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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey..this is my first os on taarey.it will be emotional.if u r ready to read so u can.


in hospital

tauji (swayam's father)is running along with strecher in the hospital.on the strecher was lying a girl full of blood on her body.uncounscious.(that's our taani) ..the strecher taken to the O.T.tauji is crying.he stand up and call someone

mumbai
st.louis
rh hall

d3 gang is praticing.when suddenly swayam's phone rings.sees the caller name and pick it up

swayam:helo papa.
tauji:swa...swayam(cryingly)
everyone stops rehersing
swayam(worried):kya hua papa sab theek haina aap,maa,taani
tauji:kuch bhi theek nahi hai swayam
swayam:kya hua papa
tauji:swayam taani ko accident hua now she is taken to O.T
swayam:kya?
phones slipes away fron his hand and fall down
he stands like a statue hearing this
d3 gang comes to him
sharon:kya hua swayam
nil:swayam
rey:swayam(shakes him)
swayam came to senses and started crying badly
rey:ro kyu raha ho
sharon:swayam kya hua
swayam:taani..taani ka accident
everyone shocked especially rey
rey:bol kya raha hai dude..mazaak mat karoo
swayam:nahi yaar sach hai rey taani
rey:taani ko kuch nahi ho sakta hum abhi delhi jaa raha

rey immediatly books earlierst ticket for them

in an hour they reach delhi and directly goes to hospital

reception
swayam:taani taani shekhawet
receptist:3rd floor in O.T

they all run and takes the staircase and reaches there

swayam:papa
tauji:swayam taaniii
swayam:kya hua papa ye sab kaise
tauji:vo kya hua tha ki

flashback

tauji driving the car and taani besides him.tauji stops the car
tauji:arre mein tho bhool gaya.tumhari taiji kuch vegetables lane keliye kaha mein tho bhool gaya
taani:agar taiji ko vegetables nahi milana tho vo apko kach khajayega
tauji:aur nahi tho kya..mm yaha pe ek market vaha pe chalthe he
taani:okay

they goes to the market and parks the car besides the walking path
tauji:mein vegetables leke athi hun tum yahi intezaar karo
taani:theek hai

tauji got down from the car and purchase some vegetable

when suddenly a truck comes and hits tauji's car
tauji heard a scream and turns around sees his car had been hit badly by the truck and is upside down
tauji:TAANI!!!!
goes and takes her to the hospital with the help of a some people

flashback ends

they all are crying badly
when doctor comes out from O.T
doc:mr.shekhawet i'm sorry humare treatment se patient ko asar nahi horaha hai..she only will be alivefor 15-20 minutes.i'm sorry
rey grabs doc collar
rey:aap kaise doc ho javo kuch bhi karo but mujhe meri taani chahiye.kise bhi tarah javo doc
they all tries to rey to leave doc collar and successful in it

rey:swayam dekh na doc kya kah raha hai
swaym:haan rey
doc:soory mein apka dard samjhe sakta hun but we are helpless.app sab ko patient ko dekh sakthe ho

they all goes to o.t with heavy heart
ret sits beside taani and holds her hand
rey:plz taani mujhe chaodke mat jao.mein tumhari bina jee nahi sakuga.aaj bhi tumhare intezaar kartha hun ki ek din tum vaapas ajavuga par tum mujhe humesh keliye kyu chodke jaa rahi ho taani.plz mujhe chodke mat javo

taani comes counscious
taani: apko jeena hoga mere bina rey.krishnaji mujhe iss duniya se lejaraha hai.apko jeena hoga.aapko na mujhe se bhi zayada aachi ladki milega rey aap usse bohat pyaar karna rey.mein apko uparse dekh rahi hoga haan
rey:nahi taani tumse zayada achi ladki mujhe nahi mileaga taani.aur tum mujhe chodke nahi javogi okay
taani:i'm sorry rey.aur bhai app
swayam comes holds her hand
swayam:haan taani
taani:apna world's best bhai hoo.aap kush rahna hamesha.okay.kash mein apke saath hota
swayam:tum mera saath hi hoga okay kahi nahi jaarahi ho tum
taani:kash aise hi ho par krishnaji kuch auur hi chahtha hai tauji
tauji:haan tani
taani:mere maa-papa na hote huve bhi app mera ma aur papa dono ban gayi.iskeliye thank you.aap humesha mere liya important rehega
tauji smiles
rey:tum aisa kyu bola raha taani tum kahi nahi jaaraha taani.agar taani nahi tho rey bhi nahi
taani:nahi rey apko krishnajine ek zindagi jeene keliya diya vo apko jeena hoga
rey:taani i love you
taani:i love you too rey
taani is no more
rey:TAANI!!taani udo plz TAANI!!!

after taani has gone...rey lives his life remebering his taani and their sweet memories


- END-



when someone you love becomes a memory,
the memory becomes a treasure

howz was it?sorry if i hurt any ones feeling really very sorry
Edited by luciya - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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so emotional os,
feeling sad for rey,
kkep writing dear,
thankz for pm,⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional yar
luv it to the core
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional os...
but it was awsum...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awe, That was so sad :(
Amazing and really emotional OS btw <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very emotional rula diya😭

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