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Due to some reasons I am posting this again!!

"swayam ruko" she said to him''.

"mujhe pakdo Sharon''..he shouted running front catching her bag''

"swayam plzz"she bent down panting taking support of her knees''

"ahh my ankle is paining"she sat on her knees''..

"isiliye maine flats pehne keliye'"vicky said.she glared at him

"yeh jungle hai Sharon ramp nahi'"neha said and all giggled''.

But swayam''.ahh how could he see his angel in pain'..he walked upto her kneeled beside her and sat on his legs and pulled her onto his lap'''.

Awww was all that the rest could utter '..she sat in his lap confortably and pulled her shoes out''.

"frock pe shoes'..??"swayam giggled''she hit him slightly'..all giggled too but she started wearing the shoes'..

"waise bhi Sharon aaj kal teri man maani bohut bad rahi hai''.kabhi meri baat nahi sunti''meri chodo kisiki nahi sunti'..aaj kal tumhe apni manmaani karne se koi rokh nahi paaraha hai'.aur jo kar sakti hai wo ab''."he stopped when he realised wat he was saying''.all went numb'.sharon stopped wearing the shoes and looked down as tears rolled down her eyes''swayam controlled his tears ''..

He tried consoling her''she hugged him and cried''

"mai itni man maani karti hun na mujhe rokhne keliye ek baar nahi aasakti?????"she asked him innocently''.

He just gripped her more tight'''the gang somehow managed to cheer her up and started wlking''..

"hum rahenge kaha???"simmi asked'''

"Vicky ne bola usne koi ghar dekha''."nil said''

"guys I saw a house here when my car crashed once and yeah its too adventurous''.and ''''ahhh'.there it goes''."he showed

All looked at it but all except swicy got scared'

'.

"babu aur koi jagah nahi mili weeken spend karne keliye''"neha spoke'

Sw: chill neha'..kuch nahi hoga''its soo pleasant guys''.

He already started loving it..he felt so calm 'the turmoil inside him is now soothing him for unknown reason he felt good'.he took his and sharons abag and headed towards the house all alone'..all were looking at him'.suddenly Sharon ran and tugged his arm''.

"mai bhi chalti hun par saath hi rehna mujhe dar lag raha hai'"she said'..he smiled and kissed her forehead which rested on his shoulder'..all followed them with their partners''they entered the house'..yeah it looked fearful but the interior design was outstanding'.all sat for sometime somewhere making space''.

After 20 mins they started their work girls started cleaning while the boys did the furniture setting and dusting and all went out for sticks to fire when swayam went in serch of water'.finally after 5 hrs all was set''all flopped onto the sofa the one of old model but quite comfy'.all were talking when swayam entered with a big tray containing bowls of soul''.all quickly grabbed one for each as they were hell tired''.swayam sat and they started they talked laughed ,sang and danced and doing masti when suddenly swayam sat on the sofa and looked up his head resting back and closed his eyes'''.sharon found this and thus the rest too and they wet and sat beside hi..sharon tugged his arm and placed her cheek on his shoulder'.after 2 mins she felt a tear on her cheek'she gripped more tight and closed her eyes'he was missing her badly...his baby'..he protected her from the day he started walking''their parens were best of frnds and lived in the same mansion''sharon was his long relative so she too is soo close to her/''she was his eye candy'.she was the one who starts the masti''.the way she clapps her hands jumping and laughing lyk a 2 yrs kidhe loved her to core'.she was his bestfrnd''she was too close to him just like his soul'..but from last three months''he dnt now where she is how she is and y she left''

"I miss her too"she said and silently sobbed and same was with rest'.soon all fell asleep as they were hell tired'..

After a long tym neha suddenly jerked up and sat straight making Vicky to get up too'..he was ab to aske when he heard''

Uuummmhhmmmhmmm aaahhhahhaaa

(same song which was playing in bg)

They heard it again thus woke everyone'but swayam was sleeping peacefully..sharon shaked him hard

"kya hai sh''."he stopped when he heard''

Pyaar tune aahhahha'''

Ummhmmhmmhmm lalalalala''.

All were feared but swayam just grabbed a lanther beside him lit it and ran up the stairs and examined each and every corner of house''but no..he found none'..all were too shocked+confused+feared to react'finally swayam ran down the stairs straight outside'..

