Swayam Shekhawat : How it all began.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Swayam's POV just after he is hit:-


The world curtly slows
As my actions expose
My love about which d world knows
But my concern is the feelings she shows
Suddenly her eyes meet mine and the moment froze
And slowly my eyes close
To a different world as i transpose.

My surroundings are a haze
In my mind the memories blaze
And the time replays
The start of my love the feelings the days
Of which the love more deeper still stays.
It was not love at first sight craze
How could i love the shallow person she portrays?
But i knew not it was just to faze
Her ethereal inner beauty i did not yet gaze
But once i saw it,i went into a daze.

I remember the brat solitary in the rain
Even the memory of it has pain.
First time the real-she cries without self-restrain,
Strangely her vulnerable fragility makes me emotionally drain
I need the reason why her crying and pain pertain
Her next words and her action they explain
She was unloved hence pretends to be vain
How could i know this and still be sane
I loved her that day without any refrain
Till now i made the love sustain
More passion but it had to gain
With this my consciousness i regain.

Now all my eyes search is her eyes
Seeing which all i feel is surprise
Is this love in them or just a surmise?
But definitely concern and worry underlies,
However much she does to disguise
I thought we had said our goodbyes
When she falsified our relation, my tries.
Now i know i was not so wise
To succumb to my brain when it denies
That feelings are buried,love never dies
This is all needed for our love to ultimately suffice
Hence in front of u reader my story peacefully lies...
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mrins thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful lines 👍🏼 👏
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😲
Edited by ..euphoria.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welll well well
thats nice to see this poem here

told you its beautiful 😃

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

🤗 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome 👏

bt pls increase the font size
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good.. awesome... superb... loved it dear... keep writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SP this is a talent I just today discovered and you're bloody awesome at it..
Am not a poetic person but your lines made me fall in love with this piece of work simply beautiful..
I'm speechless you've done an amazing job with this wow just wow love you for writing something so good..❤️.
Love,
ID..🤗.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg!!
Thats brillent veru...no doubt each word convey a beautiful meaning towards dedicator. And you express so well with finnest message.
Jst love it...hatsoff girl
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just awesome... 👏 keep writing... ❤️

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