VriMar FF: Teenage Love - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago
VriMar ff...wow
Read all parts in one go
Superb work di
Vrinda n naina r so cute
Luved deir frndship
Ela n vrinda part was so funny
Amar entry..awsum
Pheli naza ma pyaar ni takrar ho gyi vrimar k bich ma
Abhimanyu entry was funny at the same time cute too
I luv parth alot yr...thanx fr including him
Bb court part was nice n well written
Plzzz updt asap n PM me

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Posted: 11 years ago
please continue soon and pm me 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
new concept.
lovely story.
plz update soon and do pm me plz.
hoping vrimar will be a dancing couple.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome concept story and updates...👍🏼 👏

Read all the parts in one go...😊

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😉

Pm me when u update nxt part...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello to all my lovely readers. Shocked to me! Even I am 😆

Anyway, it just came to mind that I am NOT LEAVING IF so why not continue my ff. I am sure almost sab bohot khush hain. Even I am! After all writing is my passion. And writing for my readers is like "Sone pe suhaga" I know bohot ganda tha. Sorry *Holds Ears*. I am here with two updates. So enjoy and don't forget to hit like and comment. I'll be waiting.

PS: These updates are very especially dedicated to my two sweethearts.

1) Hima Didu: For inspiring me to write with her lovely OS's and FF's. Love You Didu :*

2) Shweta aka "The girl whom Amar followed": These may be just to say a heart felt sorry. Maine jaan boochke nahi kia yaal 😭 Maaf kalde pleash! Love You yaal :* Me plomish kalti hoon jaldi camment kalungi. Pakka! Shorry na 😭

Okay aap sab ka zyada time nahi lungi! The next Post is the update! Love you all :*

Do not forget to hit like and comment 😃

Lots of love: Ale ❤️
Edited by Ale_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 6: Announcement of couples for the competition.

Next Day...

Scene: Class X B

Naina and Vrinda are already in the class. Naina as usual reading a book and Vrinda is chattering to her. [Boys i.e. Abhimanyu and Amar enter] Amar looks at Vrinda and Abhi looks at Naina and vice versa.

MaIna greet each other with a smile whereas Amar greets Vrinda with the most charming smile but Vrinda greets him with a fake smile. She stops chattering and thinks out aloud "Amar kitna cute lagta he smile karte hue!" She then smacks herself saying "Pagal he! Shut up!" Naina brings her back to the reality.

N: Vrinda kise cute or pagal keh rahi he tu! Vo bhi ek saath!

V: Huh! (coming back to reality) Nahi to...

The boys come and sit in the same row where these girls are sitting.

[(Seating Arrangement) Two people can sit on a bench. S0, Amar and Abhimanyu (i.e. AmaNyu) are sitting on one bench and Vrinda and Naina (i.e. NaiNda) are sitting on the other. Abhi is sitting next to Amar. Just next to the bench of the boys is girl's bench and very next to where Amar is sitting is Vrinda then Naina. I really hope you all are getting.]

When Naina said that whom was Vrinda calling cute and pagal Amar overhears (as the boys are very next to them.) and smiles to himself.

Meanwhile the teacher enters with the couple names for the competition.

Class: Good morning sir!

Sir: Good morning class! Please take your seats. You all must be waiting for your names of the competition! Isn't it...!!

Class: Yes!!

Sir: So here are your names but before that there are some instructions for all of you. They are as follows:

These couples are for the whole year. Infact they won't be changed even after the session is over.

All the couples will have to clear the 1st level for the further competition.

They will have to prepare their routine for 1st level on their own i.e. they cannot take any help...

So these were the rules are they clear to you all...!!!

Class: Yes sir!

Sir: Time for names...!!!

Vrinda: [To Naina] Oh I am so excited!!!

Sir: 1st: Naina Malhotra and Abhimanyu Singh [Class ohhh]

2nd: Blah- Blah

6th: Vrinda Dawda and Amarjeet Singh [Yayeee!!!]

Then the teacher announces the rest of the couples!

Class over!!!

Girls move out by the time boys were packing up their stuff.

Ab: Sun Amar mujhe na thoda kaam he so I'll catch you later ok!

A: Chal ok!!

Amar too walks out of the class. He sees Naina walking alone so he approaches her...

A: Hey Naina!

N: Hi Amar! Wass up!

A: Nothing much me bas Vrinda ko dhund raha tha! Where is she?

N: Vo library me he!

A: Vrinda library me what a joke! [Laughingly]

N: [Smiles] Vo vahin he! Kyun tumhe kuch kaam tha kya?

A: Han voh hum dance partners he na toh routine fix karna he! So that's why!

N: Oh han! Vo library me hi he or agar na mile toh I'll text you her number puch lena!

A: [With his charming 1000 watt ki smile ke saath] Ok Thanks!

Both leave!!!

Part 6: End

So guys VriMar as a couple for dance! Aage kya hone wala he. Mein yeh toh nahi bata sakti but yeh promise zaroor kar sakti hun ke maza bahut aane wala he. So please stay tuned and keep reading... Arey ek baat toh sunte jaao. Apne comments likhna mat bhulna. Bura he toh bhi likhna please I really love reading your comments so pleassseee comment!! Love you all <3 :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 7: The Library

Vrinda is in the Teenage love stories section. Amar enters the library and starts searching for her in different sections. He finally reaches the Love story section and sees Vrinda engrossed in a book...!! She was smiling reading that book [Well actually it was a kind of blush.] Amar thinks to himself "Kitni cute lag rahi he haste hue! Par jab gussa karti he toh baap re!" He was smiling to himself when Vrinda notices him. She sees Amar staring at her. She walks to him and clicks in front of his face. Amar steps out of his la-la land! He sees Vrinda in front of him!

V: [Very cutely] Hello!

A: [More cutely] Hi!!!

V: So??

A: Dance routine ka kya karna he!

V: Arey han me toh bhul hi gayi! Ek kaam karte he aap apne steps decide karo me apne steps decide karti hoon and fir hum dono ek dusre ko correct kar lenge! [I know its lame but...]

A: Well I am impressed. [Lol :P Yeh toh hona hi tha] Good chalo fir kal milte hai early morning 7 am rehearsal hall...

V: Early morning 7! Baap re me uthungi [wake up] kese!

A: Any problem!!!

V: Thoda late nahi kar sakte?

A: Sorry baaki times the hall is preoccupied!!

V: Ok chalo fir me apse kal milti hun. HOPEFULLY!!!

Both leave for their home!!!

To Be continued...!!!

Part 7 : End

Precap: VriMar moments... Please stay tuned... I know bahut chota tha but I am so sorry no time!!!!

Take care till my next update... Pleaseee comment!!!! Varna I won't update... :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
what the😲
res

okay i'm here...

Cute😳 and Pagal😛
Nice combo😆

What is she doing in library??😕

Amar ki smile

will you mind increasing the length??🤢
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
one more res...😛
won't unres till you unres -.-😉

OMG😲
itna bada update...
*note the sarcasm*

that was tooo lame -___-
I mean aisa kon karta hai🤢

"HOPEFULLY' you'll give a bigger update next time😡

And something really to spice it up😉😆
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
didi itna chota update not fair haan,
but bohat cute update tha,
⭐️⭐️⭐️

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