Ashlok FF:**~The Passionate Revenge..~**,Chapter-7 ,page-38... - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nakaja

Omg its awesome
Superb yr,i can't w8 for d next update



Thank u!Will update soon!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

Prolougue is really hot.awesom please continue soon



Thank u!Yes m updating soon!😛
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Thank u dear!😛
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#54

Originally posted by: infernofyre

More! !!! Before I die please more! !!
Another amazing story and a reason to visit If! Yeah!



U wnt die of course!😆U'll have to live for more ones!😈🤗M updatng aftr smtym!😃
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Originally posted by: ruhakhan

wow dats an interesting start

do update soon



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Originally posted by: mayabharathi

great suspense loving this a lot



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Thank u so much!😛
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Interesting... Is it based on 50 first dates?
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Originally posted by: Aman3010

Interesting... Is it based on 50 first dates?



Nooo..Not really..It's just a mixture of many stories I read,added wid my weird thoughts..😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102323080

CHAPTER-1.

Astha was going wild,and yet she knew she had to stop this craziness..

The stranger's large hands were now caressing the soft skin of her stomach,and slowly moving up..

Her breathing became harsher with the movements of his hand..Her nerves and body on fire by his touch..And she felt hot liquid heat travel along her skin as his hand moved upwards,under her shirt..And when it touched the lower of her swellings,she gasped out..

This was crazy,she thought feverishly,and tried to squirm out from under him..That only helped her earn a groan from him..As he pushed his hardened self more onto her..

Astha was even scared to touch him,worried what part of his naked skin she might come in contact with..

If she had not been feeling so paralyzed due to the strange sensations rocketing through her,or was not so scared,she would have started laughing hysterically right now..

After all it was not everyday,or to be precise every night that a completely experienced and a bookworm like her woke up semi naked and in bed with a completely naked huge male..

The thought of huge,had her blushing more,as his huge something started poking into her stomach more..

And then his hands crashed into her open hair,and before she knew it,he had pulled her head up off the pillow and kissing her shocked parted lips sensuously..

She tried to move her lips away,but he held her tighter,and the movement of his lips had become more demanding..

A few seconds elapsed and Astha felt hot desire shooting through her body starting from her tingling lips,and then spreading to every nerve and vein.

Astha took a moment to understand what was really happening..

His warm moist lips were making her feel all sort of sensations that she had never even imagined existed in real life..

Like the logical person she was,she always thought kissing on the lips was a bit unhygienic and made her skin crawl,even at the idea...But now..

Her stomach did a flip-flop as his arms brushed against her bosom,and his hot lips sucked on hers with unrestrained hunger..

But now she felt it was good..Kissing someone was..

His tongue probed into her mouth,and licked at the inside making her gasp out as a hot thrill of pleasure passed through her body..

Kissing someone was sooo sooo sooo very go-..

She forgot to think further as he pulled her hot tongue into his mouth and sucked on it,tenderly at first,and then with more ardor,and the simultaneous moan that escaped her lips was beyond Astha's control.

And then his hand travelled down to her thighs,and was seeking her very centre..

That was when her sensuous bubble broke,and she realized how dangerous this was getting..With her eyes wide open now,she tried to push him off her,and since he would not budge even an inch,she did the only other thing she could think of..

She bit his lips hard..

"SHIT!!!YOU LITTLE HELL-CAT!!!"He cursed out,and licked at his wound,now completely awake and staring with dark angry huge eyes at Astha..

Astha could taste his blood in her mouth too,and she was terrified of his angry look..This man looked so angry that he could actually commit murder!So breathing heavily she lay back rigidly waiting for him to throttle her..

"What was that for?!!"He growled out,not sitting straight on the bed..Completely uncaring of his nudity..

Astha looked away from him,embarrassed and scared all at the same time,as her eyes seems to get distracted by the wide expanse of heaving naked chest infront of her..She was even more scared what she might see if she looked down..

At her constant quietness,the man seemed to loose patience,and out of the corner of her eyes Astha noticed him move,and instantly screamed out i fear,closing her eyes and covering her face at the same time..

She thought he was going to hit her..

"WHAT THE f**k?!!CRAZY WOMAN!!!Why the hell are you screaming?!"He snapped out angrily,his eyes gleaming with rage and irritation..His nostrils flared,as he now stood by the bed with the bedsheet wrapped round his perfect waist and hips..

Astha looked at him through wide scared eyes,as she slowly moved her hand down..

Her heart was racing with fear and uncertainty,now..

He knelt down,his face a dark mask of rage and irritation that scared Astha all the more..Astha tried to move backwards,but the head board behind her was not letting her move back..

And still he came closer..

Astha closed her eyes,afraid even to see what he might do..

Something passed by her head in a whoosh..

Astha opened her eyes,and saw him showing a grey piece of cloth to her,as he moved away..

A blush colored her cheeks as she realized,it was his trouser..

How id God's name had it ended up beside her pillow,she had no idea..And even the thought of it made her feel quizzy..

She was about to look at where he was standing,but the sight of the bedsheet on the floor and the rustling sound of cloth,made her color up some more..He was getting into his trousers..

She waited for him to finish dressing up,and come to her..

It never happened as he started walking towards a darkened side of the room,which seemed to be Quickly Astha jumped out of the bed and started running after him..

"WAIT!Where are you going?!"

"To bring the whip.."He growled out as he opened the door,and Astha stood close heaving..

"Whip..?!But..Why?!!"She stammered out in a scared voice.

Suddenly he whirled round and started walking towards her,that made Astha's heart skip a beat..

And a scared Astha moved back step for step,as she watched his huge half naked male form coming closer and closer..

Finally Astha bumped on the bed and hell flat on it..He came closer and knelt down above her..

His dark eyes burning into hers..

"Why do you think sweetheart?"His cold chilling voice made icicles of fear run along Astha's spine,as she lay breathing heavily on the bed,with him kneeling above her..

"I..I..Who are you..?"She asked instead,her eyes wide in fear and confusion..

A slight curve came on his full lips at her words..

"That's not important.."He replied softly,his dark eyes studying her pale face thoughtfully..

Suddenly he raised a finger,and ran it along her one soft cheek,making her shiver in response.Then as quickly as he had touched her,his hand moved away.

"What is this place..?"She whispered softly,and watched his eyes lower to her lips,making them tingle..

Slowly he looked back into her eyes again..

"That's not..important either.."He whispered now in a husky voice..

In the dim light of the room Astha could see something strange burning in his eyes all of a sudden,that made her pulse race,and she wet her suddenly dry lips..

That instantly made him look at her now wet lips again,and inhale a staggering breath..

And before she could blink,he had stood straight and was striding towards the door again.

Astha sat straight,and again called after him..

"Then what in God's name IS IMPORTANT?!!"

"You are my captive here,and I am your captor..That is what is important.."He said softly,as he sent her a last chilling look,and then closed the door with a loud click..

And then Astha heard the sound of key in the keyhole ..

I am locked in here!She realized as a helplessness took over her..

Chapter-2,page-15:/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-ek-baar-phir/3939371/ashlok-ff-the-passionate-revenge-chapter-7-page-38





Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago

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