Virman Os : An Untold Love Story

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"Swagat nahi kaoge hamara??" 😆😆

yes you all heard it right..!!! im back with an OS Bwahahahahaahha ..don't get scared ...trust me this isn't a crap like all the other ones i wrote...cz this one ...is the one which even i like somewhat..!! 😆 😆

This one was roaming in my head from long backk ..and finally wrote it today ...agreed FF's are there ...i will continue soon pakka promishhh ..!!😳 look at this till then


and im back with and musical OS 😆 😉

Virman Os : An Untold Love Story


You need the song LOVE STORY - Taylor Swift 😉

Moving in the perfect place in this whole world, I smiled, being in his arms. I looked up to look at him and a wide smile crossed my lips. His one glance was enough to make me nuts to the nerves...!! He shifted slightly in his position and looked at me...he smiled. As I clinged more onto him, he whispered into my ears, the three words of eternal bliss, I Love You. I couldn't stop myself from being an idiot to the wits and I smiled so. This is what we longed for more than ages. To be with each other. But we had gone through a lot before this...a journey which was no less than a hell for us. And you, to know this journey properly, have to know An Untold Love Story. As I felt his arms getting wrapped around me I slipped in the world, where our PAST belonged. I was 18 back then...Ohh BTW ...I'm Maanvi.

We were both young when I first saw you.

I close my eyes and the flashback starts:

I'm standing there on a balcony in summer air.

Dad had arranged a party to celebrate his win over the rival..!! I hated to be in such parties where, nothing lasted but, MIND GAMES!! Business plans, fraud, shares... and what not!!! I always hated being cunning, my brain was not made to make any business plans. I stood there at my balcony dressed up in a summer gown, sipping my Pine-colada. Sparing my eyes to all the business matters going on down there, my eyes caught up with something more pleasing. In the crowd present down stairs, all faces which showed up like fox, I saw a face which gleamed in happiness, peace moreover TRUE..!! I definitely couldn't recognize him. May be he was new in town. He saw me and passed a smile with a different glint in his eyes, adding a touch of a smirk. As my Dad called me, I left the balcony and descended down. Argghh, dad and his business partner's son..!! I'm forced to be nice with him. Doesn't he get to know with my behavior that I'm nil interested in knowing how much Porsche's, he owns??? Uhhh god has to be difficult at times...I kinda hate Porsche's after that... I excused myself from him

"Would you mind if I just take 5 minutes, Aryan". Moving around the venue, which was our beach house, I felt that it was completely turned out into a Fancy now..!!! Goshhh why people have to be so over-board in the decorations?? My dad really has loud taste when it comes to this..!! I dipped my legs in the pool and sat at the edge sipping another glass of my Pine-colada. I could hear my dad's staff talking still about BUSINESS..!! I ignored the noise around me ...and tried to cool down in the Hot blowing summer air...!!

See the lights, see the party, the ball gowns.

See you make your way through the crowd

And say, "Hello,"

Little did I know...

I was aimlessly roaming around in the evening party of my dad..!! and again I HATED being here..!! but still I managed to have a enjoyable face. The crowd in front of me reminded of something that I wud never do...PLANS!! LOL ...and just like some Diamond in between the Coal, I saw him for the second time. I smiled ..and he with his same smirk, the last time he had, came to me and greeted me!! And I came to know his name "Virat". We spoke for a while and no wonder he was a good company ..!! and I asked to tell something about him and his reply was something which stunned me. "You really aren't interested in how much Porsche's I own, are you??". I giggled and he continued. "so...that guy seemed quite a bore to you??". We enjoyed a lot in each others company ...or to say I did, cz he was the only one present there, in whom, I could see a person like me... hate all that TRICKs...I hate that BUSINESS world ...it's like ...Aaachooo ...im allergic to it..!! LOLzz

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles,

And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet"

And I was crying on the staircase

Begging you, "Please don't go"

And I said...

