Raya-Adhuri Kahani thread 3 part 43 page 140 - Page 70

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi aap update kab de rahi n wat tym morning afternoon ya night pls pls tell aab Raya se duri mujhse dekhi nahi jati
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm.
sorry for being late. 

Hi ekta sis I am back after a long long time a week almost. 
Well FB part was perfectly penned down, in present,  ram n his behaviour , and he wanted to show priya that he can be happy without her too, in fact pretending to be happy in front of priya,  mind is fully filled with anger, and hatred for priya. KK's worries as a mom n sudden change in his decisions about his life,  his marriage n no sign of happiness in his face was so unnatural. 
Neha too found little different ram altogether. 
Lpihu on other hand is still a child , she cannot react but can feel low n helpless n the innocence of not understand ing the things,  very cute n touchy.  Nuts in inFB is still arrogant n stubborn,  ram is helpless too har koi usse chod jaane ki zidd kar rha hai,  Ifeel pity for him too. Ram ko apni frustration nikalne k liye priya hi mili,  quiet obvious. 
Good progression,  perfect story.
Ekta sis esha ko khush kar diya, ram ko priya pe gussa dikha diya, rajat ko firse priya k ghar aate hue ram ko dikha diya😆
Lovely scene for me was myra hitting the ball,  n ram kissing her n offering chocolate n priya giving a satisfied look. 
Ab ek genuine question ye batavo,  ram kapoor apne pocket mein chocolate leke ghoomta hai kya har jagah😆😆 issiliye kehti hoon ekta sis. 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Hi aap update kab de rahi n wat tym morning afternoon ya night pls pls tell aab Raya se duri mujhse dekhi nahi jati

my friend is back in town and commented too...so I am giving update in minutes😊
sorry for being late this time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thanks for the pm.

sorry for being late. 

Hi ekta sis I am back after a long long time a week almost. 
Well FB part was perfectly penned down, in present,  ram n his behaviour , and he wanted to show priya that he can be happy without her too, in fact pretending to be happy in front of priya,  mind is fully filled with anger, and hatred for priya. KK's worries as a mom n sudden change in his decisions about his life,  his marriage n no sign of happiness in his face was so unnatural. 
Neha too found little different ram altogether. 
Lpihu on other hand is still a child , she cannot react but can feel low n helpless n the innocence of not understand ing the things,  very cute n touchy.  Nuts in inFB is still arrogant n stubborn,  ram is helpless too har koi usse chod jaane ki zidd kar rha hai,  Ifeel pity for him too. Ram ko apni frustration nikalne k liye priya hi mili,  quiet obvious. 
Good progression,  perfect story.
Ekta sis esha ko khush kar diya, ram ko priya pe gussa dikha diya, rajat ko firse priya k ghar aate hue ram ko dikha diya😆
Lovely scene for me was myra hitting the ball,  n ram kissing her n offering chocolate n priya giving a satisfied look. 
Ab ek genuine question ye batavo,  ram kapoor apne pocket mein chocolate leke ghoomta hai kya har jagah😆😆 issiliye kehti hoon ekta sis. 

hello ji,
aap ko natural laga ki unnatural😕
baap re kya kya point notice karti ho😆...abb aapke sawal ka jawab...nahi ram kahi bhi chocolates lekar nahi jaate...may be Priya se milne jaa rahe hai aur Ram ko pata hai wahan do chotte bachhe hai toh le liya hoga...jo bhi ho Priya ke hai na😆...thoda softnes bachho ke liye hogi hi😆abb ram ko thodi pata ki bachhe bhi uske hai...actually meine kuch aur plot socha tha lekin registrar ne change karwa diya...usme eisa tha ki Myra left hand use karti hai aur ram Priya se puchta hai ki she is lefty kya...tho Priya ke mooh se nikal jata hai ki she is like her fath...aage nahi kehti...but registrar ne change karne kaha toh kar diya😆 
thanks for comments🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update...
ye kya hua
ram bhi na hmesa gusse mein kuch jada hi bol dete hai😡
ram ne mana liye priya ko pr phir ye mu
etna bad mu ho gya raya k beech😕
oye hoy gd news🥳
Pr priya to chodkr jaa rhi hai
Ab rajjo hi milaenge raya ko hai na😉
jaldi se milao...
nxt part bhi do...
jaldi
continue soon...!!!
thanks for the pm🤗Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh  tho  this is the reason priya went off.   
  bechari woh bhi kya karthi .  payaar kiya tho kisne  ram kapoor se..  she has to   bear it na,,
hmm may be shipra  wont allow her in home as she is pregnant again ... 
y did u stop here u said, next update marriage? then 


Edited by luvbalh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update... Can't wait for next one..
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god in anger Ram said all bad things to priya
glad that priya understand his situation
great she pregnant and want to tell this to Ram 
but now she misunderstood his and vikram conversation
hope all will be sorted out soon
thanx for the pm waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. The execution of  Ram - Priya fight is very realistically done.👏👏👏  And also the end of the fight...😆 😆
The misunderstanding part, those dialogues are written aptly.
Waiting for the next part.  
Ab aapki dost aahi gayi tho back to back updates dete rehna plzz...😛😊