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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Very beautiful update Ujjaini. Priya's milan with family is awesomely written. The kiss part is also very nice. U convey the emotions thru the romance. Maahir hain ek dam aap is mein.

Looking forward to Raya shaadi. Please continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for the FIFTH thread dear.

Wish u make many more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Very beautiful update Ujjaini. Priya's milan with family is awesomely written. The kiss part is also very nice. U convey the emotions thru the romance. Maahir hain ek dam aap is mein.


Looking forward to Raya shaadi. Please continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.




thanks for commenting😊, am really glad that u liked the part, pleasure is all mine
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lalmadhu

CONGRATULATIONS for the FIFTH thread dear.


Wish u make many more




thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waitin for ur update
can we get it today ???
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hello everyone, I am back with the next part, hope you all liked it, so here it goes


recap

...sab waise ka waisa hi hain jaisa tum chhod ke gayi thi bas tum aa jao phir main sab kuch theek kar dunga, saying this he kissed her photograph and kept looking at it.




Aaj subah se Kapoor Mansion me dhoom machi huyi hain, aree bhai Ram Kapoor ki shaadi jo hain aur inn sab ke beech me dadi has taken active part, sab ko woh apne nani yaad dila rahi hain, she is very happy today as her Golu has finally got his ladylove back and with that his smile also comes back.


Dadi - oye bansi kya kar raha hain, shagun ka saara samaan ithhe rakh


Bansi kaka kept the shaagun on the table.


Krishnaji - beeji aap itne pareshaan mat hoiyye, sab kuch manage ho jayega


Dadi - Krishna, aaj meri Ram aur Priya ki shaadi hain, mujhe koi garbar nahi chahiye, bas mera Golu khush rahe isse zyada mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye.


Krishnaji - bas beeji main bhi yahi chahti hoon, 2 saal Ram ne kaise beetaye hain yeh sirf ek maa ka dil hi samajh sakta hain, bhale hi woh kuch kehta nahi tha par Priya ka chale jaana usse andar hi andar khayi jaa rahi thi, ab jab woh wapas aayi hain toh main sirf yeh dua karti hoon ke mere bte ki jeevan me wahi khushiyan wapas aa jaye.


Dadi kept her hand on Krishnaji and said tu fikar na kari Krishna, dekhna iss baar babaji sab achha hi karenge.


Krishnaji clasped dadi's hand tightly and nodded her head in positive way.


At 6 in the evening, all the people gathered in the hall of Kapoor Mansion, bas kuch gine chhune log hi aaye hain aur shaadi bhi bohot sadgi se hi hoga kyun ki Ram aur Priya dono yehi chahte hain and with that Ram doesn't want to bother Priya with people's talk as he doesn't want to her the stress. Ram was wearing a white sherwani with multi colour thread work on it and he was standing with Vikram and Rishabh and was discussing some project when ladies came down along with Priya who was in green and golden lehenga choli with pearl set, looking absolutely stunning and gorgeous. Kehte hain ek ladki jab maa banti hain toh aur bhi khoobsurat aur hot ho jati hain, bhale hi Priya ka miscarriage hua tha lekin maa toh bani thi, she was looking stunning and Ram kept looking at her with wide eyes. All came down and Krishnaji made her sit and asked everyone to start the function. Aaj Ram aur Priya ki mehendi aur sangeet ki function hain. Both Shipraji and Sudhirji has come and Priya took the blessings from all of her elders before the mehendi. Shipraji took her in her arms and kissed her forehead lovingly, she said


Shipraji - shaadi bohot bohot mubarak ho beta, khub khush raho


Sudhirji too blessed her and so as dadi and Krishnaji. Ram was still looking at Priya and Neha came to him and said, oye fatty aise ghurna band kar, teri hi biwi hain, phir se dobara shaadi honewali hain, tere paas hi aayegi.


Ram blushed and said kya Neha tu bhi...


Vikram - sach hi toh hain, bas sirf aaj ki raat kal Priya hamesha hamesha ke liye teri hi hogi


Neha came and kept her hand on Ram's arm and said, bohot pyaari lag rahi hain tumhari Priya, iss baar usse jaane mat dena.


Ram smiled while having tears in his eyes, Vikram took him in his hug and hugged him tightly.


Priya was among the ladies, Saumya, Natasha and Neha were there along with Shipraji. Dadi and Krishnaji were sitting on the other side and was encouraging all the ladies to go for mehendi. Before mehendiwali put the mehendi, Priya excused herself and she turned to Krishnaji and said


Priya - kehte hain agar maa shagun ki mehendi lagaye toh sab shubh hota hain, aap nahi lagwayengi mere haathon me?


