REVENGEFUL LOVE #7 PART 55 updated on page 116- 7/4/2014 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
The thril was just awesome waiting for some more action
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
superb part
but maneet scenes were less
glad that samarth atleast realized his mistake and reveled his love for maan
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
datz awesome
continue soon
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
awsum part
grrr hw can brij n rp be soo insensitive 😡😡😡😡
hmmm so all this time maan dad was having an eye on wats going though he angry on wat maan done bt still he cares for the safety of his children n thank god he also realised his mistakes 😊
omg my maaneet in jungle n der life in danger 😭😭
cont soon 😭
Edited by ashmaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Oh god...Maaneet in trouble..
Hope nothing will happen to them..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awesome 👏update

omg... maaneet per fairing that to RP order ... seriosaly that man lost his mind ... maaneet both r together n bullet can hit anyone ... he is not carring about his daughter

maan trying to save both n more to keep safe geet

like arpita stand up this time for maan n also samarath indirectly helped maan ...

hope maaneet get out of it soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART - 49

DARKNESS surrounded all around and both lives running to save themselves. Geet's ankle twisted and she falls in small river flowing in the river. Maan controlling and wont panicked. He scooped her and run inside more deeper. Thr forest gave them shed and place to hide. Due to darkness it become difficult for all ruffins to search them. Also they scared of wild beasts,so they decided to set down where they are and search them in the morning. Maan found one deserted place. He took her inside to hide themselves. It looks complete haunted but they wont take risk of going anywhere else. The room was filled with large empty boxes of wood. It seems like some kind of store room which was waiver from ages. Maan placed her on hey stack so she can rest there. He is looking to lighten the place and also to keep her warm. Her clothes were damped. Maan collects small twigs and damaged boxes. With the help of old kerosene tin and match box,he manage to lignite fire to develop warmness. Though it was not enough but much better then before.

'Geet change them or you will catch cold. You are still weak.'Maan glanced at her,noticing the trembling of her body.

'good idea. Maan do me a favour udhar mera wardrobe hai wahase pls mere clothes la do.' she said mockingly and Maan showed his big eyes to her. 'dont stare me. Ab tumne baat hi aisi ki hai to. Kapde badal lo. Yaha konse kapde pade hai mere?' she said jokingly, rolling her eyes.

Maan bend and leaned over her gradually. Geet tilted back and he glance in her eyes. Maan start removing his shirt and her heart skipped many beat. Maan smirked seeing her nervousness. He raised his arm towards her. 'wear it.' he said and wink. Maan step back and moved towards the bornfire. He put some more twigs and wooden pieces to keep it lightened. Meantime Geet removed all her wet clothes and wear his shirt. She apppread behind the boxes. Maan slanted his neck and glance her. She looks nubile more then ever. Seeing her only in his shirt his mouth had gone dry and he could only gaze her speechlessly. Geet to noticed his uneasyness. She just passed by his side and he held her wrist to stop her.
Geet glance back and he freed her. She sat back again on the heystack. In the reflection of dim light her silken smooth skin glowed like a gold. Clearly both felt the same. The longing and craving of having each other is provked inside them.

He step forward and palmed her face gently. She turned her mouth in his palm and kissed. He cupped her face with other hand and then his mouth was movinge against her. He kissed her and every nerve in her body come alive and her skin waited,longing for his touch,the blood running hot bneath.

Kitni Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mili
Kitni Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mili
Tumko Kya Thi Khabar Thi Main Kitni Akeli
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Tumko Kya Thi Khabar Tha Main Kitna Akela
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Ke Kitni Mohhabbat Hai Tumse
Zara Paas Aake To Dekho
Kya Aag Hai Dhadkano Me
Gale Se Laga Ke To Dekho
Batayi Na Jaaye Zubaan Se Yeh Haalat
Meri Jismo Jaan Ko Tumahri Hai Chaahat
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke


The relization was overwhelming,and it sent an electric charge through her body.

