arjun-bhavri fan fiction

plz read my first and new fan fiction of arjun and bhavri
episode 1-
bhavri aur arjun ki shaadi ko 5 months pure hote hai.baisa sochti hai ki bhavri ko abhi tak baccha kyun nahin hua?
baisa mansvi ke room mein jati hai
baisa:mansvi main soch rehi thi ki arjun-bhoomi ke shaadi ko 5 mahine pure ho gaye.lekin abhi tak unhe koi baccha nahin
mansvi:baisa shayad humein is baarien mein bhoomi se baat kerni chahiye
baisa:ha.sahi keha tumne.chalo abhi chalker bhoomi ko is barien mein poochte hai
mansvi and baisa bhoomika ke room mein jate hai and darwaja bajate hai.
bhoomi tab apna bed think ker rehi hoti hai aur arjun abhi tak soya hota hai per sofe per.
yeh dekhker mansvi aur baisa shock ho jate hai
baisa:bhoomi kya tum mein aur arjun mein koi jhagda hua tha raat mein?
bhoomi:nahin to
mansvi:phir tum dono separate kyun soye the?
bhoomi kuch nahin kehti
baisa:kya tum ne aur arjun ne pati-patnika rishta hi nahin joda?
bhoomi(sad voice):woh to mujhe apni patni hi nahin manta
baisa and mansvi:kya?
mansvi:main is barien mein arjun se baat keroongi
tabhi arjun uth jata hai aur mansvi bhabhi and baisa ko dekhker kehta hai:aap log itni subah yeha
baisa:arjun yeh sab kya hai?
arjun:kya?aap log kis barien mein baat ker rahe hai?
mansvi:hum tum dono ke rishte ke barien mein baat ker rahe hai
arjun:main us barien mein baat nahin kerna chahta
mansvi:kyun nahin ker sakte?tum bhoomi ko apni patni nahin mante na?
arjun:nahin yeh juth hai.balki sach to yeh hai ki,i love bhavri😳
baisa:to phir isi liye tum aur bhavri alag soye the
arjun:main derta tha ki kehin bhavri mujhse door na chali jaye
bhoomi:nahin arjun.main tumse kabhi door nahin jaoongi
baisa(happy):to bas main abhi jald se jald mere pote ka chehra dekhna chahti hoon.
arjun aur bhavri😳 sharmate hai.

main abhi next part kal likhoongi.lekin next part bahot romantic hai.

next part-
IN NIGHT
bhoomi aur arjun dinner kerke apne kamre mein aate hai.
bhoomi apne baal khule chod deti hai.
arjun:pata hai bhavri khule balon mein tum kitni khoobsurat
lagti hon?
bhavri:sacchi?
arjun bhavri ka haath pakadker use apne pass khichker bolta hai:ha
woh uske kareeb jata hai aur kareeb jata hai aur uske galon per kiss kerta hai.
bhavri:arjun...yeh tum kya ker rahe ho?
arjun bhavri ko bed pe letata hai aur use kiss kerta hai.
bhavri(ghabraker):arjun...please
woh bed se uth jati hai.lekin arjun uska haath pakad leta
hai.bhavri wapas arjun ke pass aaker baithti hai.
background music play hota hai-chupke se(saathiya)
chupke se raat ki chaadar tale
arjun bhavri ke chehre per ke baal dur ker ke use kiss kerta hai.
dheere dheere light off ho jati hai.
gana abhi bhi play hota hai.
chupke se raat ki chadar tale
chand ki aahat no ho,baadal ke peeche chale

age ka part main kal likhoongi.kaisa laga fan fiction ka dusra part?

i think its very nice..plz do continue..😊 👏

next part-
NEXT MORNING
subah jab bhavri uthati hai tab use ultiyan shuru ho jati hai.arjun jaldi se doctor ko bulata hai.
doctor bhavri ko check kerneke baad batate hai ki,bhoomika goenka is pregnant.
arjun bahut khush ho jata hai.sab log bhi bahut khush ho jate hai.
per shefali bahut gussa ho jati hai.
baisa:lagta hai ab main apne pote ka chehra dekh paoongi
mansvi:badhai ho bhoomi
shakuntala:tumne to humara sapna hi sach ker diya
sab logo ke chale jane ke baad arjun bhoomika ke pass aata hai aur use apne bahon mein bhar leta hai.
arjun:aaj main bahut khush hoon bhavri
bhavri ek pyaari si smile deti hai.
arjun:lekin ab tumhe bas rest hi kerni chahiye
bhavri:per arjun mein...
arjun:bhavri mein kuch nahin sunna chahta tum abhi kaam nahin kerogi.
bhavri:thik hai baba nahin keroongi ab aap khush arjun ji?
arjun aur khush hota hai.
SHEFALI(KHUD KE ROOM MEIN)
shefali(sochti hai):mujhe abhi kuch na kuch kerna hi hoga bhoomika rani aur uske bacche ka.agar main uske bacche ko
hi is duniya mein na rehne doo to
shefali ke chehre per evil smile aati hai.
Next part kal likhoongi.guys bhoomika ke bacche ke liye pray ki jiye.shefali age kya kerti hai yeh main kal bataoongi.
anyways tell me ki yeh part aapko kaisa laga?

TEESRA MAHINA
shefali bhoomika ke bacche ko marneka plan tayar ker chuki hoti hai.woh bhoomika ki room mein jake use kehti hai,bhoomi tumhe baisa bula rehi hai neeche.
bhoomika:accha thik hai bhabhi.main jati hoon.
bhoomika ke pehle hi mansvi weha pahuch jati hai.aur woh baisa ke kamre ke darwaje per hi gir jati hai.sab gharwale uske charon aur ikattha ho jate hai.
doctor ko bulaya jata hai.
doctor:ab inki tabiyat thik hai.
baisa:shukra hai bhagwan ka.per mansvi beta yeh sab hua kaise?
mansvi:baisa,main apse bhoomi ke bacche ke barien mein baat kerne aa rehi thi tabhi main darwaje per tel jaise cheez per se giri.
baisa:tel jaise cheez per?
mansvi:ha baisa.pata nahin us derwaje ke baher tel kaise pada tha?
shefali(ghabra jati hai):ab aap log chodiye bhi is baat ko.mansvi bhabhi ko aaram ki jarurat hai.
phir sab log mansvi ko rest kerne ke liye chod ker apne kamre mein lautate hai.
shefali apne fail hue plan se dukhi ho ker sochti hai:maine bhoomika ko giraneka plan banaya tha.phir mansvi weha keha se tapak padi.thank god ki tel ki baat yehi rook gayi werna sab ko pata chal jata ki woh tel maine bhoomika ko girane ke liye dala tha.ab to mujhe bhoomika ko marna hi padega.
shefali apna dusra dangerous plan banati hai.
waha bhoomika baisa se poochti hai ki,kya baisa ne use bulaya tha?
baisa:nahin to
bhoomi is shocked.use lagta hai ki kehi woh tel use girane ke liye to nahin dala hoga.per bhoomika samajh nahin pati ki yeh sab kaun kerta
hai?
guys kaisa laga mera fan fiction?

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