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sushmakryan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
jeevika is the really beautiful
we can imagine
how she will be looking
in her dress
to see the beautiful diva
our
hero
i mean
viren
came from
window
poor boy
how can he struggling
there
and he finally
saw his beautiful
diva
and
she is thinking he dont want to be here na
and viren getting on this
and he told he will take the revenge of after marriage
in his first night
after
all the ladies are eating food by their husband
and viren is not there and jeevika got more angry
after so much long he came their
and he finally eat it thier
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
mind blowing
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by arshiasushma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank God u are back !
After a long time u are back !
U know i am just in love with ur writing style and ur story!
And u kept me awaited for a long time!
Plzz dont do this like tht again !
Coming to the update !
The update was superb !
I am just totally in love with ur writing style and ur story !
The way u write its superb !
Awww i love the scenes of Virika
They are so so so cute !
I just love them !
Love their cute convos !
In short the update was superb! No words !
Now plz dont dare to update so late !
Plzz update soon this time !
Love u,
Rashi 😊
Edited by cuty_piee - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello Sweeties!! 😊

Well, There's A Request I Wanted To Make To All My Fellas Here!
Kindly Post You're Views About The Updates, So Incase, If There's This Improvement In Me To Be Done, Will Be More Easier For Me As I Would Clearly Know What You Guys Desire To Read? And As Much As Possible, I May Try Giving It A Shape, And Then Post Up The Next Updates!

And The Reader's Not On My Buddy List Make Sure You Guys Add Me If You Wish For A PM From Me!

Thanks For Bearing Along!!
Take Care All!

And Apologies All Over Again For Keeping You'll Wait For The Updates!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter ~ 13

One Side I Was Happy The Other Side I Was Sad. Happy Because I'll Be Marrying Viren Tomorrow, Sad Because I'll Be Leaving My Family.

Just As I Flipped The Page Of Book, Everyone Entered. Bhai And Di Sat Next To Me. While Virat Vedika Bhabhi Jiju Sat Surrounding Us On My Huge Bed.
Viren Was Missing. He Had To Rush To His Firm Early Morning!

We Spent A Quality Time Sharing. And Recollecting Our Childhood. At The Same Time I Could know Virat And Vedika.A Little More. While Bhabhi And Jiju Shared Their Funtimes With Bhai And Di Respectively.

When I Was Alone Getting Ready For The Chuda Rasam, Viren Entered The Room Locking The Door Behind.
J - "What Are You Doing Here? Go Get Ready For Your Haldi Ceremony Mr. Vadhera! Go Before Anyone Sees You! We Are Not Supposed To Meet Till Tomorrow!"
V - "Are FMji! Calm Down! You Speak Too Much..We Cannot Meet That's I'm Here...Haawww...I Cannot See You For Next 30 Hours!! -_- Very Bad..."
Jeevika Giggled As He Said This.
J - "Achha Ji!? Aur Jab Aap Busy Hote Hon Tab? Tab Yaad Nahi Aati Aapko?"
V - "Nothing As Such..But Now You're Gonna Be My Wife You See. We'll Be Together Always, And I Can't Say Away From You Anymore...So..."
J - "Okay, Enough Of Your Explanations...Dekh Liya Mujhe? Now Go!!"
V - "Jaane Se Pehle Ek Kiss?" He Said Holding Me Close To Him.
I Gave A Peck On His Cheeks.
V - "Always Disappointing!" He Said Making A Puppy Face.
J - "Whatever Viren! Now Go!"
V - "I'm Seriously Not Going To Spare You Mrs. Vadhera!" He Said Kissing Her.
Jeevika Stood There Blushing As Viren Left.
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I Was On Terrace Alone, Standing There Near The Railing Staring At The Crescent Moon. The Rough And Humid Breeze Blowing Through My Hairs Making Them Flutter In The Mid Air. My Chuda Making Sounds As I Moved My Hands. It Was An Awesome Feeling. I Was To Get Married Tomorrow! But I Was Also To Leave My Family Tomorrow! Wow! My House Would Be Not Mine Anymore. Just As My Mind Pondered Upon Several Things, I Was Engulfed In A Hug. Im Shrugged Him.