All saw this and shouted his name and followed him but by the tym the went out he was no where''they stood there helplessly when Sharon was crying hard in fear of loosing him''

Here he was running like mad..

"kriya'..dammit kaha ho'..plzz mil jao'.plzz'..mai aur din nahi reh sakta tere bina''.plzz baby tumhe jitna dhaantna hai dhanto'par plzz wapas aajo''..i love u na''.plzz'..aajao'I know tum yahi kahin'.."he stopped in his track when he saw three wolves standing in front of him looking hungry at him'..he took two steps and fell into a trap and the cage closed ''his head hit the rod while falling'.he before becoming unconscious heard the wolves shout it felt like they were crying in pain'..and finally all blanked out'..all were crying and searched for him but no use'..as soon as the light rays hit they went in search for him in the cold weather''.

All were walking vishaka stopped when she found the three dead wolves'.she was a bit startled and walked back but fell on the cage'..

All went to help her and after she got up they saw swayam there'they opened the cage and took him to the house''after lot of trials he finally woke up '..he was just seeing around'..

Sw: mai yahan kaise??? Guys jaldi chalo warna who chalijayegi'..i cant let her go anymore'.

He stood up and was abt to go when Vicky pulled him back to couch'..

Vic: are u mad'haalat dekhi apni aur waise koun chala jayega???

Sw: kriya''mujhe usse dhoondhna hai'

Sh: kriya???? Wo yaha??? Tumhe kaise pata???

Sw: kal jo gaana koi gaa raha tha wo kria hi hai'..

Rinni: tumhe kaise pata

Sw: mai uski aawaaz jaanta hun guys'and wo rey keliye hamesha yahi gaana gaati hai'she loves this song a lot'.hamesha kehti hai ki use ye gaana sunte hi rey yaad aajata hai'..and she gets lost in his dreams'.

Vish: par wo kahin nahi hai dude ''humne poori jungle dhoodhliya tujhse dhoodhte waqt'..

Swayam shed silent tears'.all consoled him and nils mobile rang'..

Nil: hello'..

Rey: nil hum road ke paas khade hai ab iss jungle mei kahan aaye yaar??? Is it that necessary to come'..

Rey shouted'..he always wanted to be alone but none allow him especially his cousin siddhart who is his best of best frnd too''(more than Sharon)

Nil: yeah hum bas 5 mins mei aate hai'..

Rey: fast or else im gng..

He snapped and cut the call when sid bet his head'..he had to do a lot of work to bring him hear but he himself didn't like the thought of spending the weekend in this jungle''

Nil informed and swayam told not to tell abt kria till they were sure she was there with them''and went to freshen up''.

Nicky went and lead rey and sid to the house''sid stopped in front of the house'..

Sid: guys is it necessary to spend weekend here''?????

Rey: sid plzz'.im liking it'.im feeling my heart too light'.plzz'I wanna live hear'

All smiled ad headed into the house'.rey gave formal hugs to everyone with a small smile'..all were sitting when rey stood up actively and said

Rey: guys mai fresh hoke sojata hun im hell tired''

With asmile'.

Sh: rey are u ok ''??????

Rey: yeah Sharon im absolutely fine'mai aaj bohut khush hun im feeling very light today'.aisa lag raha hai ki wo ab meri baahon mei''.

His voice trailed off. As he remembered her''but soon he gave a smile and went up towards his room

Vicky placed hand on sid's shoulder ..he jumped in fear'.all looked at him for sumtym and burst out'.

Sh: btw her laugh'.tum toh humse jyaada darne lage???

He gave a fake smile and went to his room'and picked the towel and entered the washroom for face wash'.he splashed water for facewash eyes closed but felt sticky so he opened eyes and throwed himself back to the wall feared on seeing blood flow from the tap'.he quickly ran to the door but someone locked it from outside'.he tried shouting but he lost his voice''and suddenly he felt someone holding his throat and squeezing it'..his eyes were abt to go dark when suddenly he felt free and he rushed to door it was open and he quickly changed and went down to be with the others''..

Here rey freshened and came out of the washroom'.today he felt HER so close to him 'he sat on the window and looked out'.he looked around the jungle and a smile spread''she always loved these trees and all'he remembered how he used to take her to nurseries and gardens just to make her happy '..

