Virman OS: ~I LOVE HOLI~

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Hello Guys.. Guess what m here again with an OS.. Let me tell u m really not satisfied with it😕.. Plz bear with me... But i really wanted something to write n i endup with this... Hope it will b worth reading...

SPECIAL MENTION:
The idea of this OS was given by my :Cutie" that is
Ridzi123... So i want to dedicate this OS to her...
RIDZI (Cutie) This one is for u 😳
Virman OS: ~I LOVE HOLI~

Jealousy is the most important requrement in love.. No love is completed without jealousy.. We can say that love n jealousy are both sisters.. One who is not jealous is not truly in love.. In jealousy there is more love than self love n sometimes it becomes a bliss...

A holi is a festival of colours.. colours of happniess... N like always Vadhera's were also celebrating holi n this time they prepared a grand holi as it was jeevika's first holi there.. after a lot of struggle n efforts beeji agreed to send maanvi to chandigarh as they all were going out of the town for some wedding.. but beside jeevika there was a person who was more than happy n that person was non other than virat..

Yes it was true that he was in love with maanvi.. he tried almost every possible way to confess his love but seemed it was hard nut to crack.. but how can we forget that she is maanvi... MAANVI CHAUDHRY... How he can think that she will easily fall in love with him... He remembered the days when every hot girl of his college drooled over him.. they could even die just for his one look... but here it was all opposite ... He was running behind her.. But all his handsomeness ended in a dark smoke... But this time he was sure that he will b successful coz his full proof plan was ready this time...

Here maanvi was talking to jeevika... laughing on something.. Virat looked at her n lost in her sweet smile.. but after sometime he came to the real world.. he mentally slapped himself...

Virat: (in mind) Kya pagalon ki tarha hans raha hai.. Concentrate Dude Concentrate.. Yeh bandariya tujhe buhat bhagane waali hai..(looking upwards) Bhagwan meri raksha krna.. Ufff..

After talking to jeevika maanvi went towards the entrance.. she was walking but stopped as she saw a girl entering... She looked at her without blinking.. That firl was wearing white Saari.. she was looking like a hot modle.. Her trail of thoughts broke when she saw Virat hugging that girl.. Her shocked eyes popped out.. She tightened her fist watching them so close.. But than she thought y she is getting angry.. she shrugged off her thoughts n went from there angrily.. Virat looked her from the corner of her eyes.. He was enjoying that look on her face.. He said something in that girl's ear n they both started laughing.. maanvi was walking but stopped as she hear someone laughing.. she looked back grinching her teeth as she very well knew who was laughing..

Maanvi: (angry) Mjhse tou hr waqt ladta rehta hai.. aur is k saath dekho. Kese khi khi khi kr k hans raha hai.. Chep.. Bandar.. Ullu.. Urrrggghhh

She went from there..

Virat: (laughing) Thanks Shonaya for coming.. seems like our plan is working..

Shonaya: That's really ok Virat.. aakhir friends hote kis liye hain..

Everyone was playing with colours.. All were putting colours of happiness on eachother's face.. Some were dancing.. n some were drinking bhaang n were going talli... Maanvi was drinking water when jeevika came..

Jeevika: Mannu mene kitchen mein jalebi ki tray rakhi hai plz zara le aana..

Maanvi: Haan Di me abhi laayi..

Maanvi came in the house.. She was passing by the corridor whe she heared some voices.. curiously she went more close to the voices.. There her breath stopped,... she saw virat n shonaya there.. Virat's hand was on her waist.. N as shonaya's back was facing Maanvi she misterpreted that they both were kissing.. She didn't knew what broke inside her.. She ran from there taking tears in her eyes... Virat saw her running.. he felt bad by looking at her..

Virat: Yr Shonaya.. Shyad yeh kuch zyaada hi hogaya..

They both looked at eachother worriedly..

Maanvi came out of the house.. she was confused by the feeling inside her.. Seemed like the seed of love was already there.. but by the water of jealousy it growed inside her... She went towards the table.. she was angry n hurt both.. she was still not able to understand that she is in love with her partner.. Her vision became blurred due to the tears.. n in that blurry vision she took the glass thinking that its water.. but it was bhaang mixed thandai... virat was unaware of what was going to come...

Virat n shonaya came running out of the house... they looked at maanvi n became confused that y she was laughing...

Virat: (to shonaya) (sadly) Kahin humara plan back fire tou nahi hogaya...

Shonaya looked at her friend feeling sad ..

Jeevika was talking with viren when her eyes fell on the table... where maanvi was standing making funny faces...

Jeevika: (shouting) Mannu

Maanvi: (looking at her) Di Shhh

She turned herself n started to move..

Balam Pichkari jo tu ne mjhe maari..

Tou bole re zamana kharabi hogayi...

Mere ang raja.. jo tera rang laaga

Tou seedhi saadhi chhori sharabi hogayi..

She turned n jumped from the table...

Itna maza .. q aaraha hai... tu ne hawaon mein bhaang milaya...

Dugna nasha... q horaha hai.. aankhon se meetha tu ne khilaya...

A guy holded her hand n pulled her towards him...

Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi hogayi..

Man chali chaal kaisa nawabi hogayi...

Tou.. Balam pichkari jo tu ne mjhe maari tou seedhi saadhi

Chhori sharabhi hogayi..

Haan jeans pehen k jo tu ne maara thumka tou lattu padosan ki

Bhabhi hogayi...

Virat witnessed the whole scene.. he burned in jealousy.. seemed like he fell in his own digged hole.. He came in the middle of the ground.. he took her hand from that guy's hand.. n pulled her towards him forcefully...

Teri kalayi hai.. haathon mein aayi hai...

Mene maroda tou. Lagti malayi hai...

