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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing OS. Though initially I was confused as who is speaking about what to whom? But it all got cleared gradually and later your note cleared everything. About Parth and Arpita, I think we all have same feeling Vardhaan Niharika Part 2.

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Anjali

@yoyoanjali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i thought arpita was dead!!!!
didt parth see the sky!!!!!!!!

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

this is beautiful.. absolute beautiful.. m speechless.

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I was very pissed when he told Arpita was dead 🤔😵 Okay man :| I don't care if you can't find the appropriate casting or you want to make him sweet and caring but non-platonic by keeping a sideline non-existent love, but NO DEAD PEOPLE! 👎🏼

I love this so much 🤗 It wasn't really hard to follow (once it was clear Sanyukta wasn't the one eating the sundried tomato sandwich .. ) and I loved the modifications you made in the scenario Arpita's dialogues - kudos man! ⭐️

No comments on the pregnant couple, which is though, really, quiet interesting considering .. 😳

P.S. The word is 'tacenda' which means things better left unsaid (i have a terrible memory but 😛) which I guess is what the end is like ..

Edited by themockingblue. - 11 years ago