REVENGEFUL LOVE #7 PART 55 updated on page 116- 7/4/2014 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_luvs_msk

just read the entire ff

nicely done
i dont want maaneet going back to KM
and RP and Brij have crossed all limits
firing at their own daughter? disgusting
i hope once this mess is solved maan and geet open their hearts in front of the family and leave to live in their own small and beautiful world
without ego, pain, hurt

update soon
waiting...

pyar se pet nahi bharta na. Pet pasie se bharta hai or aisho aram sirf Maan k dad de skte hai un dono ko.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

I missed both the updates
But I m happy that samrath helped maan
And now everything will be alright
But I m scared from Brij and geet's father
As they hired goons to kill never they thought of geet how she will be
Continue soon dear

dont worry baby
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

yeyyy.. mah fav story's update.. v nice n sizzling hot update richa.. great job..👏

ty dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanx

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

datz awesome dear

😳
loved it
thanx fr d pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ty :)

Originally posted by: maggi_2506

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NICE UPDATE👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rsusmita

so hot romatic update


<div></div>finally they are saved nice part dear loved it

:) 10x dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART - 50

MAANEET were in safe hands. Piyush took both to KM. Their guards coverd all 3 making sure that no one harm any of them unless they reach KM safely.

In KM all are worried for both Maan and Geet. Somya calming Arpita but deep inside she was so scared of their safty. Samarth though wont show any sign of panic but his forehead's lines tell everything. He glance the entrance door again and again in their wait. Piyush stopped the jeep in the premisies of KM. Both hesitating entering inside.

'guys what are you waiting for? Go ahead. Its your own home.' Piyush easily understand their turmoil. Maan entwined her hand and took a step forward. Past bad memories once again come alive.

'geet ghbrao mat. Wo sab beet chuka hai.' Maan read her mind and composing her. She firmed the grip over his hand and moved with him. Both step inside and Somya catch their glimpse. She informed excitedly to both Samarth and Arpita about their arrival. She rushed to Geet and hugged her tightly.

Somya kissed on her forehead and checked her properly,assuring herself that she could be fine. 'Geet bachhe tu theek hai na?' She asked and Geet nodded. She hugged her again and both's eyes welled up.

Arpita came and hugged her son. She kissed him lovingly. Maan too hug her back. Arpita embraced both her childeren feeling peace after ages. Samarth saw the reunion of his family from far away.

Arpita signaled Maan to went to his father but Maan hesitated facing him. He scared of his anger and torning apart taunts. Samarth came to him and open his arms for him,for the first time. 'cant you forgive your father?' Samrth asked for forgiveness from Maan.

Maan was so amused. He never thought that his father ever talk with him politely. Maan step ahed and hugged his father. Samarth was not a man who shows his emotions so easily. But it was a outburst of ages he hide inside him. He stroke his head lovingly. Maan felt as he had parents too,except Piyush and Somya,who always act his gurdians.

'i am sorry dad. I always let you down with my untolrable acts.' Maan too commits his mistakes.

'no need to say sorry son. We also a sinner in making you like that.' Samarth moved towards Geet. 'Geet beta pls forgive us. You both suffer alot just because of my ego.' he also apolozise to her.

'nai papa pls aap aise mat kahiye. Bade chhoto se mafi nahi mangte.' Geet wont like he is asking for sorry from her. She alredy forgive evryone,who make them suffer in any way. Samarth blessed both and kissed them.

Brij too arrived to Singhania Mansion where he got to know that Maan easily escape with Geet,because of which his father is burning in rage. Ayesha and Avantika both sacred of the consequences. RP routed towards KM with Brij. He trashed down ragefully and entred in KM where whole family is rejocing the reunion moment. RP's eyes were burning at the look of Maan. He cautioned Geet to come with them but she denie to which he raised his hand on her. But before his hand lands on her cheek,Maan clenched his wrist in mid between. He glared him furiously.

'ye to aap the,isliye sirf hath pakda hai. Agr kisi or ne ye harkat ki hoti to hath tod deta.' Maan glared back straight in his eyes. His jaws clenched and bieceps turn promenient. Both glaring each other and he gave a jerk to his hand.

'Geet last time i am asking you.' RP threatened her and she hide herself behind Maan.

'i think she gave her ans. RP i know what he had done is not forgivable but,why you wont try to understand that both accept each other. Pls accept their love.' Samarth make last try to change his decision but RP is not in a mood of listening to any excuse. His believe wont be changed by any explainantion.

'theek hai isne humare badle Maan ko chuna hai apne gunhegar ko chuna hai. To aaj k baad iska humse koi rishta nahi hai. Marr gai ye humare liye.'RP told his decision to anyone. His tone is harsh and rude. He ends all his relation with her and step out of KM.

'but dad Angel...?' Brij's heart still wont accept the decision so he compelling his father but noone is born who able to convience him.

'Brij...' he roared and make him shut. Afterwards he wont open his mouth in front of his dad. He silently followed him.

