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LOCHA E UlFAT


As the sun rays fall on her serene face she slowly opened her eyes.She stretched her arms and legs and hugged Bunny. Bunny was a very imp part of her life. The only memory of "him". She had made herself strong enough so that now his memories don't bring tears in her eyes. She kissed Bunny who was lying peacefully beside her and then went to the washroom to get ready. She was Aastha-aastha kirlosakar daughter of Mr kirlosakar. She had lost her mother at a very tender age and had no siblings.She was kirlosakar's only child until...until he married some other woman . She was like a typical stepmom-very nice around her husband but mean and evil behind his back. She had a stepbrother Ankit but he loved her like his own sister. Her stepsisters were carbon copies of their mother-mean girls. But Aastha was no cindrella-so she still managed to put her life in place after her father's demise and she did it well.She was popular in college,smart,pretty and had a group of really good friends. Her prized possession was Bunny,her teddy, which was the last gift she received from her father. Though she was not a teddy girl' still she was very attached to it.

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AIOT

AIOT(Agnihotri institue of technology) was a dream college for all aspiring engineers and Aastha had managed to secure a seat for herself thru' her hardwork.As she entered the canteen her friends greeted her with a smile: Varad and Sojal-the lovebirds, Gauri-outspoken and kinda selfish and most fatty,Abhay- a flirt and college stud & Suresh- well ummm...just Suresh.

Sojal: Hey Aatha come na. We were about to play "Truth and Dare"

Aastha: C'mon guys!!! Hum har baar yahi game khelte hain &...

Abhay: & her baar tum truth choose karti ho babes...or shud I say CHICKEN!!!

Aastha: What!! m not a CHICKEN, Mr stud. Okay...let's skip spinning the bottle. I'll start and I choose DARE...she emphasized on the word dare while glaring Parth.

Suresh: Since babes has chosen Dare...

Abhay: Oye sureshl!!! Only I call her babes...So babes kiss the first guy who enters the canteen.

Gaurt: I hope its that chashmish. Maza aayega,vaise bhi he has a huge crush on Aastha...

And all of them started laughing...

Aastha: C'mon guys...don't call him chashmish

Abhay: possessive and all...babes pehle usey kiss to karlo.

Aastha: Abhay just shutup!!!

Varad: Ok guys focus on the dare.

Aastha gave a deadly glare to Abhay and then stood near the canteen entrance. A guy enetered,immersed in his books, writing something on the notebook,probably solving sums. He was wearing black rhimmed spectacles,a collared shirt and pants. He was so immersed in his books that he didn't look where he was heading to and then BANG!!! He bumped into Aastha. She lost her balance & closed her eyes for she knew any minute she'd be lying on the cold hard ground but no...instead she cud feel a firm hand on her waist.

As she opened her eyes all she cud see was a pair of blak eyes, his brows scrunched and face full of concern. Suddenly, out of the blue,drums started beating,violins were playing and she cud actually hear music...

" Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya...(tune)...

Locha-e Loacha-e Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya"

The spectacle guy: Oh my God Aastha!!! Are u fine??? Tumhe lagi to nahi. Tum..Tum...Kahin koi sprain toh nahi pada...

He spoke frantically while she continue to stare ...

Aastha: Shlok, shhh...

And she pecked him on the lips. Shlok was shocked wud be an understatement. Before he cud respond Abhay interrupted...

Abhay: Tumne is nerdy ko seriously kiss kiya. Ab toh ye saari zindagi iske bare mein sochta rahega.

Varad: Shlok, zyada khush mat hona. Yeh sirf ek dare thi

Gauri: C'mon guys don't be so rude to him yaar. Dekho toh, Aastha se takrakar iske specs bhi toot gayi

And the 3 of them started laughing.Shlok was quite...trying to figure out what just happened. He gave a look to Aastha and walked away.

Sojal: C'mon guys!!! Don't be so rude to Shlok. He is such a nice guy.

Varad: Sorry baby

Abhay: But babes, maan gaye tumhe...

But Aastha was not there. She was on the roof staring at Shlok's broken specs and thinking about what happened. She talked to Sojal at the phone about something and then tears started flowing down her brown eyes. Her mind travelled into the past.

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SACRED HEART SCHOOL- 9th GRADE

It was AAstha's first day in that school.She had joined the school in midterm and had no friends.She sat alone during her class hours but felt more lonely during recess- when everybody was chatting,running, having fun and she was sitting alone with her Bunny. Some seniors saw this and snatched it from her. They tore it apart laughing at her while she was crying. A guy of her age, he was probably in her class, came out of nowhere and beat the hell outta this guys, even though he was younger to them. He then forwarded his handkerchief to a crying AAstha...

The guy: hey its ok,they are gone. Plz don't cry. I am not liking it.

AAstha(crying): But they tore my Bunny. The recent gift my father brought for me before going on his tour.

The guy: By the way I am Shlok agnihotri...and I promise ur Bunny will be absolutely fine.

AAstha didn't know how but the next day she saw the Bunny in his hands and it was perfect...as new as always.Her eyes went watery and she hugged Shlok and said"You'll always be my best friend"

Shlok: First u need to promise u won't cry ever again...ever...got it.

Aastha: Yes ShlokI promise...by the way here are ur specs.

:Shlok: Arrey these are the same specs which...

Aastha: Which u were wearing yesterday but got broken during the fight...I didn't want u to get scolding from ur parents so I mended them.

(Shlok smiling at her innocence): Thanks...

