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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first os on rahi . I am a kisha fan but I like rahi too they are so cute so here it is
BIRTHDAY SURPRISE
PANCHI'S POV
This is my first birthday with nonu I mean as a couple . Waise toh maine 5 saal ki ummar se har birthday sath main celebrate kiya hain but aaj special hain caz humare couple banne ke baad yeh mera first bday hain . Nonu na 12 baje call karega yaa khud hi mera fav cake leke aa jayega.
But neither Ranveer came nor his call. Panchi waited for him and finally slept with teary eyes .
IN COLLEGE
panchi was hell upset with her nonu .
Kiya and Kd came there and wished her .. But seeing her upset asked her the reason .
Kiya: wat rv ne wish nahi kiya . All guys are same right na kd
Kd: kiya tum bhi kya abhi suna rahi ho. Panchi chill rv na sh..
But panchi went away from there without listening . Kisha gave eachother a knowing smile.
Than kiya came to Panchi and forced her to come with her at some pub. Panchi after saying no for thousand times agreed as she know how stubborn her friend is
Panchi and Kiya arrived at some farm house . But before Panchi can question her Kiya made an excuse and went from there.
Panchi was shocked to see Ranveer there wearing tux and the farmhouse was decorated like it was some child's bday
Ranveer than said: happy bday moti. Tujhe kya laga main tera bday bhul jaunga hmm
panchi had tears in her eyes seeing all these and hugged Ranveer . She said: thank u nonu
Ranveer : moti chal khana khate hain tera fav khana hain chal
While eating panchi: nonu main kya koi bacchi hun jo aisi decoration ki hain
Ranveer: iske piche ek reason hain main badme batata hun
pehle dance kare
panchi: ofcourse
DIL IBADAT KAR RAHA HAIN DHADKANE MERI SUN
Ranveer pulled panchi close to him and swirled to music
Than panchi stood on ranveer's feet and her hands around his neck and his around her waist . Both danced and than Ranveer cupped panchi's face and kissed her . Than he bent down on one knee and took panchis hand and apoke
Ranveer: moti u know tumne mujhse pucha ki iss decoration
ke bare main. Remember moti hum jab 4 saal ke the tab isi farmhouse main meri bday par mile the aur friends bane the . Us din humare ek beautiful friendship ki shuruat huvi thi aur main chahta hun ki humare life ke ek aur beautiful relationship ki shuruat bhi yahin se ho . So miss panchi Rastogi aka moti
kya tum zindagi bhar mujhe jelne ke liye taiyyar ho
Will u be mine forever??
Panchi: yes nonu yes yes
Ranveer than took out ring and slipped in her finger and kisses
her hand . He gets up and hugs her tight. And says: I luv u moti .. Thanks meri life ko meaning dene ke liye
Panchi: I luv u too nonu .
so guys how is this. I know its not that good. So plzz comment
and negative critisism is also welcomed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow A RaHi OS
I ma just loving this Rain of RaHi OS's
Thanks a lot for writing such a sweet OS

really really loved it

Awwiee RV prepared surprised for her moti
so sweet of him
he is really a sweetheart

Love his proposal
so typical our cutie pie Nonu
thanks for writing such RaHilicious OS
Plz do write more

Lots of Love
Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowieee. Stavan this was sooo good n sooo Rahi...loved it...
Sorry cant be all snooty n criticise good things...

This splurge of magical rahi oses is such a brilliant feat...THANKS so much all f yaa...

Coming to this OS...
Loved the way you brought forward the nonu moti relationship essence..it was bang on
Loved my fun cute naughty n overtly romantic nonu...he was such a charmer..
N my angel too...hopeful expectant distraught yet so-in-love...panchi was so well so panchi..wow
N then the final confession was so b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l...super loved it..
This was fun exciting beautiful cute oh-so-romantic n eternal just like my Rahi

Sorry me just doesnt stop when I start on Rahi...my perfect two
N u captured my perfect two perfectly.

Thanks sooo much...

Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan good yaar👏 phele kisha ff,ss aur ab rahi os you are genious😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan thank u
sooo much for giving
perfect rahi
OSes ki to barsat ho rahi he
and I'm loving it
and loved your os
it os awesome

keep writing
Ishita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Wow A RaHi OS

I ma just loving this Rain of RaHi OS's
Thanks a lot for writing such a sweet OS

really really loved it

Awwiee RV prepared surprised for her moti
so sweet of him
he is really a sweetheart

Love his proposal
so typical our cutie pie Nonu
thanks for writing such RaHilicious OS
Plz do write more

Lots of Love
Geet

thank u so much geet
I am glad u like it
I luv nonu motis cute relation
will surely write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

Wowieee. Stavan this was sooo good n sooo Rahi...loved it...

Sorry cant be all snooty n criticise good things...

This splurge of magical rahi oses is such a brilliant feat...THANKS so much all f yaa...

Coming to this OS...
Loved the way you brought forward the nonu moti relationship essence..it was bang on
Loved my fun cute naughty n overtly romantic nonu...he was such a charmer..
N my angel too...hopeful expectant distraught yet so-in-love...panchi was so well so panchi..wow
N then the final confession was so b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l...super loved it..
This was fun exciting beautiful cute oh-so-romantic n eternal just like my Rahi

Sorry me just doesnt stop when I start on Rahi...my perfect two
N u captured my perfect two perfectly.

Thanks sooo much...

Neha

thanks Neha for appreciating it
Ranveer panchi's relation from bff to commited is super cute
thanks a lot for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Stavan 👍🏼 Rahi is indeed a very cute couple, bahaut achcha OS tha..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukisha

Stavan good yaar👏 phele kisha ff,ss aur ab rahi os you are genious😊

thank u so much for appreciating my work . Glad dat u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: MyLifeMyRulz

Stavan thank u
sooo much for giving
perfect rahi
OSes ki to barsat ho rahi he
and I'm loving it
and loved your os
it os awesome

keep writing
Ishita

thank u ishita
glad u liiked this os
yup will surely write soon😊

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