Krishnaji - beta main kaise...


Priya - aap mujhe apni beti manti hain na toh phir ek beti ke liye apne maa se shubh aur kya ho sakti hain


Krishnaji had tears in her eyes as well as Shipraji. Krishnaji looked at Shipraji and she smiled and gestured her to do the shagun. Krishnaji came and sat beside Priya and put the shagunwali mehendi on her palm. She made a beautiful design and then kissed Priya's forehead softly.


For the next 2 hours Priya had her mehendi and all the other ladies also put mehendi on their palms and then sangeet started and by then Karthik also joins them. Krishnaji was holding her grandson and was also making him enjoy in this auspicious occasion. While sangeet was going on Ram was constantly looking at Priya who was enjoying each and every moment, he can find her old Priya in this new one. For many times Priya's eyes locked with Ram and everytime she can find her Man happy and enormous love for her in those big brown eyes. Priya was enjoying her sangeet infact at times Saumya and Neha took her with them and made her dance, initially Priya resisted but when she looked at Ram, he signaled her to join and she gave a shy smile and joined the ladies and enjoyed thoroughly. Everyone cheered for her so and so in the last part everyone joined and they had a blast. After the function got over, everyone came and sit for the dinner. The lavish dinner was arranged in the lawn under open sky. Priya was staring at her mehendi when Neha came there with two plates in her hand and gave one to Priya.


Neha - here you go saying this handed the plate


Priya took the plate while smiling.


Neha - I hope tumhara mehendi sookh gaa hain, nahin toh main khaane me madad karun?


Priya - areee nahi nahi, its almost dried, I can manage to eat


Neha - are you sure?, ya tum kahon toh main fatty ko bula deti hoon


Priya blushed hearing this and said nahi, am fine, I can manage


Neha - achha dikhayo toh zara tumhari mehendi, dekhoon kaisa aaya hain?


Priya forwarded her hand and it was very beautiful.


While Neha and Priya were chatting, Ram was watching Priya constantly, ek pal ke liye bhi Ram Priya ko akela nahi chhorta hain, he always keep watching her, though he was with Vikram and were discussing about Priya only.


Vikram - Ram, wahan ke doctors ka kya kehna hain, kab tak Priya ko sab kuch yaad aayega?, tune baat ki hain na uski doctor se?


Ram - haan maine baat ki hain and infact he has said that Priya will get back her memories but its just matter of time, waise Priya ko kabhi kabhi hallucinations hote hain, which is pretty normal, bas unka yeh kehna hain ki we shouldn't let her stress for getting back her memory.


Vikram - lekin yaar media ko kaise handle karen?, I mean people will get to know about yours and Priya's marriage aur aise halaat me...


Ram - tu ek kaam kar arrange a press conference and I will attend that, jo bolna hain I will tell them


Vikram - himmat rakh sab theek hoga


Ram - bas ab mujhe sirf Priya ke liye sochna hain, kuch bhi ho jaye I will try my best to make her memory come back.


Vikram - don't worry, tu akela nahi hain, we all are there with you, Priya ke liye kuch bhi


Vikram aur Ram ki aisi hi baatein ho rahi thi ke wahaan Sudhirji aate hain. He came and stand behind Ram and kept his hand on his shoulder. Ram turned and found him standing.


Ram - papa, aap...


Sudhirji - thank you beta, aaj jo itni khushi meri beti ki aakhon me hain woh sirf tumhare wajah se hain, warna hum toh sab...


Ram - papa aap jante hain Priya meri zindagi hain, usse kuch ho jaye main bardaasht nahi kar payunga aur rahi baat khushi ki toh woh main nahi balki Priya ki ane se meri zindagi me khushiyan aayi hain


Sudhirji - Ram tum yeh jo kuchh bhi kar rahe ho sirf Priya ke liye kar rahe ho taaki usse lage ke tum dono shadishuda ho, tum nahin jante beta tumne mere upar...


Ram - papa agar Priya mujhe zindagi bhar ke liye bhi pehchaan nahi payegi na toh bhi main uske liye sab kuch karne ke liye taiyyar hoon, woh bhale hi mujhe yaad na kar paaye lekin mere liye woh meri Priya hain aur duniya ke liye Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor aur yeh haq usse koi nahi chin sakta. Papa aapki Priya aapko zaroor wapas milegi aur yeh mera waada hain aap se.


Sudhirji clasp Ram's both hands in him and Vikram gave support to Sudhirji by keeping his hand on his shoulder and said aap fikar mat kijiye uncleji hum sab hain na, hum log Priya ko sab yaad dila denge.