The next day news arrived that while returning from Singapore the plane crashed and unfortunately Aastha's father was in that plane. So Bunny became the only memory of Aastha's dad. Shlok was with her the entire day. He took her to his home where his mom made some snacks for her. He consoled her while her family...rather step family was busy in naming all property in their name. She wud have stayed home but Ankit was in UK for studies so he couldn't manage to come quickly. It was Shlok's dad,a lawyer who made sure that aastha got her share...Shlok and his family were very supportive.

It was then when Aastha realized what true love is...

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PRESENT

aastha was feeling terribly bad. She didn't intend to kiss him on lips,it was supposed to be on his cheek. She was cring when she heard a familiar husky voice" You promised me that u won't cry." And he gave his hankerchief to her.

Aastha: Shlok, I am sor...

But before she cud say anything she cud feel his hard lips on her soft ones. When Aastha didn't respond...still trying to figure out what was happening...he bit her lower lip. 'Aasthas hand, which were till now holding his broken spectacles, moved around his neck. Their kiss was in complete coordination-it was perfect.

Shlok: Now its okay,farzi.

Aastha: Oh shutup Chashmish...now I guess we shud tell them.

Shlok: Are u sure...I mean its fine with me if we don't reveal them that we have been dating since 10th grade. I don't want to embarrass u in front of your friends. Its okay with me if we hide our "secret love"

Aastha: Oh c'mon chashmish. We have been hiding for quite sometime.Earlier I was hesitant coz first I wanted to settle in college and make my identity and even u needed time... Ab bas...even I wanna hold ur hand in public and be able to kiss u like varad and sojal

Shlok: Well u already did that...he said with his charming smirk

Aastha: Mr Agnihotri...don't u smirk me. C'mon lets go.

Shlok: I love u, farzi

Aastha: I love u more, chashmish

Saying that she quickly ran towards the canteen followed by Shlok

Shlok(on phone): Hey sojal did u do everything that I told u to do?

Sojal: Ya Shlok..abhay and varad helped me

Shlok: Thanks...I owe u a big one...saying that he cut the call.

Sojal(to herself while looking at the spectacles she bought when Aastha called her earlier): Dono ne ek dusre ko impress karne ka kaam ke liye mujhe phone kar di...duffers...

She said and then smiled.

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As Aashlok reached canteen,song started playing...(tune)

Aastha was in daze while Shlok quickly climbed on one of the tables and started dancing to the song while other students started showering roses on Aastha and red and white balloons cud be seen everywhere...

"Iklauta mera dil tha

Bhola bhala simple tha

Tujhse main takraya,

Sarphira ho gaya"

Aastha was too shocked to even react.Shlok took a bouqet of red roses and gave it to her while singing

"Mujhe pyaar laga jo,

Tujhe laga bhaichara"

Aastha remembered when he propsed to her in 10th grade by giving her a red rose. Her first response was" Yaar Shlok Ankit bhaiya ne bhi mujhe aaj red rose dya tha. Is there some siter's day today?" But later when Shlok told her she was glad that the rose was for someother purpose.

"Arman jo jaage,

main magar so gaya"

Aastha's eyes were filled with tears...she was really really happy. Shlokfrowned when she cried and Aastha mumbled a sorry.He took out his handkerchief again and gave it to his farzi while singing

"Banke museebat

Peeche padi hai,

Yeh comedy hai

Yaan tragedy hai,

Naa hona tha kyun ho gaya..."

Then he bent down on his knees with a bouqet of fresh lilies(Aastha's favourite, she had once told him in 11th grade)

"Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya...(tune)..

Locha-e-ulfae ho gaya..."

aastha was mesmerized by his act. She was even surprised to some extent thinking how cud Shlok do this as he was really reserved..."But he did it for me" she murmured. She ran towards him and tears of joy were flowing down her eyes. She went towards him and said " Locha-e-ulfat mujhe bhi ho gaya hai Shlok " to which he replied"Don't cry farzi,I can't even give u my handkerchief now."

Aastha frowned"kyun??"

"Coz its in ur hands" . he smirked.

"Don't smirk chashmish...vaise tumhare chashme to toot gaye na..." Aastha said

"Don't worry farzi,naye kharid lunga" Shlok replied

"Shutup!!!That's my job" and she handed him the new specs which she had requested sojal to buy while she was on the roof.

Then he held her pretty face in his firm hands and they kissed.Seeing their passionate kiss even sojal and varad started kissind and then Suresh and gauri Abhay the biggest flirt of all saw this and asked a girl standing right next to him"Do u mind?" and who cud refuse him.

So I hope it was a kissing end...I mean a perfect ending. I wonder during all this where was the dean

DO HIT LIKE IF U LIKED THIS OS AS IT ENCOURAGES ME TO WRITE MORE...😊

song credits: 2 states...eagerly waiting for that movie😃

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AlbusDumbeldore thumbnail
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Thanksss😊😳
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Oh yaar, you are an awesome writer.. Loved the os so so so much.. Really i enjoyed reading every bit of this. Do continue writing pls.
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Originally posted by: anu123.

Oh yaar, you are an awesome writer.. Loved the os so so so much.. Really i enjoyed reading every bit of this. Do continue writing pls.

Thanks yaar😆😳
Will continue.
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Aww lovely os..teenage love turnd 4ver relatnshp😳
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Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Aww lovely os..teenage love turnd 4ver relatnshp😳

Agree with you.
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beautiful os ...i loved every bit of it...
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Originally posted by: meerab...

beautiful os ...i loved every bit of it...


thank you so much
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welcome
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Loved the OS. Such a sweet story. BTW what does the title mean? Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

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