Arhi OS: Paralyzed

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hain stalker arnie
wow she sure got him pretty well
read him just perfectly too
whats her story does it matter in the end
hell no

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happypeace

@happypeace

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

god this was beautiful!! so subtle yet so serene!
TFIOS trailer was something else! loved your OS!

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Skyfall

@Skyfall

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Absolutely beautiful OS.

You managed to convey their emotions so brilliantly.

I love the way you have written this.

😃

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This was beautiful and it so beautifully broke my heart.

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

This was so incredibly beautiful :') Loved the soft play of emotions here 😳 I love how you hinted about Khushi's paralysis without actually putting it up in there. Great OS!

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

beautiful bt its too short

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hey wonderful piece
why is khushi crying
love this cute shy arnav
ya we never knew how arnav would look like in ipkknd
and if his father would not betray his family and his mom wound not die
wounderful

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow such a moving OS
So Arnav was admiring khushi from afar n just plucked up the courage to talk to her
Oh god poor khushi was paralysed ...that's why she was always sitting n sad ...loved how he cared her at end
Also Loved how she knew he was watching her all along n how he felt for her
Aww n how sweet a mess was Arnav when he finally spoke to her with his whispers n stutters
The way u wrote them talking was so lovely
Really enjoyed thanks for pm n plz keep em comin