MARRIAGE PROPOSAL AND A UNIQUE LETTER-A RAHI OS

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MARRIAGE - PROPOSAL AND A UNIQUE LETTER-A RAHI OS.

Hi guys,

I am back with my second os.

I hope you all will like it.

Kindly let me know if there are any mistakes in the os,so that I don't repeat them.

THE PURPOSE OF RELATION IS NOT TO HAVE SOMEONE WHO MAY BE WITH YOU COMPLETELY' BUT TO HAVE SOMEONE WITH WHOM U CAN SHARE UR INCOMPLETENESS COMPLETELY'.

PART 1-RANVEER'S MARRIAGE PROPOSAL.

Its 3 years,since Ranveer and Panchi got into a relationship.It had been a wonderful journey so far.Every day was a beautiful day for them since they met.But its during these 3 years that they spent the beautiful moments together like giving each other surprises on birthdays,cute fights and roothna-manana with chocolates,hugs,kisses,flowers etc.,after every fight their bond grew even more stronger.It became so stronger that even the problems that came their way couldn't break their bond.

They were successful in their respective careers.Ranveer is a business tycoon and Panchi is working as a manager in a company.One fine day i.e, Saturday afternoon Ranveer and Panchi were in Ranveers house sitting on the sofa and remembering their childhood days,school and college life,the days they enjoyed with their buddies.Even now they are in the contact with their buddies.whenever,they are free they all meet and enjoy partying.KD,KIYA,PIDDI,SHEEBA all were successful in their careers.kd and kiya are married and piddi,sheeba has a five-year old son.Ranveer thought its high time they take their relationship to next level.Suddenly,a thought crept into Ranveer's head.

Ranveer:Panchi mein soch raha tha ki hum log apne career mein itna busy ho gaye hai ki ek dusre ke saath waqt bhi nahe bita pa rahe hain.Ek kaam karte hain,As it is winter season "How about a trip to shimla?".

Panchi:Wow Nonu Shimla that to in winter season bahut maza ayega.Par make sure ki we go to shimla by train.

Ranveer:Mein jaanta hoon na mere cutie-pie ko train journey kitni pasand hain.He books the tickets and tells her to be ready,the tickets were booked for tomorrow night.

They both packed everything and headed towards the railway station and got into the train.The train departed at exactly 8:00pm.It was the best journey of their lives.Panchi rested her head on RV'S shoulder and he places his hand on her shoulder.They both spent their time talking and after sometime they both reached their respective berths opposite to each other.By that time all were sleeping.When they were facing each other,Ranveer winked at Panchi and blew a flying kiss.Panchi whispered I LOVE YOU NONU.They fell asleep .After sometime Panchi felt thirsty and she woke up and drank water.When she was about to sleep again she saw her Nonu who looked sooo cute and innocent while sleeping with a small smile on his face.Panchi said meri nonu hamesha aisa hi muskurata rahe and she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep.Next day,they reached shimla.Ranveer booked their accommodation in a hotel and the next day they went for sight-seeing.Ranveer was looking handsome in that white shirt,blue jeans pant and black jacket.Panchi looked beautiful in that light Pink shirt,black leggings and cream leather jacket.

As it was winter season,Shimla looked even more beautiful.They were very happy to witness the snowfall.Panchi loves playing in the snow.As Ranveer is adventurous he did skiing and ice-skating.After that Panchi and Ranveer made snow balls and threw at each other.Without Panchi's knowledge, Ranveer already purchased a ring and was thinking how to propose her for marriage.Then suddenly he got an idea.He saw a small caf nearby and told her to go and wait there.He will come in few minutes.After sometime he blindfolded Panchi and brought her to that place where few minutes back they were playing in snow.

He opened the blindfold and she was surprised to see a snowman which Nonu made for her.It was perfect with scarf around its neck and carrot coloured pointed nose.When she was observing it she saw the snowman holding a little box.she asked him,"yeh kya hain Nonu?"

Ranveer told her to go and open it.When she opened it she found a platinum ring with a note "will you marry me?".She felt very happy and water was flowing through her eyes.Ranveer knelt down and caught hold of her hand and asked "Moti,kya tum mere saath ek khoobsurat bandhan mein bandhna chahoogi?"Panchi said haan Nonu mein hamesha isi pal ka intezaar kar rahi thi,maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum yeh pal mere liye itna special bana dooge like a beautiful dream.Ranveer slipped the ring on her finger and she hugged him tightly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys,this is the continuation of the story.

PART 2-PANCHI'S LETTER

Next day,When Ranveer woke up from sleep he found a letter nearby placed on the table with a red rose on it.He opened it and started reading.

Dear Nonu,

Aaj surprise dene ki bari meri hain.Mein tumhe ek task de rahi hoon.Tumhe bahut maza ayega believe me this will be the best task of your life.I have written 7 Promises on cards and placed them in different places.All you have to do is to find them.Each card contained a Promise.I have written the clues in this letter,by which u can find the cards.U love singing na,so It will be easy for u to complete this task.So,the game begins.

Here are the clues:

1. The missing word in this song will lead u to the 1st card.

"Ajab hai ishq yaara,Pal do pal ki khushiyan.

Jism mujhe dekhe mitti ka...sa dil kyun diya hain."(HUM DIL DE CHUKE SANAM)Ranveer understood it was sheesha and went near it and found a card Placed on dressing table.When he opened it,he found Panchi's first Promise to him that is "chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye mein tumhara saath nahi chodungi."whatever Problem comes,we will face it together.