He still remembers that day'he knew her from 8th'..and yeah he fell for her then itself''she in her cute pink skirt and white shirt'..and that high pony which jumps along with her whenever she smiles''the cute pouts which she makes when teacher scolds her''.her icecream madness''.she is soo childish but when comes to faceoffs or any other matter she is soo mature'..her attitude ., her style''.her wacking moves which always made him to get lost in her''..and all made him madly fall in love with her'..the whole gang were frnds from 8th except sid as he joined in 3rd yr'..that day''when they were in 1st yr ''..he took her to the nearby garden on his bicycle'.it was his routine'..swayam carried Sharon and rey carried kriya''on way they went to the garden'.she was jumping and catching the butterflies'..she was continuously jumping when she slipped and banged into him''he made her steady but now a days it was becoming difficult for him to hide his feelings and act just as her close frnd''he too noticed the change in her''she felt shy whenever he tucked her hair back''he caught her by shoulders to give support and leaned in finally placing his lips over hers''..both felt numb''.but soon both just pressed their lips over others with all force and after a long tym they flinched back realising what they did just now''she blushed and was gng when he stopped her and proposed''..he cant take it anymore''.she with a red face nodded and he hugged her tight''.and from that day her place changed from back to the front rod''same as swaron''when all came to know abt this swayam declared a freedom party as they were fed up as these two didn't realise their feelings from a long tym'..

He smiled wide on thinking abt how she blushed hugging him and hiding her face in his chest in the whole party teasing''

Rey: kriya''.kaha chaligayi??? Mere pyaar mei koi kami thi kya??? Koi problem thi kya??? Mujhe bata deti'''u know na angel im always there for u'.mujhse gussa thi??? Nah tum itni bewakoofi nahi kar sakti'itni choti baat pe itna bada decision nahi leti''.wapas aajao na''..im not able to live without u'..

he closed his eyes and leaned back'.he felt someone behind him'..he looked but found no one'.he again closed his eyes''.her laughing image played before him'..a tear rolled down his cheek''another one was abt to take its place when he felt someone sniffing''he turned back but found none .he looked away and another tear rolled down'again he heard someone sniffing'.he searched everywhere wiping his tears and finally when he didn't find anyone he fell on the bed..he wanted to sleep peacefully after so many days''..he just layed on the bed and closed his eyes''when he was abt to drift to sleep he felt a kiss on his cheek'he smiled and drifted to sleep hugging a pillow which felt like HER to him'..

at 9 he came down and sat with all he was somewhat active today all wondered what happened''..but were happy to see him happy all were sitting and simply talking '.it was almost 2 when they heard some sound'''

ummhmmm lalala''..

lalalalala''aahahaha'''

reyam stood up in jolt''looked at each other and grinned wide and ran out'''..and stood catching the raling'. (look at the pic of house)the whole forest was covered with fog..

.

'they were looking out when they heard a voice'''

pyaar tune kya kiya

yeh pyaar tune kya kiya?????/

reyam smiled''.they saw someone legs''they ran down when the gang stood there on the steps itself''slowly the fog cleared and finally they saw their sweetheart dancing her heart out looking lyk a angel in white'

'


.rey just got lost in her just as the times when she used to dance around him with him in middle eyes closed and totally into him on the very same song'..this was soo close to him''swayam had tears in his eyes finally his baby was in front of him''back to him'.

Rey walked front''.and as her usual dance she jumped''.kicked high'.swayed her body lyk a feather''.and stood eyes closed still and spreading her arms'..and as usual rey hugged her from back and dug his face in her neck''.she stiffened for second looked at him and throwed her head back closing her eyes and caressed his face with left hand'..they stayed lyk that for hell lot of tym''..for every second reys grip on her increased'''finally swayam walked front to take his baby into his arms''

By the sound kriyaansh separated and next was she had a hard blow''

Kr: rey''she said with tears and shocked'..

But swayam slapped her next'.she looked at the two imp persons in her life with tears and with a pout'..both pulled her into a tight hug they started pouring qsns on her when Sharon hugged her and soon gang followed'but she never answered,,,,''after pulling back all were stil qsning when swayam spoke'..

