Veeba FF, Teri meri prem kahani (PART40)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyy guys, i am starting a new VeeBa FF,alongside my other one (which doesnt have a name lol) on VeeraXBaldevs request, i found the storyline intresting and just totally awesome, hope i will make justice to it:
Anyways, enjooyy

Part1:
Veera woke up, in the middle of the night. She drastically sat up and rubbed her eyes.
Veera: Hayyo Rabba, chain se bi nahi sone de sakte aap? Kamaskam meri neend to na kharab kiya karo
(Veera: Oh God, cant i even get to sleep peacefully now? Atleast dont ruin my sleep)
She sighted. This was happening since many days, she wasnt able to get much sleep. She was continuesly feeling stressed. The reason? Well, what can the reason be if not Baldev? Yes, Baldev. But this time, it was not because of his stupid deeds, but because of his changed attitude towards Veera after Gunjans marriage to Ranvi. His cute effort of being nice and his stupid talks made her, weirdly, fall for him. She was not able to believe at first, that she actually had fallen for her worst enemy, Baldev. She couldnt help but smile. She looked up.
Veera: Rab ji, iss dafa mennu nirash mat hone dena, mennu nahi pata Baldev mere naal achanak kyu aisa bartao kar raha hai, lekin rab ji, plz plz wo waja yeh ho ke wo bhi mennu pyar karne lag gaya hai
(Veera: God, please dont make me dissapointed this time, i dont know why Baldev suddenly is behaving like this with me, but God, plz plz may the reason be that he also loves me)
...
Next morning:
Bansuri: Baldev puttar, atthe aa
(Bansuri: Baldev dear, come here)
Baldev: Aya beeji
(Baldev: Coming mom)
Baldev walked down the stairs.
Bansuri: Ha puttar, yeh le, maine halwa banaya hai, tu na Ranvi de kar jaake de aa
(Baldev: Yes dear, take this, i made some sweets, you go and give it to Ranvi and his family)
Baldev: Oho beeji, mujhe ae sab ab aur nahi honda
(Baldev: Oho mom, i cant do this anymore)
Bansuri: Baldev! Main tennu ki kaha hai? Jitni der tu Ranvi or ode ghar walo ke naal ache talook nahi rakhega, tera Sarpanch ban ne da sapna sapna hi reh jaana hai
(Bansuri: Baldev! What did i tell you? As long as you dont have good contact with Ranvi and his family, your dream of becoming the head of the village will just remain a dream)
Baldev: Acha beeji, aab uss Ranvi de ghar bi jaana parega, halwa dene
(Baldev: Okay mom, now i have to go to that Ranvis house to give sweets)
He made an irritaded face and walked out. Balwant entered the hall.
Balwant: Ae Baldev kitthe jaraha hai?
(Balwant: Where is this Baldev going?)
Bansuri: Maine na halwa banaya si, wohi Ranvi de ghar dene ja raha hai
(Bansuri: i made sweets, he is just going to give to Ranvi and his family)
Balwant: Oho Bansuri ji, tussi ennu othe kyu bhej ditta? Aaj main soch raya si onnu apne naal leke jaanda, kaam waghera sikhane
(Balwant: oho Bansuri, why did you send him over there? today i thought of taking him with me to teach him som work)
Bansuri: Hayyo Rabba, mere puttar nu abhi se hi kaam pe lagana hai ki? Jab mera puttar sarpanch bane ga, tab khudi seekh jaye ga sare kaam
(Bansuri: Oh God, why do you want to make my son do the work now? when my son will become the head of this village, he will learn it by himself)
Balwant: Nahi nahi Bansuri ji, sarpanch to aapka nalaik beta ban ne se raha, wo to Ranvi hi bane ga
(Balwant: No no Bansuri, your good for nothing son wont be the head of this village, but Ranvi will)
Bansuri rolled her eyes and went inside the kitchen.
Balwant: Iss nalaik ko koi fikar nahi hai apni zindagi di, kaise ennu zimedari da ehsas dilao?
(Balwant: This good for nothing doesnt care about his life, how am i supposed to make him realize about his responsibility)


Well guys, i know it was a short one, but i promise the others will be long... i am just a lil tired right now :P

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start. 👏
Looking forward to read more. Veera is starting to fall for baldev. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay!!New FF!!Please update this FF everyday!!This seems interesting!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A new fic?! Woo woo!!

