It's time you let me go : KR OS *based on current track*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kill me!! You can with all izzat. I am writing an OS without update. I know I am a jerk. But , I was one always right?? 🤣


PS: didn't proof read and too lazy to do that !! So please adjust😛😆




" Guys mai chalta hun na " Rey said once again .

"Rey thodi der rukho " Swayam smiled, fake though.

Rey sighed. He hated Swayam at such times. Swayam is a great friend. Like really great friend that he wanna be his support all the time. But right now he wanted to sulk , sit in a corner licking his own wounds. But , here he is, in swayam's house.

He sighed and looked at Sharon who is sitting beside swayam all gloomy. Both he and Swayam wondered why. Okay , Kriya left. But this shouldn't be like this.

Swayam is hell upset, okay ...one can understand. His best-friend left . And he, ?? Let's not talk about the reason but he has the right to be all upset. But Sharon?? They wondered.

"Mai coffee banane jaa raha hun kisiko chahiye?? " Rey asked getting up. Atleast he can keep himself occupied. Why is she affecting him so much??

His heart did reply but he answered back. I can not have feelings for her.

***

" Hello " He spoke grinning sitting straight.

"Swayam!! " she called slowly.

" Kriya!! Pohunch gayi ho?? Everything went fine right?? Safely pochunch gayi?? " he poured questions on her. Sharon who was beside him looked up at him in instant he called her name. For sure she is missing Kriya a lot. She got a new friend. Who became her support when she was weak and the biggest part being they shared their biggest secrets of lives and being each other's support. Ofcourse she will miss. And finally when Sharon thought after all mis-understanding between them , they can finally make best of friends fate again took her away.

Sometimes she felt hatred is far better than love. Atleast this stupid heart won't pain so much.

" I am safe swayam. Abhi land hua hai, taxi keliye wait kar rahi hun. Socha tumhe inform kardun. Tum kaise ho?? " she said making no efforts to hide the sadness in her tone.

"Hmm theek hun!! " he smiled. He loved it when she is honest to him.

" Ummm!! Kya tum...I mean mujhe Kriya se kuch baat karni hai " Sharon asked feeling awkward. It's a known fact that still he thinks that she is faking a friendship.
Swayam frowned. From few days he is seeing something new between Kriya and Sharon. They naturally got along well.

Did they end up as friends in real??? He smiled a bit and handed the phone to Sharon who quickly got up going away to a side. Something irked him. Isn't he more close to the two girls respectively than they are with each other?? Then why this secret talks?? He sighed. He should stop thinking much now and may be a decent talk with sharon solves the mysteries.

" Kriya!! " Sharon called sadly. Everything happened so quickly that they couldn't even share a proper goodbye.

"Sharon?? " Kriya asked surprised.

"Tum swayam ke saath hi ho?? " she felt happy for some reason.

" Haan!! Abhi tak poori tarah se recover nahi kiya na isiliye. Tum batao " she took a pause . "You okay?? " she stressed on it. She did see the hurt in Kriya's eyes when she looked at Rey for the last time. She was hoping everything will get sorted but things are different now.

"Haan!! Mai theek hi hun " Kriya replied trying to be cheerful.

" Miss you already " both the girls spoke at a time and laughed out loud .

Rey who just entered the hall looked at sharon laughing and raised his eyebrow at swayam. Isn't she all sad few minutes back??

"Kriya " swayam mouthed. And the world stopped for Rey.

She called?? That means she reached New York. Hell he wanted to hear her voice right now. It's already suffocating , and before his mind could decided and command to move forward and speak to her he found himself two steps away from sharon. Sharon looked at him knowingly and that look on her best-friends face made her heart wince. He looked so vulnerable and tired.

He didn't know what he should say?? What was he supposed to say?? But he smiled when he saw Sharon forwarding the mobile to him .

he thanked her through eyes and quickly took that piece of machine. Right know it was the most precious thing to him. He placed it on his ear and his cried hard when he heard her still laughing. Least did she knew that it was Rey on the line and Sharon has left long back.