Days passed, and we used to be in touch always. And as it was meant to happen, I came to know he was falling for me, or to say already in LOVE with me...!! I couldn't stand on my feet... Arggh ...I meant ..i was on cloud 9 ..!! The moment he said that he loves me, I fainted. But thanks to him..!! who caught me right before I hit my head on the ground.!! The intensity in his eyes at that moment weakened my knees...Ohkk plss stop laughing ...!! I know it's kinda stupid ...but u will not know it until you see the same intensity in someone's eyes, for you and only for YOU..!! the same thing happened here ... *BLUSH* LOL ...!! But as I said ...it ws meant to happen, my dad came to know about it..!! And he didn't want me to be with a guy who is just a little below our status..!!! I mean who caresss ...about STATUS?? He was enough rich, enough rich to keep me happy...But Dad's so called reputation. He wanted some Billionaire, coming in a Rolls Royce, but he didn't think about me..!! I wanted a plain Prince-Charming to come on a simple white horse..!! Dad tried his best to separate our ways...and one day Dad clearly warned him to stay away from me or he would forget that I was his daughter...and insulted virat for not being a Billionaire and instead just a enough Rich guy who cudn't handle the bills of me who was raised with utmost concern...or whatever crapp you call ittt !!! I was not aware about a thing ..i didn't knw dad went and insulted him...and as he loved me to the core he didn't want me, to get treated badly by my own Dad..!! He decided to leave me...and this decision of him, took out the wits in me!! I cudn't believe that HE could cheat on me..!! but I knew he was lying..!! when I got to know the truth ...i told him not to leave me ...as my dad wouldn't do anything wrong to me, as he loved me very much ..!! and his reply again made me tremble "I can't take chance with you.."

Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.

I'll be waiting; all that's left to do is run.

You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess,

It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."

And my love for him was no less than his..!! I was ready to leave my dad for him ...i suggested him that we would run away somewhere ...we both would be safe !! we would start Freshh!! But he didn't agree upon this...he didn't want "US" to start with a runaway..!! I kept on forcing him ...but he was a tough nut to crack...

So I sneak out to the garden to see you.

We keep quiet 'cause we're dead if they knew

So close your eyes... escape this town for a little while.

Oh, oh.

'Cause you were Romeo - I was a scarlet letter,

And my daddy said, "Stay away from Juliet."

But you were everything to me,

I was begging you, "Please don't go."

And I said...

Romeo, take me somewhere we can be alone.

I'll be waiting; all that's left to do is run.

You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess.

It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."

Days passed. I hadn't seen him in a while. And dad thought that we no more were together. One night I received a Text from him saying "Waiting down"...I sneaked out in my night wear silently to meet him.and there he was sitting at a bench near by. I sat beside him, still silent. Words didn't agree upon coming out. If anyone around saw us together here, at this hour..then dad would MURDER him right away ..!! I closed my eyes took a deep breath, keeping my hand on his, and he muttered " I have to go" I looked at him being horrified...he was leaving me ?? no he can't do this..!! he was going abroad...tears made their way on my cheeks and he said wiping them " I have to go for "us" I will be back better..!! trust me.." he kissed my forehead and once again I said him that I would even come with him and we wud stay happy ...he was still stubborn on it and "Please don't go" escaped my mouth. "I have to.." and he left me in the shivers of cold weather, on a park bench. His last image, cudn't sulk into my brain and before it could...he had escaped in the morning fog of Goa.

Romeo, save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel.

This love is difficult but it's real.

Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of this mess.

It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."

Oh, oh.

It's been two years now, and I'm 20...!! But that night is still fresh in my mind...i can still remember it playing it in front my closed eyes...!! I still miss him...miss him to the core. Shed tears on my pillow, but I'm still strong in belief that he would return stronger than ever, just for me...!! It was difficult for me...this LOVE was difficult for us...!! We were not in contact...not even a miss call..!! I tried calling him ...messaging him ...mailed him. Tried all the ways in which I cud contact him..!! but he never received any of my calls, it always went on voice mail...never replied to my messages..!! but I trusted him...! I thought he must be busy with his work ...to make "us" possible..!! And dad here and started another chapter for me...!! Aryan ...!! He wanted me and Aryan to be together...!! And here again comes the MIND GAME..!! Aryan's dad's empire was like a treasure hidden in the sea..!! and my dad..!! arghhh ...sumtimes I just doubt that I'm his blood..??!! cz ; ...until now you must have known ..i hate it..!!! Dad wanted me to feel something towards Aryan which, I could feel only for one person..!! Virat...! They were forcing me...into it !! I wish my mom was here with me today ...but...! And at those times...I missed him terribly...i wanted a hug from him..!! just a hug...which would drain all the sorrows out of me..!! I missed being his arms...and I use to substitute his arms with pillow, soaking my tears..!!

I got tired of waiting

Wondering if you were ever coming around.

