The Saga of Saraswatichandra...... Part 4 !

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Arshics

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Twila,

Once again I am overwhelmed by the beauty of your picture post

Ek khazana hai Jo samne toh hai

Par nazaron se ojhal bhi hai

Jis mein rakhe hue hain

Kumud ke moti jaise aansoo.

Saras ki sunehri muskaan

Aur chandi jaise Inke armaan

Sheeshe ka dil bhi Saras ka yahan chupa hua

Aur pathar si kathore zid Kumud ki bhi dabi hui idhar

In sab ko dhoondh ke taraash ke sajati hai Twila hamari

Jin lamhon ko bade pyaar se jiya hai humne!!!

Thank you so much dear Twila !

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: annete
Dazzler Twila...👏

Kitni dilkash thi khamoshi uski
batain sari fuzool ho jesain

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pur aaj koi samjha de inko yu khamosh rehne se
taluqat mit bhi jate hai...

Anu ...

Thanks a ton for your wishes , Dear ... 🤗

Aur Ek Khoobsurat Sher ... Masha Allah ... Bahut Khoob ... ⭐️👏

and these lines are soo Apt ...Hope the Makers are realizing , how Wierd it looks ...

One tries to tolerate this " Khaamoshi " and " Chalis Kadam Ki Durii " once or twice , but now it Smacks you in the face ... and is becoming Intolerable ...

Still hoping that today's Holi Episode marks a change ...

Thank you once again , Dear , for the Priceless Poetry ... 😊

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@twila

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Arshi ...

THANK YOU soo much for all the Heartfelt Appreciation , my Friend ... 🤗

and you have written such a Lovely post in response ... How Beautifully you have given words to the dominant feelings of Saras and Kumud during this Phase ... 👏

As I have said on many occassions earlier , let me say it once again ...

You have a wonderful way with words ...and it is Amazing , how you give such a Poetic touch to your lines ... FANTASTIC !! ⭐️👏

Thanks a lot once again , for such a Beautiful response , Dear ... 🤗