Sw: kriya apne bestfrnd ko nahi milegi?? He is there''go sid is waiting for u''.

He said trying hard to give a big smile'..yes he was her bestfrnd even though she knew him for just two yrs''.swayam didn't feel jealous but felt sad as he thought he couldn't give her the love she was expecting from her bestfrnd'''

Kria looked at him(swayam) with teary eyes and hugged him tight and cried out loud..reyam were concerned but let her cry her heart'.but they were tensed''this was not their kria ''.by looking in her eyes they could say''.she was way too matured'..finally she pulled back and went to sid''all looked at them ''all were smiling but to their surprise kriya gripped his throat he cried in pain''all went to her who was growling like a hungry hound with her teeth pressed''.rey wrapped his arms around her and pulled her back''

Rey: are u out of mind kriya'..

Sw: for god sake kya kar rahi thi'he is ur bestfrnd''

Kr: yeh mera best frnd nahi hai''.she growled all were shocked''.

All were with sid and Sharon standing in middle of them swayam some feet away from kria''.suddenly kria shouted sharons name panicking Sharon feared and looked around to see what happened '..everyones attention shifted to Sharon and next second kriya dragged sid back with a hand around his neck and before everyone could move towards her he laid there with neck twisted totally and his soul already out of body!!!!!!!!!!!


so here it ends for today!!!!!!!!

hmm doubt haina ki ye kaisi end hai????

hmm i think u all saw my next res too...

yeah a last part...

i want everyone to cmnt...

lyk also plzz.it means a lot to me

love u all...

keep loving...😊

-deetha



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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay after ages im giving the second part ...coz i just wanna complete it and reduce one work...

all were shocked to core... mostly rey!!!!!rey went numb..sid was his bestest buddy...and killed by his love...he dnt know how to react...
he fell on knees and was looking at sid's dead body...

"kriya!!!! "swayam shouted and slapped her hard...sharon balanced her from falling and looked shocked at swayam ...he never was this angry...

"ye koi bachpana samjha rakha hai kya kriya??? tume pata bhi hai tumne kiya kya hai???"swayam shouted

kriya looked at him crying...

"tumne sid ko maardiya???"swayam said stillin shock...

"haan...usne mere saath jo kiya maine uske saath wahi kiya"kriya shouted coming out of sharon's grip...

no one understood what she said and shouted "WHAT??"when rey looked at her...

"tumne wahi kiya jo usne teresaath kiya??? matlab tumne use maara yaani usne tumhe maara??? are u gone nuts kriya??? kya hua baby??? tum aisi bakwaas kyun kar rahi ho???"swayam shouted...

"mai bakwaas nahi kar rahi hun...MAI MAR CHUKI HOON"she shouted venting out her pain and anger

"kriya ...plzz mazak mat karo"sharon placed a hand on her shoulder...

"mai mazak nahi kar rahi hun sharon... mai abhi tak wo bachi nahi rahi jise aap pamper karte the...mai mar chuki hoon accept it ...mai sirf aapsabkeliye wait kar rahi thi...aapki pyaar keliye...apni pyaar keliye...rey keliye"kriya said falling on her knees and crying...

swayam came to her and cupped her face

"yeh kya bol rahi ho kriya??? mujhe kuch samajh mei nahi aaraha...aakhir tum kehna kya chahti ho??"swayam asked crying...

"swayam...mujhe pata hai koi mujhe believe nahi kar rahe ho...par sach yahi hai...tumhari baby mar chuki hai..."she said with a baby crying face reminding him of their childhood when he used to send her to class room and she walks in waving him feeling he is gonna leave her alone...
he immediately hugged her ,...after few mins she pulled back...

"par jo log mereliye sabse important hai wo mujhe believe na kare i cant bear it..."she said wiping her tears.she suddenly got up and ran to rey...sat before him...

"rey aapko yaad hai ...usdin jab hamari ladayi hui thi...aur wahi last thi jab hum mile ek doosre se??"she aske crying...

rey just saw her crying with pain of seperation and confusion of what she is talking abt...

" us din sid ne mujhe call kiya... usne bola ki aap mujhe leke aane keliye bole the..."

"hello sweety!!!"

" hey sid!!"kriya spoke feeling low sitting alone in her bedroom...

"meri sweety ko kya hua??"sid asked..

