FF - Ragna Love (On Hold Pg 18)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi...im sorry abt that...here is a small ff that i wrote pls tell me if i should cont it ...it takes takes place after kalpana finishes boarding school...

Characters

kalpana jadav - a beautiful young woman who wishes that her mom will love her as she loves pakhi...she fulfils her moms dream but loses hope of her mom loving her as well...loves raghav and will do anything for him...loves avi ma and dev baba very much ...

raghav singhania - a rich young handsome business man ...hates the kapoors and wants to take revenge against them in anyway possible...loves kalpi with all his heart ...hates seeing her sad and does anything for her

sammy - business partner,best friend and sometimes a guide of raghav...and also dada for kalpi.

avi maa (anvita kaur )- wife of dev kaur ...a sophisticated woman who meets kalpi in the boarding school ...and as she doesn't have kids of her own ...thinks kalpi to be hers ...(clarified later i the story) and loves kalpi very much

dev baba (dev kaur) - the owner of kaur industries ...loves kalpana just like his wife as kalpi brought the happiness of his wife back...mentors kalpi whenever she needs ...she is the daughter he never had and wants her to be the ceo of his company in future

pakhi kapoor - loves kamala ma very much ...stubborn and wants attention of her kamala ma all the time and has a crush on raghav ...she is very immature, loving,,full of life and wants everything she desires

kamala ma - a maid ...who loves her family very much ...especially her 2 daughter kalpana (even though she doesn't show it) and pakhi baby for whom she ll do anything...she has a dream to make her daughter a memsaab ...so she tells her daughter to study hard but at the same time she spoils pakhi and gives her all the attentions not realizing the distances she caused between her and kalpana

vital - a loving father and husband ...who supports his wife in every decision she takes ...even when she decided to put his rajkumari in hostel

pakhya- a aspiring engineer and loving brother ...even though he is an engineer he cannot find a job...loves his family

prem kapoor - rich arrogant guy ...works for his fathers company ...hates raghav ...loves his mom

sahil kapoor - greedy businessman ...killed raghavs dad ...

neetu kapoor -proud of her money ...looks only at people with class...hates kamala bai as she distanced pokhi from her

Index
Character sketch - above
ch 1 - Below
ch 2 - pg 2
ch 3 - pg 3
ch 4 a - pg 6
PROMO - PG 10
Ch 4b - pg 12
New characters - Pg 13
Ch 5 - Pg 14
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi.. Diya.. this post is not related to Ek Mutthi Asmaan...
What U can do about this, is PM the writer and request them...

Instead of visiting forums and askin for the same..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Hi.. Diya.. this post is not related to Ek Mutthi Asmaan...
What U can do about this, is PM the writer and request them...

Instead of visiting forums and askin for the same..


i tried but it didnt work thats why i had to pst in the forums ...im sorry if i offended u ...😭
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Originally posted by: dashyrocks


i tried but it didnt work thats why i had to pst in the forums ...im sorry if i offended u ...😭



it''s not offending, it's regarding forum rules. Those members maybe inactive now, and may not be visiting the forums anymore.. posting in different forums may not help u either.. Such posts can also be considered as spams.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shahsb_26



it''s not offending, it's regarding forum rules. Those members maybe inactive now, and may not be visiting the forums anymore.. posting in different forums may not help u either.. Such posts can also be considered as spams.. 😳


ok 😲 im sorry ...i didnt know ...forgive me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter one
kaur house after kalpi's exam result releases and she realizes she is second in the country...
kalpi - avi ma ...bas bhi kijiye kitna kilayege ...mujhe mota nahi ban na hain
avi ma- chup ker pagli ...aaj mein bahut kuch hoon...i am so proud of you...
dev baba - aur nahi to kya ...aaj kushi ka din hai ...u have come 2nd in the country im proud of u beta
kalpi - thanks dad...im very happy too
dev baba - have u called ur aai and baba and informed them abt ur decision to go abroad for college and the scholarship u have won ...
kalpi - not yet dad ...im scared what if they dont allow
avi ma - of course they allow sweetie ...they love you and tumhari kushi mein uki kushi hai...
kalpi - alright ill give them a call

kalpi picks up the phone and calls her aai ...its been a while she talked to her Real family...she still remembers the first time she met avi ma at the hostel

Flashback
one month after she joined the boarding school

kalpi sat there on the swing holding a pic of her aai and baba and softly crying...

thats when a woman wearing a beautiful saree comes and sits near her and says

bacha ,why are u crying ? is something wrong mujhe batao na ?????????