Sudhirji - janta hoon beta, tum sab ho isi liye mujhe fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hain.


Ram - papa, kal aapki beti ki shaadi hain, kanyadaan bhi aapko karni paregi


Sudhirji - maine toh apni beti ka kanyadaan 3 saal pehele hi kar diya tha aur mujhe garv hain hain maine meri beti ka haath ek aise insaan ke haath me diya hain jisse rishta nibhana khub ata hain, jisse pariwaar aur apno ka khayal rakhna ata hain, meri beti bohot khushnaseeb hain


Ram - papa main aaj phir aap se meri Priya mangti hoon, kya aap mujhe denge?


Sudhirji - kal main uska kanyadaan karunga


While Ram, Vikram and Sudhirji were talking among themselves, Krishnaji, dadi and Shipraji were also talking among themselves.


Krishnaji - aap bilkul befikar rahiye samdhanji Priya iss ghar ki bahu hi nahi meri beti bhi hain, uske liye kuch bhi karna pade toh hum karenge


Shipraji had tears in her eyes, dadi said, Shipraji humari bahu, meri Golu ki patni aur Kapoor khandaan ki badi bahu wapas aa rahi hain isse zyada khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hain, aap bilkul nischhint rahiye.


Shipraji - meri Priya bohot lucky hain jisse aap log mile, main Ram ka jitna bhi shukriya adaa karun woh kaam hoga.


Ram - aap mujhe apna beta maanti hain aur shukriya bhi kehti hain?


All turned and found Ram was standing there along with Vikram and Sudhirji.


Shipraji in flushed face said nahi beta aisi baat nahi hain, bas tum aur Priya dono khush raho yehi dua karti hoon.


Ram - aap sab ki dua hi toh hain jisse mujhe phir se meri Priya wapas mil gayi hain.


Sudhirji - beta yeh tumhara pyaar hi hain jo usse tumhare paas phir se wapas laya hain, hum sab ne toh umeed hi chhod di thi lekin tumne kabhi nahi manaa tha ke Priya ab iss duniya me nahi hain, yeh tumhara vishwaas hi toh tha jo aaj meri beti hamein wapas mili hain.


Dadi - babaji ka lakh lakh meher hain ke Priya wapas aayi hain ab bas sab theek ho jayega.


Vikram - bilkul dadi, kal ke baad phir se Priya iss ghar ki bahu hogi, kyun Ram taiyyar hain na phir se ghodi chadne ke liye?


Ram - not again Vikram!, iss baar nahi


Natasha - kyun bhai, shaadi jab bakayda ho rahi hain phir se toh phir ghodi kyun nahi?


Ram - chhoti yaar tu bhi?, tum log kya pagal ho gaye ho?


Rishabh - kyun bhai, aap dar gaye kya?


Ram - oyeee chhup kar, Ram Kapoor kisi se darta nahi hain samjha?


Vikram - toh tu ghodi chhadne ke liye taiyyar hain?


Ram - no way, saying this he goes from there and everyone bursts into laughing.


Dadi while laughing said oyyeee khoteo tum sab kyun mere Golu ke peeche pade ho?


Natasha came and sit beside her dadi and said, bhai ko chida ne bohot mazaa ata hain, aur yeh mera haq bhi hain, afterall kal shaadi hain unki


Shipraji was smiling and said bilkul, aakhir bhai ki shaadi hain


Krishnaji took Natasha in her embrace lovingly and said achha theek hain jitna chida na hain chida lena kal waise bhi tere bhai ko kal haldi lagnewali hain...


Rishabh - iss baar bhai ko hum sab milke lagayenge haldi kyun Nuts?


Natasha - bilkul peechli baar main nahi kar payi iss baar toh yeh mauka gawane ka sawal hi nahi uthta hain.


Vikram - I agree with you guys, then ready for the dhamaal jo hum sab karenge kal haldi me.


All other smiled hearing this as they all get into the mood of wedding. After everyone goes back to their respective houses, Priya was alone in her room when Krishnaji and Saumya entered.


Priya - areee maa aap?, mujhe bula liya hota


Krishnaji - nahi beta, bas mujhe laga ke zara tumse poonch loon ke tum theek toh ho na, aaj kaafi hectic tha din, tumbhi shayad thhak gayi hogi aur kal subah se rasme shuru honge toh ab tum araam kar lo.


Priya - jee maa


Krishnaji - Saumya zara woh dena toh mujhe


Saumya handed her a box which was like a jewellery box and Krishnaji gave that to Priya.


