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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi this my first ever fan fic. i hpoe u guyz like it. i'm not much of writer but still i have had go.

part 1

She felt sudden chill ran down her spine as she set foot in sn. She took deep breath counted to ten gave her self little pep talk she could do this. Diya Sharma took in her surrounding and saw her first mark a old lady coming down the stairs. She put her suitcase down went running to the woman to give her hand she was carrying a tray. "U should be more careful coming down the stairs at ur age, u might have hurt urself," said diya in the most caring sweetest tone. The old lady was taken back with a stranger who was seem to be taking great deal of care in her well being. She slide her gaze up down this well groomed stranger in the living room. She replied "thank u my dear, I am normally much more carefully." " Baa didn't I say that i would prepare the aarti tray myself" came a loud voice from behind diya. The voice belonged to tulsi virain she came striding in to stand next to baa. She gave diya a quick glance. "You must be mihir new sectary what time do u call this you meant to be here half hour go. Why are u standing here go on hurry your mihir sir hasn't got all day," shouted tulsi to Diya. Diya gave the sweetest smile and faced tulsi and replied "I'm not the sectary. I have come to see manthan virani is he in." "Oh" replied tulsi "I'm sorry I thought you where the sectary." "that's ok" replied Diya. "Manthan not here at the moment he won't be back until late I'm sorry why don't u tell me your name I will let manthan know u came to see him." "Oh he isn't at home I thought he would be," replied diya with tears streaming down her cheeks. "Beta why are u crying for" asked tulsi with worried look on her face. What has my useless grandson been up to know thought tulsi to herself. "What is your name" asked tulsi. "Umm umm it's diya Sharma no sorry not anymore." "What do u mean not anymore" asked puzzled baa who had been quietly listening to the conversation "Well I mean it was" replied tearful diya. Baa and tulsi shared glance . "Why don't we sit down and you can tell us what the problem is." "There's no problem" replied diya. "I was diya Sharma and now I'm married so my name is diya virani. I just get emotional sometimes I'm sorry." "Excuse me what did u just say your diya virani" said puzzled tulsi. "And whom may I ask you married to." "Didn't I say manthan why else would I be looking for him." Replied diya. "TANYA KARAN get down now" shouted furious tulsi. Hearing tulsi screaming the entire virain family was standing in the living room with in 20 seconds. Wow thought diya the old lady had good pair of lungs.

Edited by angel 786 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW, awesum start, do continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow thts awesome...plz continue.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u i hope u liked it will continue soon.
Posted: 18 years ago
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wowww
its greaaat
do write the second half 😃 😃
i wanna know what Tulsi says 😆 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Tanya comes marching down the stairs. "Whatever is the matter can't u let anyone sit in peace" asked annoyed tanya 😡 "Your asking me what the matter is what kind mother are you" replied angry tulsi. 😡😡

This was it and now tanya face was turning red with anger. "Maa what is the matter" 😕 😕 asked puzzled karan. And turned around and told his wife to shut up. Diya took sip of water and took in the surrounding. Tulsi took a deep breath to calm her self down faced her son.

"Karan I would like you to tell me who this girl is and what is she saying". Puzzled karan turned to see the girl sitting on the sofa. "Maa please what are u trying to say. Maa I don't know who this girl is," said karan. "Do u know what ur useless son has done now he totally outdone himself this time" shouted tulsi.

"Maa that's enough can't u leave my son alone u always just need any excuse to blame my son" said😡 😡angry Tanya to tulsi. "Maa what has manthan done now" 😕 😕asked Karan. This girl pointing to Diya said tulsi says "she his wife."

"what rubbish is this, Maa what r u playing at now maa," asked angry tanya. Tanya I'm only saying what this girl told me y don't u ask yourself said tulsi. Pointing towards Diya
Everyone eyes in the room where on Diya.😕😕 This wasn't going as planned thought Diya to herself. "Who r u" asked Karan. Diya stood up and repiled "I'm Diya and I've come to see manthan". "Maa she's come to see mantham and u made her into his wife maa ur too much someone should learn how to make stories ups 😆😃said tanya to tulsi. "tanya this girl told me herself didn't u say that," tulsi asked Diya.
" yes I did me and manthan got married"
Diya had enough she got up and looked towards karan and said I'm diya I get straight to the point I'm diya manthan virani. Karan dialled manthan number and told him to get home now. "maa I don't know what this girl is saying true or not we will wait until manthan gets home."
Diya sat next to her mother in law. When she heard bike coming up the drive. She instantly knew it was manthan she was tempted to get up and run and greet him but she knew that wouldn't be very wise. Manthan came striding into living room. He looked around everyone seemed very tense. "Manthan ur back" asked his granny. "What does it look like tulsi dadi of course I'm back anyway I don't know what that has to do with u." said manthan heading towards the stairs. " Not so fast manthan someone come to see u," said karan from behind . Manthan turned to see his wife sitting next his mother. What the hell was she doing here thought Manthan to himself. What was he going to do now. He decide to play it cool.
Manthan walked over to diya and giving diya big kiss on her cheek. "you're looking very beautiful tonight" he said softly to diya. She grinned at him happily . " you don't look so bad your self," she told him. 😳😳