kalpi looks at her and feels such a weird connection to her and starts sobbing more
that woman - its ok bacha dont cry ...and comforts her ...hi bacha ...i am anvita kaur ...whats ur name bacha ?

kalpi sobbingly says - kalpana jadav...

anvita - now bacha tell me why ure crying...

kalpi feeling somewhat connected to anvita tells her everything...abt her family ,abt how hr aai loves pakhi more ...abt how they sent to boarding school to became a memsaab...after she finishes telling anvita she feels a little relieved as if a weight had been lifted off her shoulder...

anvita is shocked to hear all this here she wanted so badly to have child and here kalpana 's mother distanced herself from kalpana ...anvita was not against boarding school but felt angered by kalpana's mom...when anvita had first seen kalpana sitting on the swing alone she had asked the warden about her..seeing that anvita was one the members of the school board she had told abt kalpana as much as she knew .The warden had also told her that kalpana had not made any friends and always stayed alone...anvita also feeling a strange connection had come near kalpana and sat next to her.

Anvita smiled at kalpi and said - its ok bacha ...now that ure here ...ure going to have lots of fun

kalpana - fun ?????

anvita - yes fun ...like playing games ,music,dance anything u want

kalpana - but i dont know any of that ...how can i...(feeling uncertain)

anvita - ohh thats ok bacha ill teach u ...

slowly slowly anvita and kalpana started to bond ...anvita taught kalpana to have fun and make friends ...over the few weeks both anvita and kalpana boded really well ...anvita made kalpana into a fun loving as well as a hard working child...she even introduced kalpana to her husband dev ...they both loved kalpana very much and kalpana loved them too

flashback ends

over the years while still at the hostel she found amazing friends and got the love of parents from anvi ma and dev dad...kamala ma never once called her or came to visit her ...she had often talked to her baba but he also had never come even once to see her...but soon she got used to it and so what if her real parents never came ...she always had anvi ma and dev dad with her ...they always came to her every function and always supported her ...even during the vacations she stayed with them at their house ...she was the daughter they never had ...they were the reason she had come so far in life and had come 2nd in her 12 th board exams... thought kalpi

at the same time on the receiver someone said - hello ...koi hai ???
she recognized that voice as her pakya dada
kalpi - hello dada mein kalpi bol rahi hoon...
pakya - kalpi...tu...congrats aaj tune sab ko kush ker diya ...im so proud of u...
tabhi...pakya mujhe phone dena ...and he gives the phone
kamala - kalpi...
kalpana has tears in her eyes after so many years she is speaking to her aai
kalpi- haan aai ...
kamala - bahut kush hain aaj beta ...tune aaj apni aai ko bahut kush kiya hai...
kalpi - thank you aai...
before she could say something else kamala ma - ley baba se baat ker
kalpana felt sad...but smiles again when she hears her baba speak
vital - meri rajkumari...kaisi hai ? aur bata kab mein aur teri aai aye tujhe lene...
kalpana takes a deep breath and says - mein thik hoon baba aur mere ane ke bare mein hi aap se baat karni thi...dada ko ek min phone dijiye
vital gives the phone to pakya
dada - haan bol
kalpi - dada phone ka speaker phone on kijiye pls mujhe aap sab se baat karni hai
pakya ons the speaker phone and says haan kalpi bol aai aur baba sune rahe hai
kalpi- aai , baba mujhe ek college ne scholarship diya hai...
kamala - yeh toh achi baat hai beta ...
kalpi - haan achi baat toh hai ...but yeh college abroad hai aur kal hi mujhe nikalna hoga
pakya - kya...
kalpi - haan dada ...yeh ek achi college hai aur agar meine yaha se graduation ki toh mujhe ek achi naukari milegi...
kamala - kalpi...
kalpi- pls aai maan jaiyena pls ...mein apka sapna poora karne walliyu ...pls aai
baba - per rajakumari ...videsh kyun humari apni desh mein ache college hain vaha ker lena
kalpi - ache college hain per best nahi aur phir college mere liye sab kuch provide ker raha hai so pls baba
kamala - thik hai bete ...
kalpi - thank uuu...aai ab mujhe jana hai bye...
kamala - bye beta

ok guys im ending the chapter here...pls forgive me if there are any mistakes ...this is my first ss so please forgive me...and pls dont forget to comment and like my post ...
will update ch 2 soon
byeee😊

Edited by dashyrocks - 11 years ago
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amazing ss yaar

update chapter 2 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guys ..im sorry this is a small chapter ...so forgive me

ch 2

the minute Kalpana ends the call she is very excited ...she runs to the kitchen and hugs her avi ma

anvi ma - are kya huya tu itni kush ...aai ne tujhe permission de di na...

kalpi - her baar apko kya se pata hota ki mein kya bole ne waliyu...

