SwaRon OneShot: The curious case of the missing anklet - Page 2

First of all I m commenting here not because I louedd This os,its only coz u gave me Ahem Rehne de 🤣
Title is erm different very different 😳
The locker room sharon-simmi part was really nice.
Sharon reminiscing old memories n events n the way her Facial expression changes Just by taking swayam's name was Soo ahh Sweet?Yeah Indeed sweet.
Anklet? Lol This is soo swayamish way to keep sharon's Anklet With himself soo carefully,afterall he is a loverboy 😎.
Fire exit part was my fav when swayam kept thinking about sharon and sharon cutely staring at cute swayam 😆 .N u knw what U Describe all this soo well 👍🏼 U r improving u see*Sangat ka asar*
The best part of current track is that This time sharon Becomes the lover girl for her lover boy n coz of that we readers get so many amazing os on how will sharon manofy swayam n this os is no less.Simple yet Amazing.
I loved the ending.Sometimes unsaid words said all ur feeling n its a start of something new.
well done dushman
nice os
n me jhutt bol ke thak gi.Hope u liked this comnent coz U knw I m sleepy.:P

Hey mihika the os was lovely simple cute and adorable.. I liked how you portrayed swayam and sharon's pov's they were pleasing to read I myself slipped into a trance while reading your OS trust me girl that was the intensity and awesomeness of your write up..😊.
The day dream swayam's lost behaviour his internal words of appreciation for sharon.. Sharon's promise to get him back in her life everything was written beautifully by you..👍🏼.
Keep up the awesome work girl..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..😊

Wow mihi.. this was a good one... Sharon's feelings, her anticipation, her thirst to get him back, her admiral everything was shown in such a beautiful way... Swayam cant move on.. coz sharon has a den in his heart and that place is permanent.. so none could help in it... Amazing work dear.. keep writing...
P.S- No thanks okay ;)

That was really nice :)