ArYa OS: Arti's Makeover - COMPLETE (Pg 7) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: chitsri65

Wow ! Superb romantic update 👏 Thank U.



Thank you Chits. If you enjoyed it, i am happy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: roserosey

hmm...even i read it before but still that was a best valentine gift from u ...love of aarya⭐️...but u know i m waiting for the bestest gift now kat😉...second chances😉😉...

that was amazing to read this again and agian kat ...
thank u so much for posting it here dear🤗

superb work ⭐️




Thank you Rose. It quite amazes me that some of you are willing to read and re-read my stories 🤗.

Well, the Valentine's gift for Second Chances went up on the 14th and its aftermath went up today.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ChiefJustice00

Hello dear , thank for such a wonderful OS 😳

Really enjoyed reading 😛.



Should i call you "Judge sahab"?

Thank you - glad you enjoyed the story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: pankhudi_TiaRa

Hey Kate thank you for making my boring day so much better with your beautiful update 😛.

Left me breathless with this romantic update ..😳

Enjoyed reading it again 😳.


Happy Valentine's Day sweetheart 😃.




Breathless huh? 😆 good, good. Imagination is a very powerful thing - i didn't write anything you know. Hints that took shape in your mind 😆.

Hope you had a lovely Valentine's Day.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sb1410

love it !!!! an awesome story love aarya's romance



Thank you SB!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RA17

OMG Kat wat was that man i have read it blog n now again but the essence is all over again turn me on 😳☺️

the lady got herself prepared herself as gift for her man👏 ( okay in this case i agree its our cute naughty Zo n certainly she is a true friend to aarti in her thick n thins)

coming to yash poor feelo have to work on his birthday n after a hot morning kiss oh my my but i guess intezaar ka phal mitha tha n here he has been served to the most delicious delicacy he can have 😉


i thoroughly enjoyed it KAT n glad you post here so that i can put my feeling in words for you

arz kiya hai
raah takhte takhte jaane kab raat ho gayi
uski ek jhalk se andhere me roshni ho gayi
uski ek chuan ne jaane zindagi kab zinda ho gayi 😳




Oh my god Ria - that last line is incredible! Thank you!

Lol - all hot and sweaty are you 😉? Like i told Pankhudi, imagination bahut hi powerful cheez hai mere dost.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR


Yup !! 😛 Hehe... It is a big twist of the story and gonna end soon !! 😳

No no... Actually I'm angry with myself for not leaving a comment for your DJH !! I do feel bad and so for this, I don't wanna read it silently and so I am commenting and hitting likes too for your work !! 😃



PART 2


Sheessshh.. What was that ?? This is a wonderful piece of OS from you !! 👏👏👏

And I go 🤢 each time you describe Aarti's makeover and beauty !! Drop dead gorgeous she is !! (And in real too... KS !! ) ❤️

Yash ji toh gaaya kaam se... He's astonished, impressed and his eyes were totally gummed on Aarti !! ☺️ Man... their romance !! Hailaa !!

Now I'm so happy to read this treat from you !! Thank you so much Kat for posting this here !! Keep up the good work as a fantastic writer !! God bless you always !! 🤗 ❤️



Not to worry yaar!

Hehe - glad you liked this one. A little romance was overdue in DJH so i had written this one. I think i got more personal notes and feedback on this one piece than on anything else i have ever written!

And if you don't mind Isya, can you pm me the link to your story?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kdsubs



Oh my god Ria - that last line is incredible! Thank you!

Lol - all hot and sweaty are you 😉? Like i told Pankhudi, imagination bahut hi powerful cheez hai mere dost.


read my pm

yeah last line was actually even my personal fav too its too good to be true hai naa

but yes i love zoya n pampering is your self is always i too love too was fun for me n i relate morw with zoya than aarti😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 1 😉

Omg kat dear !!! what have you done with arthi 😲😲😲
oh wow zoya is preparing yash's special birthday gift haheem 😆😆😆😆
poor arthi .. her long beautiful silky hair is cut short and lot of extra treatments with so much pain..

yet at the end of it 😛 i know she will be looking ravishing for yash to have her ☺️
nobody could think like this naughty girl zoya 😃😆
so sweet update dear ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm now coming to chapter 2 😉
the most romantic update for our hero yash 😆

first yash would have thought of his tiredness from the stressful work that he had and in that condition too arthi's sweet kiss in the morning made smile play in his lips..

but more than that what was waiting for him will make his energy triple the amount 😆😆😆
and yes it did too.. the slimy gorgeous figure of arthi in dim lights took his heart away 🤢 and that long distant dinner 🤣 poor yash could not leave her at so much distance 😆 and they skipped the desert too hahaha...

then comes another treat which yash never expected.. i am sure any man would fall in front of such a beautiful girl so why not the owner of the lady 😉
sooo beautiful lovely OS dear... thank u so much for this pleasurable reading 😳😳😳😳

your works are always a treat to read with romance 😛😛😛😛 love you kat dear hugs

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