^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET II} PRT-155to157 pg-50 - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is changing...she has changed him...
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PART 162

He opens the lock and gets into the dusty room

He gathers the things and goes to throw them away but a video cassette falls from the pile

As if his hands worked on its own, he puts the video cassette in the old player and a small TV

As the video starts playing the past and memories start capturing his mind as if it was just yesterday

During his gigolo days one of his bosses was crazy about capturing him in different poses and in different circumstances

She would demand him to do things and then shoot him

He had all those pictures and videos piled up in his storeroom...he never dared to open that room

He remembered the crazy mistress of his who loved shooting him

She loved seeing him crazy drunk and made him do weirdest things ...shoot him...and watch the video afterwards to have a good laugh

He was helpless...he needed money and she had plenty

Maan glares at the video coming out of his past circumstances and reminds himself of his present...that he must try and move on...like Geet was trying to move on...he should also make an effort...make a sincere effort at least for her

He was numb drunk... the crazy woman made him gulp bottles in a go...he had 30% sense...but it was all slurred and blurred...his energy was going in balancing and keeping off from falling or passing out as he was paid more till the time he cloud stay awake

She was in front of him glaring at him with her greedy lustful eyes

She asked him

Mistress- Do you have any girlfriend?

He just looks at his mistress dumbly

Mistress-I asked you something!!!!!!

Not saying anything...he nods

Mistress-You are handsome, good looking...you have a girlfriend?

She was encircling her fingers around his skin

M-You di...dir...

Mistress- What did you say?

M-Nothin...

Mistress- Answer me!!!!!!!!

M-No...no...girl...

Mistress- Awww sad

Maan again looks at her trying to make sense of her words...

Mistress-Do you know how to propose to a girl of your age?

He shakes his head in no

Mistress- GET UP!!!!!!!!

Maan manages to stand slowly taking his time in 2 minutes

Mistress- Walk outside

She orders while shooting him

He manages to walk without falling down or tripping over his own legs

Mistress- Walk till you find a girl

He is swaggering and looking really hottt

Maan looks at her and scowls...not understanding the order

Its late night...streets are empty ...it would be impossible to find a single soul, rest a young girl

Mistress-Walk on the road till you find a girl...a young girl

Maan starts walking again...careful now to keep his balance and looking out for people... his alcohol numb brain has told him to stop thinking and just do what he is told

Mistress-Awww you look so cute when you are drunk

He isn't wasting precious energy and control on figuring out what it means and what he is doing...there wouldn't be any place he could find a gal till 3 km...but he doesn't care, all he cares about is staying awake, walking and finding a girl...he doesn't care why...he doesn't care how...he just knows he has to do it. It's his tunnel vision, he shuts everything else out

There's an ice cream stall...some gals are surrounding it and having ice cream...seems they are on school trip...

Maan glares at the video with his eyes flared open and his brows furrow witnessing what he couldn't have ever imagined

It was Geet...one of the girls among the group was her...right in front of him...much younger but her...she looked cute in her pajama and top with high rise pony tail nibbling on her softy and he is around 50 meter from her...much younger himself

Mistress-oh there my boy...you have found gals but you had to find only 1 gal...but here there are about 6 of them

Maan is not registering her comments...he plans on walking

Mistress-Stop!

He doesn't hear her command...he is so exhausted and shut out... he keeps walking slowly

Mistress-Maan nooo not this way

The gals are happily chit chatting and having ice cream

Maan has almost reached the girls

Mistress-Maan...there are too many gals. Make a choice. You should propose one gal, the gal you like

Maan stops and looks back at his mistress... he is swaying on his feet by now and not at all getting what she means

Mistress-Tell me...whom do you like?

PART 163

Mistress-Maan...there are too many gals... make a choice. You should propose one gal. The gal you like

Maan stops and looks back at his mistress...he is swaying on his feet by now: and not at all getting what she means

Mistress-Tell me...whom do you like? Choose one gal. Tell me who do you like?

He looks at his mistress and shrugs...he doesn't care enough to like anyone

Mistress-Look at them!!

Maan turns and takes look as ordered... all he sees is a faces 2 eyes 2 ears 1 nose and hair...high pitched chattering hurting his head

He looks back at his mistress hoping she is satisfied that he has completed his task

Mistress-Choose one girl, find a nice flower for her, go and say I love you to her and hug her

Maan is too tired and wants to lie down there and then, what she is saying doesn't make sense. He breaks down the orders in his mind-find a flower...go to one girl, say I love you and hug

He looks around...no flowers

Then he sees one of the girl has small flowery kind of pattern on her Pjs

He decides that would have to suffice

He manages to walk up to her and since he was quite handsome looking and swaggering like drunk ; all girls were paying attention to him. So was Geet although she was wary...

