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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

a beautiful update... and rashmi's comment is equally beautiful

the journey of life is all about self-discovery ( i read it somewhere) and here it seems to be so true...

this update is all about laying the foundation for the future... but an odd question seemed to have popped in my head...Shashi chose a self-destructive path when he lost Garima and this led to the way Khushi is today

Arnav chose a self-destructive path when he lost his parents and now he has found Khushi ... but, what if for some reason he loses Khushi(God forbid) and arshi have a child ...will that child be another Khushi in the making as there is a possibility of Arnav again choosing the path of self-destruction...

somehow when i read ENZ i seem to develop all sorts of negative possibilities and i sincerely apologise for that but then i will put the blame on this FF bcos eventhough it is about a beautiful couple called arshi who are soulmates i'm able to relate this FF with reality and so i have these thoughts... I'm unable to this of this FF as a mere fiction ...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Wow...the trust they have put on each other is so overwhelming' beautiful update manreet.. They love each other so much...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

It was good to see this Arnav and khushi planning their future keeping each other in mind. One looking after the other.

They have been growing closer emotionally and have been each other's emotional anchors. Its good to see them support each other even now without fail.

Good going...i hope they always put each other's happiness before themselves.

Loved the update manreet.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

What can I say Manz, this story is progressing so beautifully and at quite a natural pace too.

I loved the way Arnav and Khushi pondered about the differences in their habits with Khushi being a neat freak and Arnav the messy artist, with Khushi cleaning up after Arnav quite happily accepting him for how he is. In turn Arnav would quite lovingly comfort his lovely Hazel when she would be emotionally engrossed in the world of fiction. This was so relate-able Manz, as I often let myself get emotionally invested in anything I am reading and so it would be fair to tell you that you always transport me to this wonderfully romantic Arshi land! ;-)

The scene in the kitchen was again orchestrated beautifully, with Khushi swaying her hips as she cooked and Arnav sneaking up on her and engulfing her in his embrace with all the love that he felt for her. It is so heat warming to see to broken souls complement each other and bond in a way that is extra ordinary. I suppose their past experiences have made them understand each other's pain better and they can be there for eachother and connect in a way that they wouldn't have possibly connected with other people.

It was quite a delightful surprise to see both Arnav and Khushi thinking about staying in chandigharh on a more permanent basis and looking at their future job prospects as well.

What I loved even more was Arnav's promises, the promise that he verbalised about doing everything in his power to make a happy future for them and his silent promise to himself in the end! That's it I am officially in love with this Arnav too! Bring on the next update yeah?! ;)

PS. Apologies for this rather late comment, I have been a little inactive lately!

PPS. Outfits rocked! ;)