Krishnaji - beta yeh humari ki khandaani set hain, tumhari dadi saas ne mujhe diya tha, unke saas ne unhe aur aaj main tumhe de rahi hoon, kal shaadi me tum yehi set pehenke beythogi.


Priya took the box and open it, it was a beautiful set of gold and pearl. Priya took blessings from Krishnaji who in turn hugged her tightly and put a feathery kiss on her forehead.


Krishnaji - bas beta, ab so jao, tum bhi thak gayi ho aur aaj Saumya tumhare saath soyegi


Priya - maa iski kya zaroorat hain, main manage kar lungi


Krishnaji - janti hoon beta lekin aaj ki raat Saumya rahegi tumhare saath, I insist


Priya - jee maa


Krishnaji left the two in the room and came back. Saumya and Priya both looked at each other and then they both smiled.


Saumya - bhabhi aap fresh ho jaiyye tab tak main bed laga deti hoon


Priya came in the washroom and freshened up, aaj sach me bohot hectic tha, and now she is feeling very tired and sleepy. She looked at her hand and saw mehendi has dried down and the colour has become deep. She came out and asked Saumya


Priya - Saumya can you plz help with my mehendi, yeh sookh gaya hain


Saumya - bhabhi aap aayiye main kar deti hoon


Saumya and Priya came in the wash basin of the bathroom and Saumya very gently peels of the mehendi, colour bohot gehra aaya hain, Saumya put some oil on it and they both came out.


Priya - thanks Saumya lekin mujhe bohot bura lag raha hain, I mean tumhe mere saath sona hain aaj...


Saumya - achha hain na bhabhi, hamare patiyon ko bhi thoda adat honi chahiye bina hum logon ki kaise lagta hain saying this she winks at her.


Priya smiled and then asked kya Rishabh raat ko abhi bhi taang karta hain?


Priya asked in normal sense but Saumya ko yeh sunn ke ajeeb laga, Priya ne kahan "abhi bhi", iska matlab usse kuch kuch yaad hain, Saumya looks at Priya but couldn't find anything, she shyed a little but couldn't say anything.


Priya - bohot pyaar karta hain na woh tumse?


Saumya - haan bhabhi, bohot accha hain woh


Priya - bas tum dono bohot khush raho


They both come to the bed and lied down, and Saumya asked


Saumya - aap aur bhappa kaise mile Singapore me?


Priya smiled and said ek saree ki shop pe


Saumya - bhappa aur saree?


Priya - haan woh bhi usi shop pe the jahan main thi


Saumya - aur phir?


Priya then told her how she met Ram and then their Singapore tour and then their confession. Saumya was listening to Priya and was trying to figure how she lived these 2 years and what was happening with her in all these days. They both fell into sleep while chatting with each other. On the other hand Ram was in his room, he was in his changing room, was standing in front of his cupboard, he was gazing at Priya's shelves, Ram didn't touched her things, it is kept as it is. Peechle 2 saalon me Ram ne Priya ki ek bhi cheez idhar udhar nahi kiya hain, jaise Priya chhod ke gayi thi waise ka waisa hi hain. Ram opened the drawyer and found her glass bangles, Priya ko kitna pasand the yeh kaanch ki choodiyan, Ram ko yaad hain kaise Priya ne usse bohot excited hoke kahan tha ke usse yeh pasand hain, in fact Ram ne kabhi kahan nahi usse lekin usse bhi uske inn choodiyon se bohot pyaar hain, he also likes to see them on Priya's wrist, inn sabki khanak me usse Priya ki hi awaaz sunayi deti hain. Ram brushed his fingers on these bangles when his eyes fell on the sil night gown which she wore in their honeymoon. The pistchaio colour suits her very much. Ram took that in his hand and placed infront of his nose, he inhaled the smell, aaj bhi isse Priya ki khushboo aati hain. A smile came on his lips, Rishabh ki shaadi ke waqt Priya ne yeh lalaji ki kothi me pehni thi aur woh bohot sharmaayi thi, par Ram janta hain ke Priya ne sirf uske liye yeh night gown pehni thi, in fact unn logon ke mini honeymoon pe bhi Ram ke zid ki wajah se hi Priya woh dress pehni thi. Priya ki hare k saree aur dresses par Ram apna ungli firaa raha tha jaise maano chhuke yeh ehsaas karna chahta hain ke yeh koi khwaab nahi. Ram took out one jewellery case and opened it, Priya's mangalsutram was there. He took that in his hand and said dekho Priya maine tumhari mangalsutram bhi theek karwa di hain aur kal isse tumhe main wapas pehna dunga, tumhari amanat tumhe soonp dunga.