Anvi ma - tere her aahat ko jaan thi hoon mein and now come on lets go tell this good new to ur dad

They both go to the hall where dev is reading a newspaper ...

Kalpi - daddd...screams kalpi

Dev- are kya huya ...kya huya ????

Kalpi- mujhe permission mill gayi ...

Dev - yay...now this is what I call a superb news

And then he comes and hugs her and kalpi hugs him back...

Dev - come on we have got lots of things to do before we leave tmrw

Kalpi - we???????

Anvi ma - of course we ...hum bhi tere sath aarahe hain...once u re settled there we ll come back

Kalpi- but dad what abt ur office ...

Dev- kalpi ...im the boss ,I can take some days of leave na bachaaa

He said in a teasing tone and all of them stated laughing

Anvi- now come on we are going shopping

Kalpi - but maa...

Anvi - no buts and its we are going shopping

Kalpi looked at her dad with a puppy dog face

Dev- sorry kiddo u are on ur own on this one..

She stared at him with a betrayal look

And seeing her like that he started laughing...

Anvi - come on lets go kalpi

And they both left

At the mall

Kalpi - mom enough ...im tired ..its been 2 hours since we came here...

Anvi - so what u re going to new york u need all this...emphasizing a little too hard on this

Kalpi - mom...

Anvi - ok fine lets go back home

They both returned home and dev looked at them in disbelief ...they had more than thirty bags with them ...but stayed quiet as he knew what would happen if he didn't

.they all packed their luggage and had their dinner ...later went to their rooms and feel asleep


next day

dev - come on guys, we are late...

Anvi - we are not late we are fashionably early ...and its not like our jet is going anywhere

Kalpi - dad ma chale pls...

Dev - haan chalo


Private airport

They reached the private airport and then took their jet to new york...once they reach ew york ...kalpi calls her aai and informs her that she has reached new york...

Edited by dashyrocks - 11 years ago
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Itz awesum...
plzz continue soon... :)
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thank you everybody for ur lovely comments...
ch 3
They all reached the hotel and got settled in their respective rooms ...kalpana was thinking about the moments that had passed between her ad raghav when they were kids...she still had the pen and the abacus that he had gifted her ...that pen was her lucky and favorite pen she always took it everywhere she went ...she was also very excited about her first day of college ...avi ma and dev dad had decided that she will stay in an apartment outside the college campus .the apartment was owned by dev dad's company and had all the facilities she could wish for .she was very happy to have such amazing and caring godparents ...she rolled and turned trying to get some sleep but alas it was of no use ...she could not sleep.
she was not the only one who couldn't sleep ...here on the other side of new york ...in a posh apartment laid a young handsome man who couldn't sleep either ...he turned and rolled but he could not sleep...so he laid there thought of the 2 things that mattered most in life ...firstly his revenge against the greedy kapoors who snatched his father business and then killed his kind hearted father and secondly kalpi...his kalpana ...even today after so many years she could still bring a smile on face when no one could . he laid there thinking about her...he wondered how she was ...if she was okay ..if she was happy ...if she was still the stubborn girl he remembered her to be...not being able to bear the pain of separation he got out of bed and went to the hall ...thinking thats perhaps he could catch up on some work ...
Sitting on the couch with his laptop on his lap he tried to finish the presentation that had to be shown to one of his clients the day after tmrw thats when he some noise and turned back to see his friend sammy walking down the stairs
and he said " couldnt sleep?"
"well unlike u raghav i am neither an insomniac nor a workaholic ...i was thirsty so i came to drink some water "...he said while pouring himself some water and drinking..hearing this statement raghav just smiled ...having being used to his friend 's antics
"so anyway ...what are doing in the middle of the night " sammy said while coming and sitting down next to him."preparing the presentation for the day aftr tmrw ..."said raghav
"preparing the presentation ...acha chal dekha mujhe bhi toh dekhene de ki kitna acha presentation banaya tune "he said knowing very well that his friend was lying and who his friend was thinking abt
raghav - "no its okay ...its not finished yet so..."
sammy smiled and said - kise juth bole ne ki koshish ker ra hai ...i have known u since the boarding school days ...come on raghav ...mein achi tarah jaan tha hoon ki tuh kalpana ke bare mein soch raha tha and thats why tune presentation mein sirf ek shab ko das bar repeat kiya hai
raghav looks at the computer and sees that he had actually repeated one word numerous times and sighs ...
-----------------------------------------will be continued soon----------------------------
Edited by dashyrocks - 11 years ago

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