So far so good...looking forward to seeing what happens next:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaay you made it and it's going great dear hope you update soon!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start, eager to read what happens next, hope veeras heart doesn't break again.
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nyc start dear..its interestin...do continue asap...waitin 4 d nxt
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nice start but baldev was irritated to go to veera's house 😲 show mein toh bahane dhundta h anyways do tell me when u update next 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy guys, thanks for the feedback, i am so glad you guys liked the beginning, well here you have another part, enjoyyy

PART2:

Baldev: Sasriakal chachiji
Ratan: Sasriakal Baldev puttar, andar aa
(Ratan: Hi Baldev dear, come inside)
Baldev nodded and went inside the house. He came and sat next to Ratan and Chaiji who were drinking tea.
Ratan: Ha Baldev, dass kaise aana hua?
(Ratan: Yes Baldev, tell me, how come you are here)
Baldev: Wo beeji ne Halwa banaya tha, to socha aap ko de ao
(Baldev: Mom made sweets, so she thought of giving you some)
Chaiji: Hayee halwa, Bansuri bara changa banati hai, la puttar
(Chaiji: Ohh sweets, Bansuri makes really good ones, give me dear)
Baldev handed the box over to Chaiji, just then Veera came out from the kitchen.
Veera: Hayo rabba, kisska mu subha subha dekh liya hai
(Veera: Oh God, whose face am i seeing so early)
She rolled her eyes, he looked at her.
Baldev: Ha to mennu konsa shauk hai tera mun dekhne ka?
(Baldev: Like i am dying to see your face)
Veera: Oye hath
(Veera: Ey move)
Baldev: Chal chal, ja tu
(Baldev: You go)
Veera: Main kyu jao? Mera ghar hai, tu ja
(Veera: Why should i go? its my house, you go)
Baldev: Main kyu jao? Meri behen da sasural hai
(Baldev: Why should i go? its my sisters in-laws)
They both started there nokh-jhok, Chaiji and Ratan laughed.
Baldev: Tere se to baat hi karna beqaar hai, chalta ho main chachi ji or chaiji, sasriakal
(Baldev: There is no use in talking to u, chaiji and aunty i will go now, bye)
Chaiji: Sasriakal puttar
Baldev gave a last teasingly stare to Veera and went out. Veera blushed and ran up to her room.
...
Jaggi: Praaji, tussi kitthe si enni der to?
(Jaggi: Brother, where were you for so long?)
Billa: Ha praaji, aapko pura pind dhoonda
(Billa: Yes, we looked the whole village)
Baldev: Oye mere bina ik pal bhi nahi reh sakte na tum log, khair main wo Ranvi de ghar gaya si
(Baldev: Oy you guys cant be without me even for a sec, i was at Ranvis house)
Jaggi: Kyu praaji? Aaj kal aap kuch zyada hi nahi Ranvi or uske ghar walo se milna shuro ho gaye?
(Jaggi: Why brother? arent you visiting Ranvi and his family alot these days?)
Baldev: Oyee chup kar, wo beeji ne sarr kha rakha hai mera, ke jitni der tak main Ranvi or uske gharwalo de naal sahi talukat nahi rakha ga, mera saroanch bana mushkil hai
(Baldev: Hey shut up, mom had bombed my head, that as long as i dont make good contact with Ranvi and his family, my fream of becoming the head of this village will be difficult)
Billa: Acha praji, to ae gall hai
(Billa: I see brother, so thats the reason)
Baldev: Or nahi to ki? Warna tennu ki lagda hai, ke mennu bara shok hai uss Ranvi nu mu lagane da? Ya phir chachiji or chaiji de naal galla karne da? Tennu te pata hai na main jananiya de naal galla nahi karsakta, konsi galla kara?
(Baldev: Yes, otherwise do you guys really think i am keen on talking to Ranvi? And talking to aunty Ratan and chaiji? You know that i cant talk much to ladies, i dont know what to say)
He continued drinking his tea.
Jaggi: Praji, lagta hai Veera de naal apko koi masla nahi hai meethi meethi galla karne da hai?
(Jaggi: Brother, i think you dont have any problem in talking sweetly with Veera, no?)
Both Jaggi and Billa started to laugh.
Baldev: Oye chup karo dono, maine aisa kab kaha?
(Baldev: Shut up both of you, when did i say that?)
Billa: Abhi to kaha aapne
(Billa: You just said it)
Baldev: Chup khotaya, maine nahi aisa kaha
(Baldev: Quite idiot, i didnt say it)
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PART3:
Veera was sitting on her dressingtable, humming a song, smiling widely.