Maanvi freed herself from his embrase n pointed her her finger towards him...

Mehenga padega yeh.. chaska malayi ka..

Upwas karne mein teri bhalayi hai...

Virat came n scooped her in his arms..

Ho bindiya teri mehtabi hogayi..

Dil k armaano mein behisaabi hogayi...

Tou.. balam pichkaari jo tu ne mjhe maari..

Tou seedhi saadhi chhori sharabi hogayi...

Haan jeans pehen k jo tu ne maara thumka...

Tou lattu padosan ki bhabhi hogayi..

All the family members were not able to cope up from the shock..

Virat made her to stand on her feet... He was about to go when maanvi holded his collar n touched his nose with her finger...

Hey q no vacancy ki hoton pe gaali hai..

Pr tere dil ka.. kamra tou khaali hai...

Mujh ko pata hai ree kya chahta hai tu..

Bholi bhajan teri neeyat kawali hai..

Ho zulmi yeh haazir jawabi hogayi... tu tou har taaley ki aaj

Chaabhi hogayi..

Tou.. balam pichkaari.. jo tu ne mjhe maari.. tou seedhi saadhi chhori

Sharabi hogayi...

Haan jeans pehen k jo tu ne maara thumka.. tou lattu padosan ki

Bhabhi hogayi...

The song ended n than virat looked at his family members.. he was so embarassed infront of them..

Virat: (to maanvi)(in her ears) Maanvi seedhi khadi raho sub dekh rahe hain..

Maanvi: (leaving his hand).. No.. mjhe dance karna hai (shouting) Balam Pichkaari jo tu ne..

Virat: (putting his finger on her lips) Maanvi chup..

Maanvi looked at his finger which was on her lips. N smilled

Maanvi: (cutely) Arey pagal ye tumhari ungli (finger) hai.. ek min..

She holded his finger n put it on his lips n than said..

Maanvi: (smilled) Haan ab Shhh karo..

Virika came towards them..

Jeevika : (angrilly) Mannu yeh tu kya kar rahi hai tu hosh mein tou hai..

Maanvi made a cute n angry face... But her saviour came in b/w them...

Virat: Bhabhi its ok .. Actually is ne ghalti se bhanng pee li hai..

Virika: BHAANG..

Both looked at maanvi shockingly...

Virat: Bhabhi Bhai its ok na ab.. me isey andar le jaata hun..

Virat knew that she is not in the condition to walk by herself.. So he silently scooped her in his arms n walked towards the house... Other than the family members all looked them in Awww

...IN VIRAT'S ROOM...

Virat enetred there closed the door behind him with his legs.. n made her lied down on his bed... he was about to go when maanvi holded his hand..

Maanvi: PARTNER

he smilled n looked towards her...

Maanvi: Baitho (sit)

Virat sat beside her n started cressing her hairs..

Maanvi: (tears started to roll down) Virat.. Mujhe vo ladki bilkul achi nahi lagi..

Virat became worried looking at her tears..

Virat: Maanvi...

Maanvi: Nahi Virat plz mjhe bolne do.. Jb aj vo tumhare kareeb aa rahi thi mera dil kr raha tha k use jaan se maar dun.. I knw vo tumhari dost hai but... mjhe us ka tumhare kareeb aana acha nahi laga Q K...

Virat: (impatiently) Q K...???

Maanvi: Q K... (after a long pause) I LOVE YOU...

After hearing those beautifull words Virat closed his eyes in happiness thanking god in his heart for making such situation that finally she let her feeling out infront of him..

Virat: (smillingly) I LOVE YOU TOO MAANVI... N I also want to confess a thing.. yeh sub mera hi plan tha.. mene hi shonaya ko bulaya tha .. it was our plan so that u can accept what u were not doing M Sorry Maanvi... me chahta tou tumhen nahi batata.. pr me apne is naye rishte ki shuruwat kisi jhut ki bunyaad pr nahi krna chahta plz mjhe maaf kr do.. plz abhi tum buhat sweet lag rahi ho.. fir se vohi Jhansi Ki Rani mt ban jaana...

Maanvi laughed loudly.. she thought that he very well know how to lessen her anger.. By looking at her smile virat left a sigh of relief,...

Virat: Thank god tum mjhse gussa nahi ho.. U knw today is the best day of my life.. mjhe na yeh holi waghera itna pasand nahi... but today I will say...

He came close to her face.. rubbed his face with her's .. in this way some gulal sticked from his face to her...

Virat: I LOVE HOLI...

Maanvi smilled... they both joined their forheads n said together..

Virman: I LOVE YOU...

I knw I knw not good.. Sholly Guys.. but as its the season of Holi so i tried 😕
B HAPPY
LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ! Sanju ❤️
Its just awesome...
I just told you about adding Bhaang in your OS..
But they way you potrayed everything is just superb !!😃

Loved every bit of it !!
The jealousy of Manvi and how Virat used his friend to make Manvi realize her love was him was just amazing !!😊
The Song selection was amazing !!
And the cute Virman Scenes were awesome 😃

Just speechless and awesome 😃
Thanks for double Pms😉
Write more... I am your fan now😃

Your Choti si Cutie 😳
Edited by Ridzi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab
just like u
awesome
loved it
rock on going on...
Really too good...
Superb work bachcha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS!! Very well written.. Really enjoyed reading it.. I miss this cute and adorable Virman a lot.. Nice one.. Take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it..
It was supperr cute.OS..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey very nice os loved it
Virat making manvi jealous with his friend
And manvi drinking Bhaang instead of water
Drunk manvi is so hilarious
Thank you so much for the pm
Please write more of virman
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oye hoye i love it re ek dam maza agaya 😃
fab Os cute naughty and romantic ofcoz 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
loved it all
thanks for the pm

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