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vaishali

@Vaish24

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

nd its a res...
phew..wait for 5 min
unres...
dancer kriya nd neighbour rey...nice plot...
mazboori insaan se kya kya karwati hai...
anuways...kriya likes wearing sarees bt avoids it coz she is paid to look sexy nd nt beautiful...i loved this line...it said it all...
rey is here coz of his mom..nd he found dat connection in her...great...kiss was initiated coz he was drunk bt nt dat high to not feel the moment...makeout was beautiful i wud say...it held a lot of emotions...his pause was imprinted in her mind in morning...bt the way things sorted out was do loving...

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srujana

@srujanahpvr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

great one
fantastic os
loved it

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

O-M-G-EEE!

WHATT DAAA :O :O :O

This was a Shocker Vaishu!! :O I wasn't expecting any OS from you that too Hot OS! :P

But this????? Holy Shit! This was Fabulous Vaishu... :O

Kya karti hai tu??? Aur kese??? :O

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome dear.. Fabulous.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

RES :D

UNRES

whoaa.. I soo wanted people to write some os's for holi...and there came urs!

could i have asked for more..😉

the plot was well potrayed.. the storyline.. was just too good and realistic..

you could have just come up with a simple romantic holi sequence..but what you gave was a treat babez! :*

i must say it was the overall storyline that made this os soo intense.. one of my favs so far!

from kri being a bar dancer to rey's attraction towards her..and everything that followed😳

masst tha!

ps- hope kri was not exactly what others thought her to be.. i mean Reys jealousy ka hopefully koi base nhi tha..yu kno what i mean! ;)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

why the hell it i read this os... omg 😳 and indeed it was freaking hot
and superb... loved it

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

wow...dis waz suprbly fabous...
lovd it...
holi actually turning spcl for both...nyc...
kriya...a dancer n reys neighbour...
thnk god he gulped dat thandai or else he wouldnt have told hr dis...
nw dat he did...shes always his...
i likd d last line...dont leave please stay kriya...
wow...d catch of d os...
i must say it waz a hawt one...
thnx...do write more...