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Originally posted by: neet2407
wonderful! have been reading these from the start - now I am a huge fan of drabbles - did i say you write beautifully - to say so much by writing so little is a gift and you definitely have it 😃
the latest one about the broken bangles ( my Hindi is not great) was lovely - who said love would be easy?
I love these drabbles! Love how ur progressing it
What a beauty TT! I was scared as I was reading through that this might end on a sad note.. for the weekend! But that Paro's dialogue - put a bright smile on my face!
Originally posted by: automaticstart
what a superb writer u r. i read all together n now i am a fan of your writing . keep writing.
Originally posted by: IronButterfly
This was beautiful.
Originally posted by: sonia_92
Swallowing the lump in her throat, she
smiled. "I hit my head as a child. Tabse
manhe jalladein hi pasand hain."
that's the most endearing scene of all. absolutely stunning. a beautifully portrayed emotion.
Originally posted by: likeadesigirl
I love how you've kind of put your own twist on a scene from the show- the broken bangles. You've made the bangles almost completely different. I really like your writing- it's so fluid and easy to read :)
Originally posted by: SherryGS
Love as usual
So beautiful. What started off on a sad note ended with a dash of humour. This has now become a full-fledged SS by the way. Just sayin'.
Originally posted by: blackdice1001
I feel for both of them. They're obviously in love even though they haven't yet completely opened up to each other and the tone you used in the chapter was as sad as it was sweet.
Great writing, again!
Addicted to your doze of drabbles.Reason ??? your amazing and unique style of writing👏
Lovely as always. You're too good, you tell a lot with very few words.
Originally posted by: vishruta
Awesome it was
Loved it
Pls cont more soon
Originally posted by: Shirinfarhad
Very well written!!!! These Drabbles gives us the insight of the whole drama, it's character and the story, I am really glad I came across them and started ready them. Thank you!!!!
Originally posted by: custodian75
Swallowing the lump in her throat, she smiled. "I hit my head as a child. Tabse manhe jalladein hi pasand hain."
Loved that dialogue.I don't think it's so easy to make him share his feelings, he has been lonely for a long time.
Originally posted by: sslmay11
For Paro it won't be easy to break the wall around Rudra...But she is the one who can do that also..He needs at least a small ventilation...Eager to know more .. Just one day you didn't update...I felt it's a long wait...Getting addicted..Keep doing.
Originally posted by: vaish912
Tht was just so beautiful .. The last lines n the scene in ur Drabble just sums up their situation ..love is there but so much is holding them back .. Uff kya hoga in dono ka ?
Originally posted by: autumn.03
I read through all the drabbles and must I am in love with your writing. I love how you leave so much up to the reader's imagination by only drawing up a short scene, which then connects to the next...but still there is a lot of room for interpretation there. It speaks highly of your writing and your ability to say much within short amount of words.
I don't watch the show, but these pieces make me feel like I am watching it.
Originally posted by: opsyellow
Hey
I read every part in one go and now I AM YOUR FAN😳BRILLIANT WORKThank you Merra30 for the link
Originally posted by: sariarshi97
Wow!! Such meticulous writing...Envisaging it is a treat...beautifully written:)
Very nice... Waiting for the next one
Originally posted by: inspiringstars
How greedy is a woman's heart. Yes it is, and I feel every woman feels what she is feeling. Craving the bodily satisfaction is merely one aspect of fulfilling a relationship, if you ask me, a very small aspect. Sharing each other, sharing with each other, in every single way is what counts, and I totally understand Paro's feelings here.
But you gave a good glimpse into that side of Rudra - the caring loving side. I hope he understands her needs go much beyond the physical..and try to give himself a little to her. Open up to her...Brilliant, yet again!
The shards of glass - her dreams or the bangles? Maybe the distinction had disappeared for a moment as the rage that Rudra unveiled itself. Maybe the wall that is as much as mirage as it is reality made its presence felt
My heart broke with her choodi as her tears fellAnd then he comes barging in to ask her why she loves her own executioner and I am pile of slush on a cold winter morning that has just seen the sun peeping out of cloudsIss pyaar ko kya naam doon? - What? I that's a genuine question. As Joe Fox would say - nobody owns the phrase ;)
Tattle
Last Drabble was so cute.You continue to amaze me with how much u convey with so less. ❤️
lovely..!
Originally posted by: Sarah_Asya_Arhi
amazing written yaar!
Rudra breathed in deeply, trying to absorb the essence of her confession. It reminded him of the elusive scent of wildflowers and the earth after a sudden shower in the desert. No matter how desperately he wanted to hold onto the moment and savour it; it vanished before he had had his fill.
And he waited, fearful, anticipation bubbling in his stomach. He waited for her to continue-- say anything that would help him prolong that one moment and have faith a little longer.
Her smile slowly faded, replaced by a glimmer of contentment in her eyes. She moved forward and slipped her arms around his waist, nestling against him, silently.
He automatically held her close and swallowed his disappointment.
He owned her body-- he knew and he knew that she knew as well. As he tugged her dupatta free and tossed it aside with deft fingers that left goosebumps in their wake, he wondered-- did he have all of her?
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Long after Paro had succumbed to an exhausted slumber, sprawled inelegantly over him, Rudra lay awake.
For once, he was blind to the moonlight and shadows that dappled an ever-changing pattern on her pale skin. Her slow, languorous breathing, the thud of her heart against his, and the soft warmth of her body reassured him and made him restless at the same time.
Rudra felt as one did while trying to hold onto a fistful of sand tightly. He knew and understood the desert far too well to try that. But he couldn't say the same about the woman in his arms. In this case, the harder he tried, the more difficult it seemed to be able to hold onto her.
Paro, in all her sweet submission, was slipping away from him. And he felt powerless to stop it.
Earlier in the evening, her whispered confession had brought her a few steps closer to him. But not nearly enough. All it would take was another painful sting of his volatile temper to push her away again.
As Rudra lay pondering in the dark, swinging between sleep-blurred, hazy thoughts, an epiphany startled him awake.
Paro was as much a child of the unforgiving, vast sands as he was. She may disguise it under pretty sequined dupattas and soft flowing skirts, but the same tempered strength lay dormant within. Hadn't he had a taste of it during their first month of intense animosity?
How had he been lulled into forgetting?
And that being the case, Rudra knew that it was time to loosen the fist. It would be excruciatingly hard for him-- with his love for complete control. But it had to be done.
Anything was easier than the thought of his room, his bed without Parvati in it.
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