"tumhara bhai...i hate him sid...har baat pe mujhpe chilla raha hai..."kriya said pouting...

"arey...aise kaise abhi khabar leta hun mai...par usne tumhe dhaanta kyun??"sid asked...

k: arey kal party mei maine galti se peeke dance kar rahi thi na ...isiliye aur mujhpe chilla rahe the ki maine aisi short dress kyun pehni...mai gussa hun usse

sid: arrey...chill shayad isiliye wo ye sab preparations kar raha hai...

k: kaisi preparations????😕

sid: arrey wo tumhe date pe leke jaa raha hai...oops par ye use mat batana...usne mujhe bola ki mai tumhe normally bahar leke aaun shopping ki naam se aur surprise denewal tha wo...

k: date????😳

sid: haan date...

r: date?????😲😕

kriya nodded her head...

sid: dnt dare u tell him haa...it was supposed to be a surprise...warna meri band bajegi...

k: haha...theek hai nahi bataungi...and worry rey tumhe kuch nahi karega...meri best friend pe haath lagane ki himmat???

she said with attitude...

sid: acha ab rakh..normal dress pehan ke aa ...he already bought a dress

k: kk...kab tak??

sid: evening 7 ko...

k: okay!!!! *excited*

**********

k: aur kitni door???

sid: hello madam...mai drive kar raha hun tum nahi...

k: very funny...

suddenly the car stopped...she looked around...it was a lonely road...in between a forest almost...

k: sid hum yaha kya kar rahe hai???

sid: dress peeche hai change karlo ...mai abhi aata hun...

soaying so he left...kriya looked at him...he walked into the forest...

she saw a red dress ...but she didnt like it..

k: rey ne aisi dress kyun diya kal ki dress keliye hi itna dhaant rahe the...
chalo ab de diya to try kar lete hai...

after sometym she came out and searched for sid...she didnt find him...

k: kaha gaya ye???

kriya said to herself...suddenly two hands wrapped around her waist pulling her into him and started kissing her nape...

she pushed him back...

k: WTH sid...are u crazy???

sid: yeah for u... i love u...

k: what??

sid: haan i love u...aur aaj tumhara date rey ke saath nahi mere saath hai...i will show u heaven

he scooped her in arms and leaned in to kiss her...she pushed him hard...

k: sid its not funny stop ur stupid prank...aisi matters mei mazak nahi karte ..got it...chalo abhi...

sid: kaha???

k: rey ke paas...

sid: ohh my sweety rey ...rey uske papa ke saath uski ancestors ke ghar gaya...ill health...

he said again scooping her in arms when she was looking shocked at him...

sid: now dnt think abt him...think abt me...

he said trying to kiss her but she pushed hard this tym...

he took support of car and got irritated...

sid: you...tumhe kabhi pyaar se samjhane wali baat samjh mei nahi aati na...thak gaya hun sweet sweet baatein karke...

kriya looked at him in disbelief...

sid: cant u see dammit i love u and u belong only to me got that??

he said pulling her towards him by hair...

kriya started crying as she finally realised the whole thing...

she kicked him in stomach and ran away...soon he followed her ...she ran wiping her tears and then it struck her...she took her handbag and took out her mobile and dialed to rey...but it came unreachable...so she tried swayam...the first ring started when she was pushed hard and thus she fell down...

swayam was tired roaming back of sharon in that big gaint mall...finally after getting a place and placing the bags he took out the mobile but the call ended...he redailed but none received...he frowned...

he called her home...

sw: aunty kriya kaha hai???

smriti: wo toh tum logon se milne mall nikli...

sw: akeli???

smriti: haan...usne bola taxi lelegi aur wapas sab milke aayaenge...kyun kya hua???

sw: kuch nahi aunty uski call aayi but i was late in picking ab wo utha nahi rahi...i think she is searching for us.mai dekhleta hun...

smriti: theek hai beta...waise bahar ka mat khana .uski plead karne par bhi...mai sabkeliye khana bana rahi hun

sw: theek hai...bye

sh: kya hua??

sw: kriya mall aayi hai hume join karne..lets find her...

both nodded and went in search...

sid: not so easy to escape...

sid flung upon her and tried forcing himself on her...but she was struggling a lot...but the wound which she got by hitting rock while falling on the backside of her head she slowly lost consiousness when sid kissed her...

