_-*-_ TaaRey SS : Engagement _-*-_ {Part 1: 3rd Post}

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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE : this SS was written when engagement track was going on... just posting it now
hello guyss
D3 ke episodes aaj kal bahut mst hai...Aur track toh is awesome , we all knoe...
Ab mere paas ek taarey ss ka concept hai current track pe...
Concept is ki ismien kriya taani ki engagement mei aayegi n ofcourse taarey ko ek karne mei help karegi...
This will be a 4-5 ch ss... or may be more


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kriya : rey i am really sorry
rey : its ok kriya, i understand


kriya mouths a thankyou to him with teary eyes n they both hug
Gang claps n someone sees them from the window

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Rey : mere paas plans hai
taani ki engagement toh hogi bt vishesh se nhi, mujhse... N smirks


Kriya : rey kya mai aapki koi help kr sakti hun??
Rey : smiles : tumhare alawa iss waqt meri help koi nhi kar sakta kriya...

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Taani : i hate u rey !!
Rey : its ok! Jo tum chahti ho mai wohi kar rha hun, i m moving on with HER... N rey leaves smiling to himself...

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Vicky : yaar konsa switch hai?
nil : mujhe kya pta, rey ne toh tujhe bataya tha

amar : talo hato tum tab , mai hi kut kalta hun and he switches off the mains by mistake and all the lights go off
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Aage ka bhi abhi btaya toh maza nhi aayega...
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Edited by vrushika_taarey - 12 years ago
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Part :1 {below}
Edited by vrushika_taarey - 11 years ago
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Part 1

Scene starts from the day of vishesh's arrival

Swayam was bsy in doing preperations when rey comes
"Swayam maine decide kiya hai ki taani ko apni lyf mei wapis laane ki puri koshish karunga... Tu meri help karega na?''

"honestly rey .. Mai khud nhi chahta ki taani ki sagai kisi aur se ho...so ya i'll help u"

"chal abhi mujhe bahut kaam hai... Mai tujhse thodi der mei milta hun"said swayam

"ya sure" said rey n went away

After some tym it was the tym of vishesh's arrival...

Vishesh arrived n was welcumed half heartedly by swayam n gang...

Everyone was bsy again n rey was in his room all tensed , he was feeling restless as something bad was gonna happen now...
any ways the things were bad in his life n this was just nothing...

Swayam was doing some work when he saw that the entry wasn't decorated properly so he went there to tell the decorators to work properly He went outside n looks at the door , takes few steps back to have a proper view of things when he bumps into someone

He instantly turns to say sorry when he looks at the person

His eyes become teary n he was rooted to the ground when the person hugs him
" swayam i missed u"
"tum kaise ho??"n she keeps crying...

Swayam hugs her back n is only able to get one word out
"kriya..??"

After some time

swayam and kriya were in kriya's room

kriya had told him everything which she said to rey before leaving
also about wat her mother said to her
she had no choice bt to leave rey

swayam also tells her the happenings while she was nt here

kriya gets to know about taani's sudden decision of engagement
she feels guilty of hurting rey n asks swayam if she can meet rey and apologise for her mistake

swayam tells her to wait in her room n he will bring everyone there

kriya waits and swayam goes n comes back wid the gang

" guys plss , mai tumhe kisi se milana chahta hun aur tum log ye promise karo ki usko dekhte hi tumlog jaoge nhi bt uski baat sunoge , promise me..."

swayam said to them, they got confused bt promised him that they wud listen

everyone entered the room n swayam was the last to enter n he bolted the door from inside

kriya's back was facing them
she slowly turns towrds them wid tearful eyes

everyone is shocked to see her n they look at swayam with questioning eyes
they were angry (as in the show)
rey was just messed up he didn't knew wat was happening
he was furious n wanted to go away from there

he gave a last glare to swayam n was about to leave as well as the others when swayam said " guyss u promised"

then kriya says " i m soo srry"
"pls... pls mujhe maaf kardijiye... pls n she starts crying"

nil : " tum toh apni team ko chod ke chali gyi thi wo bhi without any explanation toh tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki tumhaare ek srry se sab theek ho jayega?"

vicky :" hume loosers se koi baat nhi karni " he ends his line and looks at swayam

bharat " bilkul sahi kaha vicky ne"

they said more and more things to kriya bt swayam lost his cool
"enough guyss ek baar uski baat toh suno..."

rey doesn't say anything he just again starts walking towards the door, opens the bolt bt before he opens the door kriya says

" rey i m srry mai aapse kabhi jhut nhi bolna chahti thi"

as soon as rey listens this he stops bt doesn't turn

kriya continues n tells him everything ...
gang is shocked as well as rey

" rey jo maine kiya wo meri majboori thi bt i really loved u, aapko kabhi chot nhi pahuchana chahti thi"

rey now turns n he had tears in his eyes
he was about to say someting when kriya interrupts

she turns away from him and says
" rey main aapke aur taani k baare mei sab jaanti hun"
"maine aapko hurtkiya tha bt ab mai aapke liye aur apne liye aapko apki khushi zarur wapis dilwaungi, i promise"

now kriya turns n looks to everyone n says sorry
rey comes towards kriya
kriya says " i m srry"
" its ok kriya i understand n i forgive u"

"rey... kya hum wapis se frnds ban sakte hai?
"ofcourse ban saqte hai"

kriya mouths a 'thank you' to him n they ug eachother

n then evryone has a group hug

TO BE CONTINUED...

PRECAP : plans to stop taani's engagement



Edited by vrushika_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great beginning :)
Update sooon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay this is existing
Please update soon
And thanks for the PM
Do inform me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb concept
interesting start
update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great beginning and good start... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Chapter 👏
Way to go dear 😃
Please update soon n pm me 😊
Love: Ale ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept
Promo was nice
Chapter1 was amazing
Nice start it looks interesting
Update soon

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