RP reached home and cautioned both the ladies that from now no one carry any kind of relation with her. She is died for him. Though Ayesha and Avantika pleads but their tears wont effect him. Brij too cautioned Ayesha that she wont go against of RP's decision.

In KM:

Geet is crying. She wont believe that her own family threw her out of their lifes like this. His words torn apart her soul. Arpita and Soumya hugged her and composed her.

'dont worry beta everything is gonna fine soon. Right now he is angry,but when he cool down,i am sure they all will accept you and Maan.' Arpits said sweetly stroking her back.

'mumma dad kabi nahi manenge. He wont change his decisions.' she cried more.
Arpita and Samarth knows his pain,so he signaled her. Arpita nodded silently and commands Maan to take her to their room. 'Maan Geet ko room me le jao or jake thoda rest kar lo. You both need rest.'

Maan took her away from there. He strengthen her as she resting her head on his chest. He coocooned her in his warmth. Maan locked the door and embraced her. 'Geet pls dont cry. You know how it feels to me.' his voice is low and shattred.

'Maan...' she wont even able to complete her sentence as her throat is chocked coz of continous sobbings.

He made her sit and gave water to settle her uneven breath. 'Geet pls dont torture yourself. Aise rokar mera imithhan mat lo.' Maan is weltering seeing her condition. Somewhere he is feeling guilty and cursing himself. Unwantedly he becom the reason of parting her from her parents. Maan settled the pillows and made her laid. He laid next to her and embraced her. Both were tired and emotionally disturbed. He wanted her to grab some sleep. Soon both slept holding each other.

Whole khuranas are worried for both. They want to cherish and bring them out of what they have faced from past half and a month.

'Everyone listen carefully from now we wont gona discuss this issue again. Buried this topic for forever and leads to fresh start.' Samarth commands to all.

'papa i have an idea to cherish both. Lets them get married again. Both were parted on the day of their anniversary,so this time tied both again with rituals and our blessings. As we all know last time both were not ready for their marriage but now they are.' Somya suggests and all like her idea.

Its 2pm when both awake. First they fresh n up and change their messier cloths. Meantime servant knuckles on their door and inform them that all summoned them in hall area. Both came down. They were still looking shattred. Piyust start talk ormally to make both comfortable and then Somya told them about their planning of getting them marry again with all rituals. This news will definately distrach their thoughts plus the enthusiasm other shows for this cheerup their shattred moods.

Arpita and Somya mae sure Geet wont missed her family. But this marriage concept irritates Maan later when he got to know that he have stay parted from her untill their marraige. Maan's glowing face suddenly changed into an annoyed one and his eyes widened with this shock. Geet smirked seeing her husband's restlessness. She quickly said yes to tease him more. Maan stare her but she only irritating and raising his frustration.

Somya gave a seprate room to Geet and instruct her not to meet him in any condition. Somya knows both very well so she and Piyush make sure to get them parted and enjoy the game. Maan trying harder to reach her but his all plans floped by Piyush and Somya.

'kaha ja raha hai?' Piyush knotted his brows and stare him suspeciously.

'bro pani lene.' Maan fumbbles and told lie what comes to his mind.

'achha wo to tu adha ghante pehle b ja raha tha na?' Piyush reminds him.

'haa... Wo kya hai na pani khtam ho gaya hai.'Maan think and coverup himself.

'achha pani khtam ho gaya hai? Par tera diag to thikane pe hai na? Kitchen us taraf hai. Yaha tera konsa fridge hai jo tu baar baar yaha aa jata hai?' Piyush teased his patience.

'ha to wahi ja ra hu. Main to bas check karne aaya tha ki sab theek hai ki nahi.' Maan turn his eyes and his voice fluffering more.

'kyu ghar k is isse me bhukamp aayega aisi koi announcement hui thi kya jo tu check karne chala aaya? Ya firr watchman ki job shuru ki hai. Jagte raho making alerts to other...' he again knotting his brows and stared him suspeciously,makin Maan more nervous. Seeing his nervousness he chuckled secreatly.

Maan noticed and question back.'what are you doing here? Apko to apke room me hona chahiye na. Ya firr apko b bhavishyevani hui thi jo chek karne chale aaye?' Maan raised his brow and stared him.

Piyush put his arm on his shoulder and whisper silenty. 'Maan bete ye jo tere paintre hai na mujhpe nahi chalege. Its better you control and keep away from her for two days only. Dekh sirf do dinn ki baat hai uske baad jo mann aaye wo karna.leink in do dinn se pehle to nahi. So apni pyas ko shant kar and be a good boy.' Piyush embaressed him and send away from there. Maan squiremed as he caught by him. Maan moved from there and Piyush towards his room where Somya waiting for him.

'halat dekhi miya majnu ki?'Piyush and Somya make mock of him.

'apko kya lagta hai wo so rai hogi. Wo konsa kam hai isse. Ye pakka jayega chahe kuchh b kar lo,coz she is also waiting for him.'Somya have strong feel and she told to Piyush.