My faith in you was fading

It's been 6 years past that I was 20, and I'm 26 now. My faith in virat was dying..!! I started to feel that he would never come. I thought, how more silly I could be ??? it's been past 8 years...and I still think that he would even remember me?? I started giving up upon him. After all; after some time your faith fades for sure...!! I still remembered his face ..young, charming ...a complete chocolate boy..!! but back then he was 20..!!! I brushed my thoughts ...after all I was trying to move on..!! And I started preparing myself for a better life..!! I decided I would join my dad in his business...Goshhh his love has made me chose something which I hate..!! but right now it was the only way to forget him I guess...i had made up my mind that I was just wasting my time and he wud neva come back to me, moreover he wud have forgotten me and right now would be in some weekend house of his with his children!!!...but it wasn't that easy for me to forget him ...!! and when one day I was letting my tears soak in the pillows ...my dad barges in my room and informs me that he has a meeting with one of the most renowned businessman in the country who is back from abroad, and that tomorrow he would leave early to office for the preparation and informed me to be dressed well and prepare for the presentation ...just to crack a deal and sign it with him...I nodded and he left... I hit my forehead seeing him boasting so much about that guy ...I just hoped that he doesn't want me to be behind this new idiot...impressing him all the way for dad's bloody business...!! And the next moment my thought flew again towards him...! And when I was laying my head on the head board of the bed and staring at the ceiling...with tears glistening up in my eyes my phone beeped...i saw and I cudn't believe what I ws seeing...!! It was from him ...I rubbed my eyes in astonishment to clear my vision if I was seeing right..!! "Meet me now. Outskirts of the town, same place we used to meet." I geared up and ...rushed towards my car. But I bumped on dad...!! Ooopsy..!! I excused myself saying ... "Reenal wants to meet me...!! Bye dad...!"

When I met you on the outskirts of town.

I reached at the spot. Moon light was spreading all over...shivers were running down my spine..!! He stood there, back-facing me..!! he had indeed grown tall...broad...and maybe more handsome. I cudn't see his face. I cleared my throat ...to make him notice that I was standing there...he turned ...and goshh the ground slipped below my feet..! the chocolate boy look on his face had gone and he now looked devilishly handsome..!! he had changed a lott...that for a moment I cudn't recognize him...but still he had that charm on his face... he smiled seeing me...and took a step towards me..!! I tried to take a step towards him too ..but I was already weak on my knees seeing him and tripped, and I was straight in his arms...!! Argghhh this moment cudn't have been more awkward..!! I looked at him and smiled awkwardly...!! He made me stand again on feet..and kissed on my forehead and mumbled with a smirk "glad to know ...that I still have same effect on you...You have grown more beautiful in years" I rather didn't have any other option than to blush like a idiot...and even if I had I would rather choose to blush, at this moment..!! but the next moment all those flashback came into my mind...!! Those years when I was left alone and all those times I cried on the pillows...!! And I burst out on him...

And I said...

"Romeo, save me, I've been feeling so alone.

I keep waiting for you but you never come.

Is this in my head? I don't know what to think."

He knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and said...

I started blaming him for all those years...!! I hit him twice or thrice...but there was no effect on him but on my hands ..!! Arghhh he was tough ..!! he held my hands hushed me ...and kissed my forehead ..and whispered " it was all for "today"... all for "us" to happen and today no one can stop "us" to happen..!!". and the next moment I felt him moving his hand in his pocket and he knelt to the ground...and opened the box. And I was yet again weak on my knees...there lied a Ring inside...!! I smiled through my tears...

"Marry me, Juliet, you'll never have to be alone.

I love you, and that's all I really know.

I talked to your dad - go pick out a white dress

It's a love story, baby, just say, "Yes."

And he continued... " Marry me. I promise after today you will never be alone...!! I would be always there to irritate you...I love you ...and I don't care what world thinks about it...but you're mine..!! I talked to your dad (my brows furrowed) ..just start preparing for your wedding dress (he winked) ...and you really gotta say a YES..!! nothing else..!!" and he smiled... And I couldn't control more ...I burst into tears..and I nodded my head with a dumb smile playing on my lips...!! And he slipped the ring into my finger...and pulled me onto his lap, as he was kneeling to the ground. Wiping my tears, he kissed my forehead ...and looked deeply in my eyes...we were staring for moments...and god knows how, we ended up kissing each other ...all the blood in my body rushed to my cheeks making them harddd red...!!! When he saw me blushing this hard...all he said was "maybe next time I have to be more alert on when to kiss you...!!" and this made me more blushhh ...!! And after sometime I left from there...Next day I left early on office to help dad...with his meeting and prepare a final presentation...and at the correct time I descended the office building to welcome the *New Idiot*... his car approached and my mouth flung open...Porsche ??!! ...ok I can handle that Porsche...but wait ..the person I saw, who stepped out of Porsche , how cud I handle him ??? he was way too hot to handle...guyzz chiloofy ...im not checking out any other guy ...he was my virat..!! he stepped out it and looked in my direction...and smirked...and goshhh his smirk was still the same..!! I was standing there being dumb found...!! He came near me, himself took the bouquet in my hand and kissed my forehead saying "4
Porsche's, love..!!" I giggled and said "what the heck your gonna do of so many?? Pickle them??" he replied "nope... keep it for my children" with a smirk ..his eyes stuck at me..!! it was making me weak again ..and he whispered... "you are not fainting yet again, are you??" and I nodded in negative...with a nervous smile!! He smirked and we walked inside the office building...and while the walk ..all the pieces were falling into it's place...!! Dad is definitely impressed by virat...and he wants me to impress him now..!! and for the first time I didn't mind my dad's choice ...I giggled in my thoughts. I'm definitely gonna put my 100% in impressing him now...LOLzz

