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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Part 17..

Nice update Veena..
Yeh game mein kya kya ho raha hai😆
Haha..Anjali or Rahul sahi haddi hai yaha..dono hi Ram- Priya ko jealous kara rahe hai..😆
Ram ke liye ek taraf kua or ek taraf khayi hai..Priya ko kisi or ke sath bardasht bhi nhi kar sakta or khud kuch bol bhi nhi sakta..😆
Dono jalan mein ek dusre ko pareshan kar rahe hai..or Priya Ram ko sahi challenge karti hai humesha😆
Sabke samne wali date dekhte hai kaisi hogi😆
Thanx for pm..
Sry for late..


its ok...der aye durust aaye
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Part 18..

Nice update Veena..
Andhere mein ek dum nishane mein laga Ram ka tir ya yeh bolo jakar ek dum nishane par mara Ram ne..😆
Galti nhi jan bhuj kar Ram- Priya ki date sabke samne wali kafi achi thi😆 or pata bhi chal gaya ki sabke samne wali date kaisi hoti hai😉😆
Priya ka bday tha..or Ram ne usse spl bana diya..good
Dono hi ek dusre ko kisi or ke sath bardasht nhi kar sakte or badla lene ke liye tayar rehte hai humesha😆
Kisne kya galti ki yeh kab pata chalega😆
Thanx for pm..



chal jayega...😉...shayad abhi pta chal jaye...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aweee

cutie update
superb
iss update me bhi mere liye
thi kuch
dil bad mere
my fav song aweee
thank u di thank u for ur pm


hehehe...thank u thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

good part

Ram ne galti se hi sahi lekin apne pyar ko hi select kiya
Priya ko surprise ram ne priya ki b'day party plan ki thi
love this part
please continue soon and thanks for PM


thank uuu sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

too good
ram priya has went for date yipee
song was also good on which raya danced
now it's priya turn to pick the parchi
i am loving it continue soon thanx for the pm


thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Le main last update me thoda sa jhuk jane ki bat kar hi rhi thi rishto ko behtar bnane ke liye...tabse aaj ek articl bhi dikh gya...ki samjhauta hamesha kamjori nhi hota h balki kabhi kabhi is bat ki bhi nishani hoti h ki aap aham se jyada rishto ko mayne dete hain aur kadr karte hain...isliye hi main khud pr yakeen rakhti hu ki aap sahi karenge to jarur sahi hoga ...koi cheez duniya me isiliye bigadti h taki insan use bnane ki koshish kar sake...jhukne ka mtlb main ye nhi kehti ki ap use samne wale ke liye apni kamjori bna dijiye...balki khud ke liye use takat bnaiye...taki ap khud ko sahi bhi rakhe cheeze sambhal bhi sake aur samne wale se ehsas aur izhar karwa sake ki wo glt tha aur aage glt nhi karega...ye mushkil jarur hai...pr mushkilo se hi to majbut hota h insan...har cheez asan hi hogi to jindgi boring nhi ho jayegi...??...tensions nhi hongi...to deemag khali nhi ho jayega???...suna nhi h khali deemag shaitan ka ghar hota h...to busy rho na cheeze suljhane uljhane me...aise life jyada exciting lagti h...hehehe..khair...moving on update...hope u all like it...

Part 19...

Ram to wha se chala jata h pr priya ki sans to atki hui h...to wo parchi khol nhi rhi hai...

Priya...ek min...dekho mne utha liya pehle...ab anjali ko bhi bolo uthaye aur dono sath me kholenge...

Natasha...han han ye sahi h cmon anjali...ap bhi utha hi lijiye parchi...

Anjali parchi utha leti h...dono sath me hi kholti h...

Anjali...are le mere to kuchh h nhi...ye to sadi h...

Natasha...what???...aur priya tumhari???

Priya...meri bhi...isme bhi kuchh nhi likha h...

Natasha...heyn...let me check last one...are ye bhi blank...ye sari parchi blank kaise ho gyi???...kya jadu h bhai...??..hayeee dulhe raja ap to kahin ke nhi rhe...

Rahul...(man me) tumhe kya pata m kitna safe hu is waqt ...jisne bhi ye kiya h na...is waqt wo jo bhi chahe use mil jaye...mujhe marne se bacha liya usne...

Priya ko sab samjh aa jata h...wo idhar udhar dekhne lagti ram kahin nhi rhta h...sab apne apne mast hain..pr ram kahin nhi h...priya ko is waqt mast rona aa rha tha...are khushi ke ansu h yar...aurto ka genuine problm h hum kuchh nhi kar sakte...priya party se nikal jati h ram ko dhundhne...pure ghar me dhundhti h...ram jitna hi nahi mil rha hai...use utna hi jyada rona aa rha h...bas use lag rha h ek bar ram mil jaye...to use kabhi chhode hi na...pr ram mil hi nhi rha h...bas roye ja rhi h aur ram ko dhundhe ja rhi h...finally apne kamre me aakar...rone lagti h...ki ram kahin nhi mila...udhar party warty khtm ho jati h sab log apne apne ghar aur is ghar ke gharwale apne apne room me...priya neeche utar ke aati h ram abhi tak nhi aya h...use bht dar lag rha tha...ki sach me ram shaadi nhi rokega kya..?? Priya whi baith kar ram ka wait karne lagti h ram nhi ata h...rat ke teen baj gye ram abhi tak nhi aya tha...priya ne vikram se puchha tha use bhi nhi pta tha...upar se ram ka phone bhi nhi lag rha tha...priya whi chair pr baith jati h ankhe band karke...

