Small SS drunk ishita..! Edit, part 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone.. Being a newbie, it's my first SS.. Actually im eagerly waiting for ishita's drunk scene and couldn't stop thinking about the sequence..so here's my small scenario.

Starts with ishita drinking coke, spiked with vodka. Which Raman gives to her(as we saw in the precap) after giving her bottle of coke Raman wents inside to change. And ishita, unaware about her mother in lows karamat, gulps it down. Just after few minutes Raman comes out sees ishita waiting for him..
Let's go.. Says Raman.
Ishita: bade handsome lagre ho aaj tum,in a tender voice.
Raman smells something fishy. He looks at her, and asks, tum thik toh ho? While ishita turns towards him, and says, tum is black shirt mein kya kamal lagre ho. You know sab ne musse kaha ke mera pati boht handsome hai but mujhe kabhi nahi laga pr aaj lagra hai, says ishita in a light tone. Trying to hug him, but due to her sloshed condition, she looses her balance, and falls on him. While he catches her in his arms(a romantic eye lock).. Sambhal kar nhi chal sakti tum? Asks Raman. Nahi, kyuki mein janti hun tum sambhal loge. Says ishita.(again an eye contact)
He stands and lefts, ignoring an eye contact with her. He finds the bottle spiked with vodka, he gets everything. Mom, it's definitely you, bhagwan kaha phass gaya, he mumbles.
Kya hua? Chalo na amma appa k anniversary k liye late hora hai, challo na..says Ishita.
Pehle hosh toh sambhal lo tum.. Says raman!
chalo ab and he grabs her hand and both walks towards the door. As they walk, Raman says, suno mera hath mat chodna warna gir jaogi aur sabko pata chal jayega..
Kabhi nahi chodungi, says ishita.
Raman glance at her.. As her senseless words makes sense to him.. And they enters iyer's house.

Ok, that's it for now, will try to continue soon if possible. hope you guys liked it.. Will wait for your comments, and since it's my 1st SS so all types of comments welcomed. 😳

Hello guys, I'm back with part two, after of all thank you everyone for your lovely comments..much appreciated😊


[Part 2]

Together they walks into iyer's house, hand in hand, everyone's happy to see them like that, especially mr n mrs iyer. Mrs iyer comes there and hugs ishita, soon she realises, something wrong with her daughter. And asks her, ishu tum thik ho na? Mrs iyer enquires. Yeah amma, shes alright, bas humesha ki tarah bhehki hui hai, and smirks looking at ishita. Meanwhile toshiji comes there and asks, oyee inni der kyu hui? Mom apne kya kiya... Mummji! Aap humesha mujhe blame kyu karti hai jab galti aapke Ram... Nahi Ravan kumar se hoti hai, kyu?? Raman gives a hitting stare at ishita..
Oyyie, kya bolli tu mere puttar nu?! Ravan kumar, oye teri yeh majal. Says angry toshi ji 😆 listening to these, mrs Iyer enquires, what's the matter.
Tere kudhi nu puch ki gal ki hai, apne pati ko Ravan boli, says toshi.
Ayyo, ishu, verry bad tum apne pati ko ravan kaise bologi- mrs Iyer. (and both mrs iyer n mrs bhalla starts fighting verbally)
Arre yaar, ab yeh naya drama, mutters Raman. And trys to escape from there with her. While subbu's mother stops them, and starts taunting ishita, but this time Raman trys to defend her by saying, jo hai jaisi hai meri patni hai, how dare you talk to her like this?! Subbu's mother leaves.
Thank you so much Rav.. Nahi raman, says Ishita n smiles at him. Jyada kush mat ho meine jo kuch bhi kiya apne liye kiya, says Raman, in his sexy rugged voice. And takes her to the house. Raman, like a lovely husband takes his smashed wife to their bedroom.
Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho, says ishu romantically. And grabs him towards her. Tumhe chad gayi hai jyada, says Raman, escaping an eye contact, since he knew he couldn't control himself if he'd look into her eyes. And trys to make her sleep on the bed, but she refuses. He perched himself on the ledge of the bed. Ishita comes there and sits besides him. And asks him, kya tum shagun se abhi pyar karte ho? Woh humesha kehti hai you do?! Nahi! Mein apne aap se nafrat karta hun, aur shayad kisise pyaar kar nahi paunga, par tumhe isse kya?? Says Raman, and he stands up and begins to leave, but ishita drags him towards her, he accidentally falls on her, they look into each other's eyes, now without any hesitant. ishita grabs him more closer to her, even he doesn't try to stop her, and she gently kiss on his lips but falls asleep after few seconds. While Raman gets up and cursed himself, meine yeh kya kiya yeh toh hosh mein nahi thi, par mujhe kya hogya tha?! And stares at her, but not so romantically.

Okay, it ends here hope guys enjoyed! 😊


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This is really good! You should continue it!
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Wow😊...please do continue😊 loved it😳
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: canadiankudi

This is really good! You should continue it!



Thank you... Yeah i will contongue soon! 😊
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Originally posted by: simples28

Wow😊...please do continue😊loved it😳



Thank you do much.. 😊
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oh wooowww...😃😃loved the 2nd part too😊
pls update soon..waiting for the next one😃😃

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