats why i sending you first. Go and told them about marriage. Then i will came with her.'he instructs him and Adi left.

Adi reached to KM. He was a bit nerveous but couraged as he dont scared of all of them. Dadima love him like her grand child,so he couraged and told them about Maan's marriage. He said in one and go and all's eyes widened with shock. No one is believing on their ears.

'Adi bhaiya apko subah se koi mila nahi kya jo humi se mazak kar rae ho?' Annie mocked.

'right. Waise to bro shadi karna nahi chahte. Or ab yu achanak se wo bhi bina kisi ko btaye not possible.' Dev argued. No one is ready to believe on his words.

'lekin Adi beta jhooth nahi bolte hai. Adi tell me what is going on? Kon hai wo ladki or aaj se pehle kaha thi?' Dadima enquired strongly.

'dadima i dont know anything. Sir ka aaj subah phone aaya tha. Unhone jo mujhse kaha maine aapse aak bta diya.' Adi revealed protecting himself from more questions.

All turn silent. They wont able to trust on this and now waiting for Maan to come and clear their doubts. Everyone is confused and roaming here and there,when after two hours Maan entered in KM with Geet in bridal wear,having garland in their necks. Geet is very nervous. They just about to enter,but Dadima stopped them at the main entrance.

'rukiye Maan. Wahi ruk jaiye.' she commands him.

'dadima i can explain..' Maan defends.

'wo to aap karenge hi. Par usse pehle kuchh rasme zaruri hai. Bhale hi apne shadi chupchap bina hume btaye kar li par hum to apna farz nahi bhul skte na.' Dadima taunts him and showing her anger bit.

Meanwhile Annie came with plate having all goods to welcome new bride. Geet was stunned that how easily they will accept her without creating any drama. Dadima do her rituals and commands Geet to push rice urn and then entered inside. Geet do what she told her to do and came inside with Maan.

All enclosed both and staring them as they are some suspects. 'kya? Why all of you staring us?' Maan irritates and shout.

Dadima came and stare him to shut his mouth. 'Maan beta we all want you to get married but you denied. So what happened now that youget married in so hurry,without informing us?' now she intarrogate him.

Maan start lying. He told them a fake story that he met her in New York four years ago. 'shadi hume isliye karni padi kyunki Geet ki sari property uske Uncle hathiyana chahte the. or Geet k dad k will k according agr wo 24 ki hone se pehle shadi nahi karti hai to use kuchh nahi milega. ab uska mere alwa or koi hai nahi. Isliye Geet ne mujhse baat ki or humne shadi ka decision liya taki Geet ko uski property mill ske. Time bilkul nahi tha isliye sab jaldi me ho gaya. I am sorry dadima.' Maan explained and all genuienly believe on his fake story.

'waise to hum apse bahut naraz the. Or hume bura bhi laga. Kitne sapne the humare apki shadi ko leke. Lekin ab aap itni pyari bahu laye hai,isliye apko maaf kia.' she said with a smile and all too tirn happy as Dadima accept her.

Now its turn of others. Forst they congrulate both and then shower their queries on them.


'bete apne bare me kuchh btaiye.' she asked to Geet.

'ji Geet Handa. Nahi mera matlab hai Geet khurana...' She fummbles and all laughed on her nerveous gestures.

'are beta relax. Hum sab koi monsters to hai nai jo ap itna ghbra rahi hai. Jab aap Maan k sath adjust kar skti hai to hum to sab to normal insaan hai.' dadima trying to make her confortable in this new atmospehere and in pretext of that she made mock of Maan's arrogant and rude behaviour. Hearing her teasing all laughed except both Maan and Geet.

'dadima aap bhi?' Maan annoyed with dadima's words.

'its ok beta itna mazak to chalta hai.' Dadima taking sweet revenge because of their secreat marriage.

'Geet tum veerji se New York me kaha mili thi?' Meera asked suddenly.

'damn it i was forgot to tell her. Use to New York k shehro k naam tak pta nahi honge.' Maan get concious and felt nerveous for the first time,as he was not expecting this question from his family. He open his mouth to cover up Geet but before he said anything Geet replied quickly. She wont even take a sec to answer her.

'ok my turn',Annie jumped in front of her. 'bhabhi ye btao ki propose kisne kiya pehle?' she knotting her brows with a mischievious smile.

'i am sure Geet ne kia hoga.' Dev predects.

'nai Maan veerji ne kia hoga.' Meera objects.

"no its Geet." Dev start arguing.

"Aap dono bas kariye. Geet abi to aai hai or aap sabne use pareshan karna bhi shuru kar diya. Humare khyal se unhe aram karne dena chahiye. Pehle wo thoda comfortable ho jaye firr jo chahe puchh leejiyega." Dadima spoke strongly.


"Nai dadima i am fine." Geet felt little awkward in new atmosphere whereevery eye have a lot of queries and doubt for her.


"Jaiye beta abi orb rasme baki hai relax kar leejiye.", dadima send her with Annie and Meera. They showed her a room and help her to settle her belingings.


"Dadima main office ho ja raha hu." Maan declared.


"Rukiye Maan. Humne apse kuchh kaha nahi it doesnt mean aap har waqt apni manmani karenge. Ab shadi ki hai to use nibhana bhi seekhiye. Apne theek se suna nahi humne Geet se kya kaha? Abhi or rasme baki hai, aap kahi nahi ja rahe hai." Dadima commands him with a dominance. Maan remained fuming and this make Dev and Adi burst in laugh.


Annie and Meera involved her with them easily as all are of good nature and talktive. Both showed her the KM and her room. They also help her in setting her belongings in wardrobe of Maan. They adjust Maan's belongings to make space for her clothes. They talk to each other like they know each other from ages. Dadima summon them and trio came down stair. Dadima told them of another ritual. Meera brought a bowl having a water mixed with milk and put ring in that. She told them to find the ring. Dev and Adi both cheerup for Maan. Seeing this Annie and Meera gave their support to Geet. Both obeyed and start playing. Maan quickly grab the ring to which all boys shouts in rejoice. Geet disappointed because for her its just a game which she wants to win. Geet pouts on loosing the game.


Maan noticed her baby face and his proud of winning vanished same time. "Ek min ek min lets play once again or else girls start crying. Lets give them one more chance." In pretext of showing his attitude,he actually caring for her feeling. He felt weltered seeing her gloomed eyes.

"Nai bro." Dev offence.

"Lets play one more time and i know this time only Bhabhi wins.", Annie was so confident.

"Lets see who win." Dev said proudly.


Dadima again put ring in bowl. Both put their hands once again. Again he found ring easily,but very smartly he pushed towards Geet's side. Geet found it and showed to all. All girls shout loud on her win. Geet grinned and Maan felt solace seeing her happiness.


Boyd dissappointed. "Ok ok dont over react. Game brabri pe khtam hua. Both win one one round


PRECAP: Their happy married life or more problems šŸ˜‰
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago

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