Everyone in the room gasped at manthan and diya. They all shared puzzled looks with each other. Karan grabbed manthan arm and said "what the hell is this you know this girl". Manthan turned to look his father and replied "when did u start to care what I do in my life". "Manthan will u care to tell us who this girl is" shouted furious Tulsi. " Tulsi dadi I don't really think it's any of ur business who this girl is "! replied annoyed Manthan.
Tanya looked at her son ask him "manthan did u marry this girl". "Yes i did mum I'm sorry I should told u abut it happened so fast. Mum I what'd to tell u but I'm sorry I couldn't it all tulsi dadi fault" 😭😭replied manthan. Tulsi gasped "what the hell r u trying to say that I told u marry this girl she pointing Diya with disgust. "Mum remember I told I wanted to marry girl of my own choice but dad said that Tulsi dadi wanted me to marry some poor girl she knows" said manthan to his mother. "Mum tulsi dadi left me no choice but to marry in secret she was going to make marry some stupid garwaar like kt." "Manthan don't u dare blame ur dadi for ur own mistakes the girl maa chose was decent girl from good family had good values unlike this girl u ran away and married" said angry karan to manthan. Dad I knew u would say this that's I was forced to marry the way I did" replied manthan.

Diya was sitting on the bed. When her hubsand walked in. "what the hell r u playing at why did u come here before talking to me. Diya got up stood in front of her hubby and said "I got thrown out of my hostel I had no where else to go. So I thought I come and see u what is ur problem it was ur idea to get married. I was going to go back home but my father told me that I wasn't welcomed there anymore. That was all ur fault now I can't go home. My dad cancelled all credit cards taken away my car. Where the hell was I meant to go." Calmed down said Manthan. "You could have phoned me first u know how hard it's was for me to calm down my mother she in tears thinking she missed her only son wedding." said manthan 😭😭

Edited by angel 786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shall i carry on 😕 😕 no one like my writing 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I like it .. please continue (:
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Mum tulsi dadi left me no choice but to marry in secret she was going to make marry some stupid garwaar like kt."
^^ i like that line :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3 morning after

Diya felt arm around her waist. She must be dreaming she thought to herself she let out sign fell back to sleep. Then all suddenly she opened her eyes remembered who the arm belonged to none other then manthan virani. She let out another sign god how the hell did she get herself into this mess. It seemed like a good idea to get married to manthan , but everything seemed like good idea when she was half drunk. She closed her eyes everything came back to her in a flash.


She was at party with friends when her father had phoned why wasn't she at her hostel studying . He told her he had enough of her behaviour this was the last straw. When she finish her exams and came home he was going to get her married. Her partying days where over. She was so upset after the conversation with her father she didn't't even realise she had walked straight into Manthan Virani. She was crying at the time he had be taken back when he saw tears in her eyes. Diya Sharma never showed her feeling to anyone let alone crying in public. He ask her what the matter was. She told him her father was going to marry her to some stupid middle class guy. Her Diya Sharam marry some middle class who had no money. She was fuming. One of his friend came up a with idea why didn't she and manthan get married. His father wanted him to marry some stupid garwaar it would solve both there problems. They had couple more beers and then the idea was beginning to look really good. She didn't remember how they ended up a in temple. But they got married and the rest of the night was blur to her.


Yesterday morning when her father came to collect her he told he had arranged her wedding. The wedding was arranged for 3 weeks time. If it hadn't been for her flatmate she would have been in her own bed rather than here. Who informed her father how could Diya get married in 2 weeks time first she needed to get divorce from her husband.
Then all hell broke loose her father went totally mental. He couldn't believe his own flesh blood would do such thing. He disowned her that's how she ended laying next to manthan.


She was bought back to reality when manthan began to stir he pulled her even more closer to him. She tried to pull away but he wasn't having it. So she did only think that came to her mind she bit his arm. Manthan was full awake now he was really his enjoying his dream. He was in bed with some girl who had arm wrapped around his hands where about to. He screamed "what the hell". Diya kicked him to try to shut him up. Manthan was fuming who the hell was in his bed what hell was going on here. He was some serious danger of getting physical hurt. He pushed Diya down held her arms above her head so his body was top of here. Had one hand on her mouth to get her to shut up. She was struggling with him. They where locked in tussle . "What the hell" manthan was saying he never got to finish his sentence when he heard his bedroom door open heard and voice from behind saying "what the hell is going on here."

Edited by angel 786 - 18 years ago

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