Veera: Pata nahi kaise yeh sab hogaya? Mennu to abhi bi nahi yakeen ata, ke main uss insan de naal pyar karti ho... wo jo mennu sabse bura lagda si, haye rabba, ki karditta tussi? Lekin, main shikayat nahi kara gi, kyunke, jo bi aapne kitta hai na, bohot changa kitta hai, hayee yeh ehsas kinna acha hai, aisa lagda hai, jaise ke puri dunya hi rang barangi ho gayi ho, Baldev, tu kaise inna pyara ho sakta hai?
(Veera: Dont know how this happened? I still cant believe it, that i can love him... the one i hated the most, oh God, what did you do? Actually, i am not complaining, because, whatever uou did, you did great, oh this feeling is soo nice, it feels like, the whole world is colorful, Baldev, how can you be so lovely?)
She looked at her reflection when she suddenly became pale. She saw Chaiji standing behind her, with a puzzled expression. Veera drastically turned back.
Veera: Chaiji?
Chaiji: Ae ki hai puttar?
(Chaiji: What is this dear?)
Veera: um... chaiji wo ... nahi
(Veera: Um... chaiji, no)
Chaiji: Puttar tu Baldev nu pasand kardi hai?
(Chaiji: Dear, you love Baldev?)
Veera: Chaiji...
Veera started panicking, she didnt know what to say or to do.
Chaiji: Puttar, tu, pehle kyu nahi dassa?
(Chaiji: Dear, why didnt you tell me before?)
Veera was shocked. She looked at Chaiji.
Chaiji: Ha puttar, tune pehle kyu nahi dassa? Or, Baldev bhi tennu pasand karda hai ki?
(Chaiji: Yes dear, why didnt you tell me earlier? And, does Baldev also like you?)
Veera: Pata nahi chaiji, lekin mennu lagda hai
(Veera: I dont know chaiji, but i think so)
Chaiji hugged Veera.
Veera: Ki hoya chaiji?
(Veera: What happened chaiji?)
Chaiji: Puttar, ae te, changi gall hai, ke tu or Baldev ik dosre nu pasand karde ho,
(Chaiji: dear, this is a good thing, that u both like each other)
Veera: Ki? Chaiji aap enni jaldi man gayi?
(Veera: What? chaiji you accepted so quickly?)
Chaiji: Haye rabba, main kyu mana karo gi?
(Chaiji: Oh God, why will i be against it?)
Veera: Mennu nahi pata, mennu laga ke, jaise talukat hai humare uss ghar de naal to...
(Veera: i dont know, i thought, like the relation between these two families are...)
Chaiji: Oye nahi puttar, purani baato ko peeche hi chordena chahiye, waise bi maine wekha hai, ke Bansuri or Baldev puri koshish kar rahe ne talukat thik karan de, tu bass fikar na karr puttar, mere ute chor de Ranvi or Ratan nu dassne di
(Chaiji: Oh no dear, those are old things, you should leave the past behind, btw i have noticed that both Bansuri and Baldev are trying their best to make these relations work, dont worry dear, leave it on me, i will talk to Ratan and Ranvi)
...
Balwant: Bansuri ji, aetthe ana
(Balwant: Bansuri, come here)
Bansuri: Ji ki hoya?
(Bansuri: Yes what happened?)
Balwant was sitting on the sofa alone, Bansuri came and sat opposite him.
Balwant: Mennu lagda hai Baldev da wyah kardena chahiye
(Balwant: I think, we should get Baldev married now)
Bansuri: Haye Sarpanch ji, aapne to mere dil di baat kardi
(Bansuri: Oh counciler, you just said what was in my heart)
Balwant: Aise hi Baldev sudhre ga, warna aise wo kabhi bi nahi thik howe ga
(Balwant: This is how Baldev will become more sensible, otherwise God knows when he will become responsible)
Bansuri: Main to bass koi changi bahu lao gi, jo sara ghar sambhal sake, or main aram
(Bansuri: I am going to find a nice daughter-in-law, who can take care of the whole house, and i can just take it easy)
Balwant: Meri nazar wich ek bari changi kuri hai, or maine faisla kitta hai, bas Baldev ode naal hi wyah kare ga, kyunke us kuri de elawa koi or Baldev nu sidhe raste te nahi laa sakti
(Balwant: I have thought of a girl, who will be perfect for Baldev, she is the only one who can make Baldev come on the right path... and i have decided that he will only marry her)
Bansuri: Aho bolo, kaun hai?
(Bansuri: Yes tell me, who is it?)
Balwant: Veera
Bansuri: Ki?
(Bansuri: What?)
Balwant: Ha Veera hi hai ik, jo sab thik kar sakti hai
(Balwant: Yes Veera is the one, who can make everything good)
Bansuri: Lekin sarpanch ji, Veera kaise...?
(Bansuri: But counciler, how can Veera:...)
Balwant: Kyu bansuri ji? Ki kharabi hai Veera de wich?
(Balwant: Why bansuri? What is wrong with Veera?)
Bansuri started thinking, and quickly said:
Bansuri: Nahi koi kharabi nahi hai ji, mennu koi masla nahi hai, bas aab Baldev de nal gall karni baki hai
(Bansuri: No there is nothing wrong with her, i dont have any problem, now we only have to talk to Baldev)

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