And today...I walked the Church, with my dad being probably the most happiest person...i had a big smile plastered on my face cz it was the right person standing in front of me ..waiting or me to be his..!! Virat...I closed my eyes and took a deep breath and kept my hand on his...after all that I lay in his arms now...today our dream came true ..which we had longed for ..!! almost 9 years...we had been struggling our fate..and finally we win today ..!! and all thanks to him ...!! But I think still some pieces are loose ryt ?? hmm so let me clear them also ...Virat was attracted towards me ...from the very start ..the moment he saw me...when I was standing on the balcony...and moreover that day he had been following me ...when Aryan was talking about his Porsche's ...and he must have studied my body language ...and noticed that im not interested ..and then when we met second time...he chuckled me up with the line of Porsche...!! Later one is, why he left abroad...he left cz he wanted to be strong enough to show Dad that he is worth of me..!! when dad insulted him for not being enough rich to fulfill my needs...he swore that... one day ..he would make himself worth to fulfill my needs ...more than I actually needed..!! and one day he got an opportunity Abroad ...and it was the best way to make himself worth ...and he grabbed it...though the cost was leaving me behind he stayed strong ..just to return stronger than ever...!! And about why he didn't pick my calls, replied to messages or mails...was tht...he didn't want himself to fall weak on his mission thinking about me..!! if he would have picked up ..then he would have felt the urge to see me ..or be with me...and he didn't want that. After all, whatever he did was only for me..!! and the surprise for me was ...when a month ago I was using his laptop to transfer some files ...I found all my messages...mails ...voice messages ..saved in it..!! and before I could turn to Virat and ask him ...he wrapped his arms around me and said... "I have read and heard them all...these were the things that gave me strength ...to be away from you ...only to be so close to you today" he said nuzzling my neck... and about dad...Godd...i can't believe ...he has finally left his MIND GAMES...he has completely changed after meeting him...and that is the effect I would say LOL ...Dad agreed without a small hesitation when virat said that he wanted to marry me...and I cudn't have been any happier...Dad had no clue that he was the same guy ...from whom he was pushing me far from years back ...!! And how would he ?? Virat had changed a lot ...

I shifted in my position and I heard an opposing voice...he kissed my cheek and I looked up at him ..and I whispered "I Love You" and he whispered with a smirk ... " doesn't matter ...I Love You more..!!" ...and as I closed my eyes I clinged more onto him with a smile on my face realizing that ...I had slept dreaming about how we exactly reached here from back then, when we were young..!!

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh.

Cause we were both young when I first saw you.

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ok do tell me how was it ??? BAD or WORSE cz i already said craziness ka NATEEJA ..!! 😉😆 waiting for your response... 😳 chappals...eggs jo phenka hai phenko ...mere tak toh kuch pahunchega bhi nahi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wheeps wheeps..!! I am the first to comment 🤪 It has been a while since I've read some OS's on VirMan. Coming to ur OS, it was too good. The story was really nice. It was cute & lovely. Loved this OS. Ti loved the way you portrayed their feelings so well and into this song. Please do write more. Take care! ⭐️
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already ressy 😲 😆😆😆😆😆
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tune bhi resssy 😲 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww that was one cute os..it was so beautifully written lavanya..great work!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic OS!!!
Loved it...n d journey..simply amazing n thanks for the PM!!!
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Superb
too good
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really a swoesme woek...
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AMAZING..
Just loved...
Virman where sepreate for 8 years...
But finally they are back toghter..
Aaggghhh Manvi dad is soo stupid he only plays MIND GAMES...
Just love this OS..
Thanks for the PM...
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awsummm dear really loved it 😊
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after a long time read an os with a happy ending ;) thanku in ur daily soaps u give us a treat of tele films which are refreshing STAY blessed love u

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