2.Nonu tumhe pata hain iss duniya mein sabse sweetest insaan kaun hain,woh tum ho.Tum itna sweet ho ki,tumhari sweetness ki saamne mera second clue bhi pheeka pad jata hain.Ab tak to tum samajh gaye honge phir bhi mein tumhe clue deti hoon."...,limejuice,icecream,toffiyan pehle jaise ab mere shauk hain kaha,gudiya,khiloune,mere saheliyan ab mujhe lagti hain sare paheliyan.(HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN MOVIE)."He found a chocolate placed on the nearby table and a card below it.Panchi's second promise was "whenever u feel low,I will cheer u up and be your pillar of strength."

3. "Banke Titli dil uda uda udaa hain, kahin duuurrr?"He went and opened the drawer of cupboard and found panchis butterfly hair clips.He noticed a card placed next to it.Panchis third Promise was "I am ready to take all your sorrows and give all my happiness to you."

4."Mere haath mein,tera haath ho,saare jannatein mere saath ho."He opened his suitcase and found the card placed under the photo.(That photo was Ranveer and Panchis in which they were holding each others hands).Panchi's fourth promise"Even if we fight, I won't let that affect our relationship."No force can separate us.

5."Sapnon mein aye ke,jaike gori khudiya hamri churayi le nindiyan."(AJAB PREM KI GHAZAB KAHANI).Ranveer went near the bed and started searching for the card and found it under the pillow.Panchi's fifth Promise " jab tak mein zinda rahoongi,tum par koi bhi aanch nahi aane doongi."

6."Aaoge jab tum oh saajna,angna phool khilenge."He thought for a while and after seeing the flower vase,he went near it and found a card placed in between the flowers.Panchi's sixth promise" hamari zindagi bhi inn phoolon ki tarah mehekti rahegi aur bahut khoobsurat and colourful rahegi."

7."Tune maari entriyaan re dil mein baji ghantiyaan re tan tan tan tan."he went to the time piece and found the card below it.Panchi's seventh and last promise"I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU."As days pass on my love for u will grow even more stronger."

As the task got completed,Nonu's eyes were filled with tears.Suddenly, Panchi opened the door of the hotel room and enquired ,"How was the task Nonu?".Ab ladkiyon ki tarah rona band karo aur mujhe batao ki how was my surprise.He was unable to speak anything.He just ran towards her and hugged her tightly.Panchi asked kya hua Nonu,he said MOTI aaj mere zindagi ka the most memorable day hain,iske saamne mera surprise kuch bhi nahi tha.Ek aur baat mein jaan gaya hun woh eh hai ki tum mujhse jitna pyaar karti ho utna koi nahi kar sakta shayad mein bhi nahi.Jo bhi promises tumne mujhe kiya who saare promises mein bhi tumhe karta hoon.waise moti I enjoyed doing the task.It was the most beautiful task of my life and I will remember it forever.Panchi said Nonu ek aur surprise hai tumhare liye,he said"kya ek aur surprise?".He asked"saare surprises aaj hi doogi kya,future ke liye bhi kuch surprises bachake rakho."The door bell rung at the same time and she asked Ranveer to just shut-up and close his eyes.She opened the door and the person outside said madam aapne jaise kaha waise humne gift ko pack karwaya.she thanked that person and gave him money.She closed the door and went and stood infront of him and told him to open his eyes.He asked her"yeh kya hain MOTI."She told him tum khud hi dekh lo and as he unwrapped the gift cover,he was surprised to see a guitar in it.MOTI tumhe kaise pata ki mein ek naya guitar kharidne ke bare mein soch raha hoon,par waqt hi nahi mil paaye as I was busy in office work.Thankyou Moti, I loved u r gift.

Panchi said sirf thankyou se kaam nahi chalega,chalo mera favourite song play karke sunao.He played BIN TERE SONG and they both danced together.After enjoying candle-light dinner with live violin music in the background,they packed everything and started their journey back towards Mumbai.

THIS SHIMLA TRIP WAS THE BEST WHICH THEY WILL REMEMBER TILL ETERNITY.

LOVE

PRIYA.

Edited by priya1101 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya dear
Gosh this is so beautiful👏
you portrayed My RaHi so beautifully
Thanks a lot for writing such beautiful story🤗
the way Nonu propose his moti
so sweet
but Panchi's letter stole the show
so emotional👏
Panchi indeed love her nonu so much
and ending is perfect
Nonu Playing Bin-Tere for her moti
plz keep writing

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you sooo much Geet.
I am glad that u liked it.
A big hug to u dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!
I just loved it!
Uh write so well..
Keep writing!
It was mind blowing...
😛😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyou Tina.
That's so sweet of u.
I am glad that u liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwe Priya it's so beautiful! <3 loved it..keep writing dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya..its actually one of the most romantic n unique confessions ever
Love this nonu...so thoughtful n sensitive. N the snowman idea was soo cooll

N then this panchi killed me...what a lovely way to propose..awieee...love those promises

Loved your descriptions dear..amazing

Keep writing more...

Lots f love for this.

Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it priya
me ye pehele bhi bol chuki aur
phirse bol rahi hu u r awesome
Panchi's proposal was sooo amazing
keep writing girl

luv u
Ishita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG dis is super cute dear 👏
Amazing
Loved d tasks given by Panchi... awesm 👏
Plzzz continue writing more 😃

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