'then why we are waisting our time? I think kafi tease kar liya baki subah karenge.',Piyush winked and locked their room.

Somya's prediction was right. On that time she shake hands with them but now she is getting restless without him and roaming in whole room.
ye kya Geet tune. Tab to bada maza aa ra tha Maan ko tang karne me,ab khud hi pagal ho rai hu. Maan plz jaldi se aa jao.'She is cribbing to herself and wishing he has come anyhow. Either she looking at door or to room's wall clock,showing 3 am.

The moment when is mummering to herself Maan entred from the backside window. Geet's eyes widened first and then she slapped him hard on his arm. 'Maan what is this? Yaha bhi? Seedhe door se aane me tume koi problem hai?', Geet complaints of his habbits.

'its all because of you. Bahar bro or bhabhi pehra de rae hai. Ab iske alwa or kaise aata? Kitni baar to koshish ki. Ab wo log aane hi nahi de rae the to aise aana pada.'Maan justified his insane action. 'ek to tumhari wajhse ye hua or tum mujhe hi daant rai hu. Its all your fault.' Maan put all blame on her which grew her angry.

'theek hai sari galti meri hai na to firr jao. Kyu aaye ho?' Geetes cheek turn red and she turn her face to other side.

'Maan you stupid see what you had done.'Maan cursed and go behind her. He clenched his ear lobes and apolozise for his words.'i am sorry Geet but pls dont get angry with me. Waise hi hum ek dusre se itna durr rae hai or ab jab kuchh normal hua hai to hum ladd rae hai.pls jaan.'Maan knows she melts by him. He had a huge impact on her. She tunred to him and hugged firmly.

'i am sorry Maan.'Geet firmed her grip over him.

Maan leaned over her and both slipped in her duvet. Staring with kissing on her whole face in a luxurious moment,they reached too the verge of extreame pleasure. Their intensity is unmatched and the desire they have is indescribable.

Sun dawn and her alram waked her up as Somya cautioned her to wake early in the morning for ritual of haldi. Geet glance the time piece and struggling to freed herself from his arm cage.

'Maan sweetheart pls leave me na.' She pleads in hurry.

As much she tried that much he pulled her to him and in a jerk he bring her underneath his naked body where his hardness again start teasing her soft spot and she loosing herself to him. Geet glance in his intoxic eyes and forgot everything.

'Maan pls.' she just whispered till he claim her delicate neckline and start kissing her hungrily. Her arms moved around him and enclosed his body firmly,and she lost her track. Maan relish her again and she fullfill his every demand with equal hunger. Both parted when Somya and Arpita start banging the door. Maan leave her and she quikly ran inside the washroom. Geet assured both the ladies that she will join them soon. Geet get ready to moved outside and Maan again grab her.

'Maan pls let me go. Marwaoge tum aaj.' Geet wriggling.

'mere hote hue koi meri Geet ko chhu jaye aise ho hi nahi skta.Haldi to pehle main hi lagaunga.'Maan said confidently and she glareh him.

'Maan ye koi mazak ho ra hai?' Geet get worried for herself as all calling her continusly.

'mazak or main? Very bad Geet. You wont have a little trust on your husband?' Maan teased her and she hit his chest.

'Maan leave me right now.' Geet showed her big eyes and commands him with a dominance.

Maan pretending of scared by her and loosen his grip. Geet is moving but he stopped her. Maan picked out one packet from his pocket and dipped his finger in that. Then he caress the same finger on her cheek and completed his wish. He smiled and moving towards window. Geet stop him before he left. She demands that she do wanna same. Maan rosed the packet towards her but she raised herself and rubbed her cheek with his so that the powder painted on his cheek too. Maan kissed her and jumped out. Geet too rush outside and joined the women waiting for her only. Somya saw the mark and com closer to her.

'ahem ahem. To miya majnu ne bazi maar hi li.' she love teasing her.

'nahi bhabhi wo...' Geet is searching for a valid excuse but couldnt find anyone.

'rehnede sab pata hai mujhe.' She make her embarassed with her teasings and Geet flushed furiously.

Arpita commans to start the ritual and all enjoyed the moment. Finally their plan is working and once again KM get rid of the long running gloominess...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

like the way everyone is happy in km and maan's father also accepted them

but geet's father broke all ties with her😭😭
nice maaneet getting married agian

yehhh koi maan ko kaise rokk sakta hain😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update maaneet remarriage wow n maan trying hard to be near eet but rituals n somya n piyush wont let him but he is msk found a way 😉


But dont like singania's decision how could they do this with their angel n princwss geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful dear
finally maans father asked sorry from maan and accepted them
but it wont be easy for geets father to accept him and geet supporting maan is adding fuel tothe fire.both r righr.hope he will realuze that maan has accepted his mistakes and is changed now
maaneet getting married again and piyush and soumya teasing both

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