Viren's POV
She Shrugged Me Off And Shot Me Dead Look Asking Me "What Are You Doing Here? And How Did You Know I'm On Terrace??"
V - "Cool Wifey! Don't Scream! Koi Jaag Jayega!" I Said Making Her Close To Me With My Hands On Her Waist And Her On My Chest.
J - "Pehle Batao! What're You Doing Here? You Aren't Supposed To Be Here Mr!"
V - "I Can Be Anywhere I Won't! For Now I Need A Kiss!"
J - "What!? No!!" She Said Trying To Free Herself.
V - "I'm Too Strong For You!" I Said Grinning. "Why Do You Even Try? I'm Not Gonna Leave You! Never!" I Said Kissing Her. Its When I Sensed Tears On Her Lips I Broke Apart Gazing At Her. Just As I Wiped Her Tears, She Hugged Me Tightly.
J - "I Know I'll Be Happy With You Viren, But I Can't Miss Bhai, And Dad And Bhabhi..."
V - "I Know You Can't! If You Want We Can Postpone The Marriage Ad Of Now, And Get Married Later! I Did Ask You Hain Na?"
She Glanced At Me, And Punched Me Hard On The Arms, I Winced "Ooowww...That Hurts..."
J - "Postpone The Marriage Really!?" -_- "You Can't Wait Till Than Not Can I! And Maybe Because Of This Dad May Get Hurt Even!"
V - "One Side You Say You Can't Stay Away From Me, The Other Side You Say You Can't Miss Your Family! What Do I Do Of Yours!"
J - "Leave It You'll Never Understand! And Leave Me Also! Go Sleep!"
V - "Never In This LifeTime I'm Gonna Leave You Wifey!" I Kissed Her Forehead. "This Chuda Adds You Little More Beauty Mrs. Vadhera, And It Also Makes You Mine!" She Blushed. "One Thing's Missing..." She Shot Me A Questioning Look, "You'll Find Out Tomorrow..." I Said Winking. "For Now, Lets Go And Sleep!" I Said Kissing Her Again.
I Dropped Her To Her Room Then Left For Mine.
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Viren's POV
It Was Our Day Finally! We Were Going To Get Married!!
I Paced Impatiently In My Room, Thinking How Pretty And Gorgeous Jeevika Would Be Looking! I So Wanted To See Her Right Now!! Snapping Me Out Of My Thoughts Vedika And Virat Entered.
Vi - "Bhai! You're Looking Sexy And Handsome In This Sherwani..." He Said Smirking.
Ve - "Excuse Me!??" She Said Rolling Her Eyes. "Bhabhi Is Looking Way Better Than This Idiot Bhai Of Yours!"
V - "Oye BookWorm! Party Change Kardi? Bhai Ke Team Se Bhabhi Ke Team Mein?" I Said With Shocked Expressions.
Vi - "Bhai, Yeh Sab Choro, Lets Go,Everyone Is Waiting For You! After Sometime Bhabhi Will Come Also!"

We Trio Went To The Mandap, I Settled Down Waiting For Wifey, While Vedika And Virat Sat Behind Me.
Every Single Minute Passing By Was Like Hours To Me!
Just As Jeevika Entered The Mandap, Virat Nudged Me Lightly, Alerting Me That She Had Arrived. Just As My Eyes Fell On Her, I Couldn't Help Staring Her. Her Unusual Blush, The Red Color Heavy Lehnga She Wore, Her Chuda, Everything!! She Looked Stunning!! She Was Made To Sit Next To Me By Niki Di. I Could Hear Everyone Praising The Two Of Us, How Great We Looked Together, And From The Corner Of My Eye, I Could See Jeevika Smiling At The Comments And Blushing At The Same Time, Maybe She Knew I Was Staring At Her. We Performed All The Rites And Rituals, Finally We Were Declared Husband And Wife. The Bidaai Was Something That Pinched My Heart. I Couldn't See Her Cry...!!!!
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Jeevika's POV
I Sat In The Car Next To Viren Crying, He Held Me Tight And I Rested On His Shoulders..He Consoled Me.

I Was Welcomed Into The Huge House Of The Vadhera's At Some What 7 In The Evening. First Ever Time I Was Here! It Was A Gorgeous House! With Interiors Superficial And It Would Easily Tell The Living Of The Vadhera's, Their Likes, Dislikes, Each Room Had It's Different Touch!
I And Viren Settled On The Couch With Everyone After My Short Tour Into The House.
We Performed The Anghooti Rasam In Which I Won! ;) And In Between Viren Tried To Romance With Me. God! I Really Hope No One Noticed!! I Was Dropped Into Viren's Room Later By Vedika.
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Phewww 😛 😆
Chapter 13!
I Don't Really Think It's Good Enough Though...It's All Crappy!! 🤢
Drop You Comments, Likes & Views!! 😊
Take Care All!
And Thank You For Bearing Me! 😆

Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!
*unres
yayyy im first

wowww wat an update
awww
it was cute
bless
aww romance in between
luved it
jeevika cried
bless
awww
and viren consoles her on the terrace
yayy they were getttin married
whooo
awww there bidaai and jeevika cried and viren comforts her in the car
aww blesss
vadhera house looks huge
lol
the ring ceromany and romance
rofll!!🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
over all it was amazing
loved it
its not crap at all
its winderful
superb
soo noo negative comments
cont soon
thnx!!😊
Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
EEKKKsss...🥳
what a perfect update riddhi👏⭐️

u write so good yaar👍🏼
amazing👏


OMG OMG OMG virika are married ☺️🤗
finally they are one 😳

superbly update i read this update more than 5 times☺️😊😳 really😳
u have described each and every emotions so beautifully❤️
awww poor jeevika will miss her family😭
but not to forget if her hubby is there with her she will not miss anyone😉
aww i love them u make me fall on them more and more ❤️
u r awesome 👏
loved it ❤️
i m spell bounded😊
totally😊


u r superb writer no doubt👏👍🏼
dare u say anything about ur update😡
update soon 😆
waiting waiting waiting😆😆
cant get over it😉😳
i want an update like right now😊
plz update soon😃😃
don't make me wait so much😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Finally they r married now..
Viren is always in a romantic mood😳
Update soon..
waiting to see their married life
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my my ..
am I dreaming or u r surprising me !!!
gosh.. girl u have tht charm to make me crave fr more nd more !!!!
I m completely in love with ur story !!!
u better nt make me wait fr so long nd update soon ! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ya
poor jeevika
one side she is happy with marriage
because she is marring with viren
and another side she is not happy with marriage
she is not ready to leave the family
and viren is confused what do she is cry
viren cant leave with out seeing her for one minute
jeevika is when she always tell viren
we guys dont want to see
and
finally
a
day
came
virika
is
waiting
marriage
and viren is waiting to see her soon to be wifey
and when she arived he is seeing her from side of eyes
and viren
is naughty guy
he always romance with jeevika
total
amazing update
superb
fantastic
continue soon
if u can please do some virika nok jhoka scene



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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing...
loved it...
plz update soon...
thanx for the pm.

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