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Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

A beautiful piece of writing. The relationship between the two may be very fragile but at least now Dilsher is realising what the sins of the past has done to his son and for Rudra to have any semblance of a future he must say and do whatever he can to try and rectify this. I do hope the cv's delve into this equation between the two more thoroughly or take inspiration from wonderful writers like you to showcase the talent that RR has. Look forward to reading more

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was beautiful.

The father son relationship is so complex here. I'm looking forward to your insights.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Wow this was simply amazing and outstanding Drabble,

A brilliant read and written exceptionally well,

I absolutely loved your version of Dilsher repenting for his past mistake by lying about Paro in order to save Rudra from further heart break,

I loved reading the Drabble from Dilsher's point a few, his turmoil, anguish and emotions were written to perfection.

I would love to see something like this in the serial where Dilsher won't put the blame on Paro for the fire.

Wonderful writing,

Thanks for the PM xx

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Very touching. But I hope you continue and this is not so much AU I mean Paro is not the culpri who set fire.. and I hope Dilsher's lie is actually true..

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

loved the update loved disher trying to right the wrongs he did years ago beautifully done loved that he told him paro as taken thanks for the pm.

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1sarun

@1sarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Well written, poignant and yet beautiful. So Dilsher believed Paro to be deceitful but to save his son another heartbreak he lied about Paro. Nice touch.
But i think the way Dilsher's character is shaping up in the story, he will for sure not believe that Paro set the fire and might even ask Rudra to marry her.

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I love how you have displayed the equation between the father and son. Whether they explore this on the show is another matter but I love how you have shown Dilshar regretting what he had done to his son all those years ago and justified his lie.
Really loved this Drabble.

Edited by rashika - 11 years ago

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