After half Hr...

Ram ata hai aur kamre me jata h...light nhi jalata h ki priya ko disturb hoga...shirt nikalta h (u know dnt know why main rambabu ko bina shirt ke dekhna chahti...i know ye bewkufi type ki cheez h but still i want see him shirtlesss...mujhe dekhna h golu log bina shirt ke kaise lagte hain...lol..aye pls koi ise otherwise mt lena it just a curosity) aur apna kurta dhundhne lagta h par andhere ki wajah se mil nhi rha hota h to dheere se light on karta h aur dekhta h ki priya kahin uth to nahi...??..but priya wha rhti hi nahi h...ye ram ke liye unexpected tha...itni rat ko priya kahan jayegi...??..wo ekdm se tension ho jati h wo bhagkar neeche ata h...dheere se ma ..dadi...natasha sabke room me dekhta h priya kahin nhi rhti h...uski tension aur badh jati h...sochta h fresh hone to nhi gyi thi...usne washroom me to dekha hi nhi...jane ko hota h tabhi uski nazar priya pr padti h jo dinning table pr hi baithebaithe so gyi thi...ram chain ki sans leta hai...dheere se priya ke pas aata h...aur bend hota h uske sar pr hath rakhta h...priya ki ankh khulti h...wo kuchh kehne jati h to ram fingr rakh deta h..

Ram...ssshhh...may i..

Priya bas dekhti rhti h ram use god me utha leta h aur kamre me lekar jata h...room me jakr wo priya ko neeche utarta h pr priya uske gale lag jati h use chhodti hi nahi...ram thoda wait karta h ki shayad chhod de pr priya nhi hat rhi hoti h to ram bhi priya ki kamar me hath dal deta h aur uske shouldr pr kiss karta h...then priya realise ram try to love her..to wo ram ko push karti h aur wha se hat jati h...

Ram...kya hua???

Priya...aap ye nahi kar sakte???

Ram...kyun???...rahul ne chhua tha to use to nahi mna kiya???uska to koi haq bhi nhi tha...

Priya...achha??...aur apka haq hai...??

Ram...han hai...

Priya...oh to ye bhi bta dijiye ki kya haq h apka...??

Ram...pati hu tumhara...

Priya...oh to pati hone ka haq jata rhe hain...??

Ram...kyun nhi jata sakta???...hu nahi kya???

Priya...hain...mne to kabhi nhi kaha ki nahi hain...apne hi to cheeze bigadi thi...

Ram...han to maine hi bigadi thi to main hi theek kar rha hu...

Ram phir se priya ko gale laga leta h...he try to kiss her...

Priya...ram...leave me...meri shaadi hone wali h

ram...bas priya bht ho gya...ab tum ye nhi bol sakti mujhse...qki mujhe pta h ki tum shaadi nhi karne wali ho...koi shaadi nhi hone wali h...ho hi nhi sakti h...aur us rahul ko to main...

Priya...kya rahul ko to...kya problm h apko usse???

Ram...hai problm...tum meri biwi ho aur tumhe sirf main pyar kar sakta hu...

Priya...han main janti hu ki main apki biwi hu...pr apko apni biwi ko bhi pyar karne ke liye bhi koi na koi wajah na honi chahiye beech me...kyun??? Kyun...ram???...kyun koi teesra chahiye apko mujhe pyar karne ke liye...aap apni khud ki wajah se mujhe pyar nahi kar sakte hain...kyun kisi aur ne chhua to use dikhane ke liye ya mujhe dikhane ke liye apne bhi chhua...aap apni khud ki wajah se kyun nhi chhu sakte...??...kyun kisi ne mujhse bat ki to use dur Karne ke liye aap mere pas aaye...ap khud ki wajah se mere pas kyun nhi aa sakte...kyun...???

Ram...tumhari hi wajah se...tumne hi to kaha tha...ki agr m tumhare pas aya to tum dur chali jaogi...aur main tumhe dur jane nhi de sakta qki main tumse bht pyar karta hu...

Priya...toh glt kaha mne??...apne glti nhi ki thi???

Ram...ki thi...man to rha hu...pr ab tumse dur nhi ho sakta..bht pyar karta hu tumse...

Priya...ho sakta h pati hain isliye pyar aa rha ho...

Ram...nahiii...aisa nhi h main usse bht pehle se pyar karta hu tumse pls believe me...

Priya...toh ap is wajah se kyun nhi chhute mujhe...kyun nhi pas aate mere??...bhul jaiye rahul ko bhul jaiye kal kya hoga...bhul jaiye sabko...bas ek bar sirf apni wajah se pyar kariye mujhe...ye bataiye ki main apke liye mayne rakhti hu...main apke us ek pal me apni sari jindgi jee lungi...pls ram bas ek bar apni wajah ...apne pyar ki wajah se mujhe pyar kariye...pls...

To b continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome di
mazza aa gya padke

bahut kamaal ka tha

infact last ka part bahut touchy tha


i loved it very much
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sry 4 late reply, read last 4 parts in one go, those are as usual awesome,last part was very emotional & touchy, pls continue soon, thx 4 PM
Edited by Dsudipa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏Very strong and emotional words from Priya.Ek tadapti biwi ki pukar to her Golu husband.Rambabu kyun aise hain,duniya ke har kisi ki dard. Samajthe . Hain siwa. apni biwi ke.
Edited by sahana747 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update⭐️
lovely... aakher rambabu ne priya k samane accept karhi liya k he loves her😉
continue soon...
and thanks 4 pm!!!!

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