Jo Hai Darmiyaan Ek Parda
Ise Jaaneman Ab Hata De
Yehi Faasle Keh Rahe Hain
Chalo Dooriyon Ko Mita De
Na Koyi Tamanna Hai, Na Koyi Hasrat
Mujhe To Sanam Hai Tumhari Zaroorat
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Kitna Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mila
Tumko Kya Thi Khabar Tha Main Kitna Akela
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Kitni Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mili
Kitni Bechain Ho Ke Tum Se Mili
Tumko Kya Thi Khabar Thi Main Kitni Akeli
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Haa Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha


His hand slipped down and start unbuttonig his shirt she wore. His hands were inside his shirt following the elegant line of her spine,the dip of her narrow waist and the flair of her hips,before they moved upwards to caress her bossoms eager for his attention. She sighed and her head fell back,surrendering the long elegant line of her throat to his lips
The fire glow turned her slender figure to the purest gold. He ran his hands over body,something he would never get tired of exploring. Her obvious enjoyment fuelling him. He use his hand,tongue and lips to heighten her pleasure. He removed his shirt to explore her and to feel her as much he can. His skilled fingers teasing her nipple. He took the other in his mouth and stroked the sensitive tip with his tongue before suckle them sweetly. She fists his hairs and pulled more to her. Her bossoms blossomed at his touch, and his hand moved in between her thighs. His long finger rubbing inside her v- lips. She is already moist and now she wants him fully. 'Maan pls',an gasp escape from her mouth,while kissing him. She roamed her hand over her pant and feel his hardness ready for her. She unbuckled in pace moment and start pulling it down with her foot,roaming over his legs. He raised and help her in striping off the remaining barriers. Their everypart mingled in rythem and rubbed against each other. Geet warm him,palming his length.

In return he deepen the kiss. Geet wrapped her armsa around him and caress his back provocatevly. Maan bite her earlobes,while whispering how much he wanted her. How much he is desired for her. Geet clutched his nape and bit his lips. 'move on me Maan.' she pleads huskily. Maan himself was diying to feel her so he parted her legs and placed himself on her soft spot. With a jerk he thrust in her and moved pacily against her. He simply enjoy the feeling of her underneath him. Their longing,cravings of having one is not going to satisfied soon. They going insane and forgot everything. Whole night seems so short for their thurst.

Sun dawn and her she laid,closing her eyes. She felt complete after ages. Geet cradled his head against her bossom with tenderness. He raised his head and both smiled glancing each other. He raised and pecked her swallon lips.

'love you seems so dizzy? Are you ok?',he asked softly while kissing on her forehead.

She too kiss him back and reminds him about the time. 'Maan we have to left the place now. We have to find the way to move out of this forest.'

'i think your clothes were dried now. Have them and we left.' he agreed with her.

Both dressed up and left the place to find a way. But they are not safe,as goons were also in their search. In the sharp light of sun everythng become visible.

Soon one of them scanned both running and he informed his other men. All start chasing them. Both were enclosed by them all. Maan quickly beat two of them to make a way for their running. Soon he get on the right track but they were still behind and one of them came in front of them with a gun. He pointed gun on Maan and ready to shoot him. Geet hugged him to cover him and a voice of shot scared her dreadfully. She clenched her eyes tightly.

'geet i am ok,open your eyes.' Maan sooth her fear.

She opened her eyes and found the ruffin laid shot dead on ground. She glance all around. Piyush was standing there with his guards. He hit the ruffin to save both of them.

Both's eyes gleamed seeing him for their. Piyush open his arms and both ran towards him. He embraced both and caress Maan's head.

'bro aap?' maan asked curiously.

'tum dono theek ho?' Piyush asked worridely.Both nodded and confirmed him. 'no need to scared any more. Police ne sab cover kar liya hai. Baki b jaldi pakde jayenge. Now lets go home.' He asked them to go back to home.

'par bro dad...? Main Geet k bina nahi jaunga.' Maan doubted.

'tu b na. Dad hai wo humare. Unhe b ufikar hai tum dono ki. Infact unhone hi mujhe yaha bheja hai tum dono ko ghar lejane k liye. Now shall we leave Somya or mom ka bura haal hai ro rokar.' Piyush cleared his all doubts and took them away from their safely.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
maneet running 2 save themselves from goons
even in this tensed situation
their longingness takes them 2 a passionate night
piyush came at r8 time n saved both..
nice prt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
awsemmm update maneet romance piyush saved them and taking them home fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Hayeee
wht an update yaar
thnks for the update
loveee it sooo much
maaneet to kahin bhi shuru ho jate h
maaneet ne jungle mai bhi SR mana li
hayeee me blusing blushing
hwt hwt hwt update

maan ne 2 gundo ki pityi bhi kr di
bt pha gye the wo to piyush aa gya shi time par
ab wo maaneet ko ghr lekr ja rha h
maan apne dad ke liye pareshann h
bt piyush ne unhe sab bta diya
ab brij aur uske dad kya karenge?
wating for nxt

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