She was busy giggling but turns pale as he gazes at her

Maan closes his eyes and prepares to speak

M-I...uh...l...l...lo...

She frowns

It's not working...he thinks. He even drunk doesn't want to say that to anyone

He frowns...takes a step closer

M-I...l...L..ll...

She wants to step back... but couldn't as if she is freezed

Again Maan decides to close his eyes

M- I love...

She frowns harddd

G-What?????

His mouth is dry and he can't get the final word out...and to hell with it...his mistress will have to satisfy with 2 words only

He takes one more step to hug her

Maan opens his arms and hugs her

Geet is shocked beyond words

She is so warm and soft and he relaxes for a micro second leaning heavily on her and that costs him his full control...he passes out

She is so surprised that she is tongue tied. No male has ever touched her before

He falls down taking her along with him

G-Aah! Mummaaa!

The bump of falling wakes him up slightly and he remembers something he had to say...something important...

He had to apologize to his mistress for not completing the while task perfectly...so he manages to whisper in Geet's ears-'sorry' and then fully passed out for half a day

Her eyes perk up...her heart beat skip...she unconsciously has those Goosebumps on her pink skin...she is motionless for some micro second

Her friends and the mistress come to her...she comes back to reality...she gets up hastily

Friends-Geet...are you ok? What happened?

G-I...don't...know...I...I

She is looking at him

The mistress comments..-'..O...Maan baby...you two make such a pretty picture'

Geet is numbly looking at the guy...she didn't hear the mistress as she was at a distance...she is intrigued by him...she found something different in him as if his eyes were talking to her

She was so intrigued by his eyes that she forgot to slap him that she would have done normally

As video ends Maan keeps glaring at the blank screen...he is stunned at what he did...he had no doubts ever of what low level he had fallen too and he usually successfully blocked out thinking about the impact of his actions on others life...it was the only way to save himself from his own conscience

PART 164

He is stunned at what he did...he had no doubts ever of what low level he had fallen to and he usually successfully blocked out thinking about the impact of his actions on others life. It was the only way to save himself from his own conscience. But now he was forced to consider all the wrongs he had done to others just to survive in his life. He realizes now that he did nothing of it willingly and if he had an option he wouldn't have done it

So he decides that it counts for something and decides that what has been done is done, he has never done any harm to others since he was rich enough and he would never again either

While he was in the room...Geet was searching for him in the whole house

G-Maan Maanll!!!!!

She stands near the door of store room

G-Tum yahan ho? What are you doing here? Kitna ganda pada hai yahan aur yeh room to hamesha band rehta hai naa. Chalo

Maan looks at her and for a moment sees her as he had seen her through drunken haze in her Pj and all sweet innocence

She walks to him with her enchanting smile

G-Chalo

M--You go I'll fix this mess here

He decides he doesn't want to see anymore of anything and he is going to trash it all without checking anything more

G-I'll help

M- No I'll do it.

He says as if its end of discussion

She looks at the hazed video

G-What is it? Movie?

She asks with a happy grin

M-No

He answers with a grim expression

G-Kya hai? Come let's watch. Tumhare paas purani movie hai, bataya nahi

Maan walks over and takes out the video tape and very expertly breaks it

G-Maan...why did you? Arre...areee...what are you...Maanll...I wanted to seee...kya haiii

She pouts

M-it's nothing...dirt... that's' all. I am throwing it all away...

G-Huh ! You never listen to me

M-Bring me carton of bag where I can put it all away to be dumped

She shrugs

G-Help yourself

She goes

He lets out a small sigh. He didn't even know he had been tense

He gets several boxes collects all the tapes and stuff and dumps them

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A week passed

It was an 'unusual' week as Geet termed it.

She didn't know was she imagine it or Maan had become a little secretive and won't give her clear answers even if she asked him

He came home late for a whole week and gave excuse of 'work' when she asked him

But she knew he can't be so sweaty after working in his fully air conditioned cabin

And, also he didn't look much tensed even after having so much on contrary he looked enthusiastic...rather hidden enthusiasm he tried to hide

She is little confused about his strange behavior

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As he drove towards home he wondered how would he break the news to her...how would she react...what would she say...how would she feel...but he wanted to tell her...but he has decided that he won't tell her right now...would tell her at the right time...or would 'surprise' her... as people put it What would she say after knowing that he plays polo

He loves playing polo and he is been practicing the whole week after work for the upcoming matches

For matches...he always used to go alone and play and come...even if he used win it was...not much cause of happiness

But this time was different...this time he had Geet

He wanted to play for her...see her cheer for him...clap for him...smile for him

He wants to win...badly win for her

He wants to hand over the trophy to her...see that smile on her face

See her stand by him...come and hug him when he wins

Show her to the world that she is with him and he is not alone

PART 165

Its Sunday

Generally to chutti ke din Maan lazy land ke shezade ka roop dharan kar leta hai

Lekin aaj alarm laga kar he woke up before Geet

Jaldi se naha dho liya

Geet is sleeping...she knows Maan der se uthega to wo bhi nahi uthi

He in his breeches and untucked shirt half open and wet hair

Jaata hai Geet ke paas

M-Geet..