Words fell short. His voice stuck in his throat and he felt week in his knees. His palms already sweating .

Dammit I miss you so much!! I shouldn't have done that. I am sorry Kriya. Please come back .

He finally admitted to himself . Yes he did love her. He had fallen for her all over again. Hell , he always loved her, let it be after that fateful night when she broke his heart, and even then when he first saw her when she came back. Sudden realization and her laugh. He felt Now everything will be perfect.

Kriya stopped laughing as she sensed dead silence on the other end.

"Sharon?? " She called out slowly.

" Kriya!! Tum pohunch gayi?? Are you fine?? Kriya actually " and the world collapsed for him. He looked at the screen shocked to life. All he could see was "call ended" flashing on the screen.

He felt the world turned upside down and he felt almost blank.

Is it too late?? Am I too late to reach out to her??

He looked up at her universe ji helplessly and looked back at the screen.




****

The moment she heard his voice she knew she would break down. She would spit those words to him. She missed him so much. She loved him so much. But he doesn't right??

Then why does he do things that hold her back?? That gives her heart a hope that he has feelings for her. She want to end everything. She is tired of sacrificing. She is tired of acting. She is tired of faking smiles.

Infact she is tired of loving...

"It's time you let me go Rey... " She spoke for herself. Wiping her lone tear now making it's way out she walked ahead to finally start things afresh. He doesn't want her back in his life and she would do her best to keep it that way.

****

"Pleaseee... " he pleaded slowly looking at the screen helpless and let the lone tear make it's way out.



No I am NOT against Reyaansh . But it's time they take some decisions.

And I honestly don't have a clue of what I wrote.

Sad songs ka result bol sakte ho tum log isse


Reviews?? I would love that.. please drop your comments !!😊

-Deetha😊
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sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dee it was marvellous...
i really want such type of connectivity in the show...
yeah..we r nt against reyaansh bt we cant leave her side as well...
yesh he is hurt nd rejected nd hv lost faith in love...bt even she wasnt partying in two years...she have always sacrificed her evrything...its tym she needs a proper justification...even she needs an assurance of him loving her 1st nd then of being by her side always...y to keep her in dark..???
she have the right to smile honestly...
i loved it how u described her thoughts afterwards nd his desperation at the same tym...
i jst hope they dnt patch up jst like that...
beatifully penned down..great job...
PS: check ur scrap
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres... hello hugs..

i love uh didi.. n uh know that..

It was b'ful

the way uh described the emotions..

Wow... Kria and Rey missing each other...

but away from each other *Awiee*

the last part was my favorite
When Rey came out and took the phone...

the whole scene was perfectly pictured.

In the end when Rey admitted and asked her *hows she?*

n she cut the phone... hayee...

knowing she would break down... 😭

though the end was sad... but still I loved it... <3
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc one... :) but sad to see them apart in the last...
sadafarsha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was emotional
They parted away in the end
Aisa kyun
Awsum update i want rey to realize sooon that he still luvs her

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Posted: 11 years ago
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now do you ignore ps jan bujh kr...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. such a nyc one deeth <3
So emotional... but cant bear 2 see dem like dis..
they HAVE to be together.. they OUGHT to be together.. like really : <3
Arssshhaa :* :* :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dnt knw kiski side lun Rey's anger did all but wait Rey to hamesha se hi aisa hai n abt kriya she s d one who alwaz sacrificed *sigh*
lovely OS deetha really felt pain of KR 😔
Edited by ..kunwarSOUL.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!


Guess what! Me too writing an OS on present track! 😆
-VJ.ReyManiac- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os!!! D way u described Rey n Kria's emotions wr superb... I cud feel d pain while reading it!!! But i really want dem to get back together... NT part deir ways!!!!
emotional os... Luved it

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