Next day, aaj Kapoor Mansion me itni chehel pehel hain ke maano jaise lag raha hain har koi apna kaam chhod ke yahin pe aa gaya hain. Hall me sab ladies taiyyari me jute huye hain, Natasha aur Neha haldi ki arrangement kar rahi hain toh udhaar Saumya kitchen me dekh rahi hain sab theek hain ke nahi, all over supervision ke liye dadi toh hain hi. Krishnaji came in the kitchen where Saumya along with Bansi kaka was arranging the snacks.


Krishnaji - beta Priya taiyyar ho gayi hain kya?, haldi ka waqt ho chala hain


Neha who came in the kitchen that time said auntyji main Priya ko leke aati hoon.


When Neha came in Priya's room she found Priya was ready and was waiting. She was wearing a yellow and green combination saree with some bangles and a chain with pendant and ear tops, she has put some kajaal and it made her look more beautiful. Neha ko 3 saal pehele ki shaadi yaad aa gayi, he wiped the corner of her eyes and came inside the room.


Neha - so are you ready for the mission, madam?


Priya smiled and nodded her head


While Neha and Priya came in the hall, Vikram along with Rishabh and Karthik came with Ram in the hall. It was decided that Ram and Priya ko haldi ek saath chadegi. Ram was wearing a peach coloured kurta and chudidaar. With men coming down the hall everyone geared up for the rasm.


Neha - fatty taiyyar ho jaa haldi lagwane ke liye


Ram - tu aise dara mat mujhe


Vikram - isse darnewali kya baat hain aur waise bhi dekh Priya haldi lagake aur khoobsurat ho jayegi toh tu bhi thoda achha dikhna chahiye na?


Ram - tera matlab kya hain, main achha nahi dikhta?


Natasha - nahi bhai aap bohot ache dikhte hain lekin bhabhi se kam


Dadi - achha bas bas ab tum log rasm shuru karo


Pehele Priya ko haldi lagwaye gaye, iss baar Natasha sang Rishabh, Karthik aur Saumya bhi haldi lagwayi Priya ko, Neha ne bohot masti ki, Shipraji and Sudhirji also put haldi to Priya. Jab sab usse haldi lagwa rahe the toh Ram sirf Priya ko dekh raha tha, she was looking very radiant, iss saree me uski khoobsurti aur bhi nikhar ke bahar aa rahi thi. Priya ke gaalon pe aur forehead pe haldi lagi huyi hain aur haathon aur peyron par bhi, Ram noticed Priya wore a silver payal on her feet jisse uski peyr aur bhi achhi lag rahi thi. Priya was smiling and laughing with others and Ram was just keep looking at her. Vikram looked at Ram and found his friend is mesmerized in his ladylove. He kept his hand on his shoulder and said


Vikram - aakhon se sab kuch abhi keh dega toh raat ko kya karega?


Ram flushed hearing him, Vikram smiled at his uneasiness, aaj bhi Ram waise ka waisa hi hain, lekin Vikram dekh raha ha Ram ki aakhon ko jahjan Priya ke liye beshumar mohobbat hain. Priya ko ab haldi chadd chuki thi toh sab Ram ko bitha diya aur sabse pehele Natasha ne Ram ko haldi lagwaya, then turn by turn sab ne lagwaya, Neha ne toh pura katora hi uske upar daal diya, bechara Ram kuch kar bhi nahi paya, chhupchhap sab kuch sehta gaya. Rishabh ne bhi jam ke lagwayi Ram ko haldi, uski dil-i-khawahish puri huyi kyunki uske shaadi me bhi Ram ne usse tease kiya tha, toh uska badla usne iss tarah se aakhir le hi liya. Saumya ne bhi sab ke saath milke inn dono ko haldi lagwaye. After the rasm both Ram and Priya went to take bath and others started gearing up for evening function.




RaYa marriage in the next part


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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awesome update
loved it very much

cnt wait 4 their marriage
i dnt know bt mujhe lag rha hai ki Priya ko sab kuch shaadi ke waqt yaad aa jaatega

cnt wait for ur next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update Ujjaini. The emotions of everyone in the family is well described. lets see shaadi mein kya hotha hai. Will Priya get her memory back in her wedding? I m waiting eagerly for their wedding.

Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update👏
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
AWESOME UPDATE!!!
waiting 4 their marriage to happen!!!
wana see them together 😊!!!
and how is priya gona recover from memory loss???
continue soon...
and thanks 4 pm!!!

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