He nudges her shoulder

G-huh? Haan?

She is still sleepy

She sits up and takes a look at him

G-Uth gaye? Kyun? Naha bhi lie? Kya time hai?

M-7. Chalo jaldi tayar ho jao

G-Taiyaar??????????????????

M-Chalo...we have to leave by 7.20

G-What????? Maan tum pehle kyun nahi batate?

M-Ismein pehle batane ko kya hai? Kal thodi naha ke soti?

She gets up grumbling

G-Jaldi uthti naa, tum naa. Naashta bhi banana hai, kapde bhi hain. Jaana kahan hai?

M-Polo match

G-Polo match?

M-You know... on horses.. .polo...

G-I know par hum kyun jaa rahe hain? Pass mila hai tumhe?

M-I play

G-What???????? You..? You...play? You..?

M-Geet...17 minutes

He says pointing to the watch

Jaldi se goes bathroom ke andaar bhaagti hai

Par bathroom se bak bak kar rahi hai

G-Arre tum pehle nahi bata sakte. You know kitna kaam hota hai, utho nahaao, naashta banao, baal sukhao, make up karo, dress bhi choose karo

Maan to kamre se chala gaya to make some light breakfast before match

Ab Geet to kapde nikalna bhul hi gai thi

She comes out in a bathrobe

Ab decide nahi kar paa rahi kya pehne

She walks to Maan in her bathrobe and matching ear wale rabbit faced matching bath slippers

G-Idhar aao

Maan is taking his time to observe her even as he follows her...he is giving her a critical review in his mind

Review mein ye mila that Geet doesn't know that wet hair and a bathrobe signifies as sexy and how absurd it is to couple it with those kiddish slippers

And yet Maan ko overall effect though contrasting and mixed signal giving hai, pasand aaya...bohot pasand aaya

As they reach to the room

G-Choose. ..what should I wear?

Maan kapde nikal ke de deta hai ek baar mein...he knows what ladies wear there and he does not want Geet to feel out of place

M-Wear this

G-ohhh...nice

She smiles

Ab tak Maan bhi poore jockey wali uniform me aa gaya hai...wo breach boots and shirt all properly tucked and buttoned and looks like lord ready to ride...

Geet looks at him from head to toe

According to her she gave his look a 5 star rating...eye candy...yumm

Maan wapas jata hai kitchen mein aur dono ke liye breakfast lata hai plate mein

As he comes back...she is doing her light make up

Maan lakar rakh deta hai plate side table par

M-Breakfast kar lo

He says gobbling down his own food apni usual style mein

G-Kar rahi hoon. Waise, achche lag rahe ho. The color suits you

He is surprised...like very surprised...he doesn't choke but he has some difficulty gulping it down

He turns a bit red..

M--umm thanks...you too

G-Thanks [wide grin]. What should I do with my hair?

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Posted: 11 years ago
toh geet is frm maan's past...abb toh maan ko geet per aur pyar ayega...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a sweet update...
maan and geet moving forward forgetting the past lovely yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful updates dear
maan saw the tape abd remembered his past.so he had met geet before too
Maaneet going for polo match. Loved the way they r trying to move on 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow what a wonderful update
glad that both a moving forward in their relation
am loving the way the story is progressing
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a disgusting past he had ...how could that woman do this to him

Maaneet ki chemistry changing ...so sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely. Awesome. Fabulous.
Loved reading.
Maaneet met earlier. Oh. Then too they felt something good with each other.
Will maan tell about their meet in past to geet?

Maan is trying to move.
He's being sweet.

Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
they met before...maan was not in senses...but, geet too didnot remember him...in his weird form...? he is trying to move forward with her...waiting for the match...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

they met before...maan was not in senses...but, geet too didnot remember him...in his weird form...? he is trying to move forward with her...waiting for the match...


well..about Geet remembering...she was too young..apart from that she does remember the incidence...but could not actually relate her past mystery man to her present husband...but nonetheless, there is some some deja u

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