soon she blanked out totally...it was indeed a big rock...her back of head was bleeding badly but the beast never noticed it...he thought she gave up...kissed her again and looked at her...

sid: thats like my girl...i said i will show u heaven dear... just become mine...

he said when he noticed the blood ...he got terrified and shook her...but already she passed out...

rey looked up at kriya in shock...she was crying badly...everyone was just rooted to place

he looked hear and there and sweated badly realising he killed her ...


he sad down and was thinking what to do when kriya 's mob vibrated...its from swayam...

soon sid got the call and rey started calling kriya...

the message passed to whole gang that kriya is nowhere to be found...swayam already checked all the places he would take her ...or rey wo take her...

every spot ...but she was nowhere to be found...

sid made himself and picked it...

sw: sid ...kriya tere saath hai???

sid: nahi toh..kyun kya hua???

sw: she is missing...its getting dark we have to find her wo bohut dar jayegi...

sid: i just came out for a ride mai dhodh tha hun

sw: yeah sure dude kuch bhi pata chale call me kk??

sid: h.haan

rey already left back saying he have some important work as he was very disturbed of her not talking to him...when he was abt to reach home swayam called him and said ...

rey was continuously calling kriya

rey: pick up pick up pick up dammit...

rey was driving madly and searching all places...

sid burried her in the forest and late at night he reached home acting helplessly as if not finding her...

that's the last day they saw her

kriya broke down totally ...rey believed her that sid forced on her...coz he once and twice noticed sid checking out kriya but he used to brush his thoughts as he trust sid...

after a long tym rey cupped her face and wiped her tears...

k: usne mujhe maar diya rey...he betrayed me...

r: kriya...baby...i know...tum daro mat...tumhe kuch nahi hoga...mere mumma pappa hai tumhare infact hum sabke.sab milke tab samhal lenge...mai hoon na...mai swayam vicky sab haina...tumpe shaq tak nahi aane denge...par ye marna ye sab saari mazak band karo

k: rey plzz believe me ...

r: stop it kriya...its not a joke!!!!! stop it its killing me...i cant even think abt it...

rey shouted...


k: mujhe pata hai...par meri jindagi ki sabse important cheez aap believe na karo mai aisa nahi hone doongi...aapko mana kar hi rahoongi ...chaliye mere saath...

she stood up and pulled him by wrist...

r: kriya kya hogaya tumhe aisi baatein kyun kar rahe ho...baby i love i i believe but aisi mazak mat karo...i cant take it...

rey was speaking but she was strong she just pulled him when rest followed...finally she stopped...

k: yaha ...yaha meri dead body hogi...check karo...

r: kriya for god's sake...

k: pzz rey mere liye...

rey looked at swaym who was confused too...finally both nodded...

kriya asked vicky to bring the tools from house...

neha: babu neha too coming...neha not allowing u alone this late...

k: kuch nahi hoga neha...wo mera dost hai...let him go...

all looked at her confused...after sometym vicky brught the tools...

kriya went to everyone and hugged and kissed their cheeks...she hugged swayam...

k: swayam tum mere bestie kabhi nahi the...tu hamesha bhai tha mereliye...apni iss baby ko bhoologe toh nahi???

sw: tu aisi baatein...

k: shh...i love u ...

sw: love u too baby ...par...

kriya went back smiling...

k: rey ki poori zimmedari teri...

she turned back and hugged rey...she cried for sometym and pulled back...

k: i love u a lot...

she said still in his embrace...she gently took his lips into her and kissed him softly whih he responded with all the love he had...

finally she puulled back...

rey: kriya ...wapas chalte hai...

k: nahi rey...aapko yeh sach jaan na hi hoga///////...

finally the boys after a lot of hard work found a almost skinny body...but soon all got shocked...

rey froze to hell when he found the ring he gifted her on her birthday.,the first birthday she had after confession...

swayam saw the mobile which was her fav which she never ever left back...whatever the situation may be...


all looked not able to believe it...slowly the turned back as sharon shouted...

sh: kriya...

all looked back at a struggling kriya with herself...as if she was burning...

aall was abt to run to her when she stopped...

k: meri laash ko baahar nikalne se mai yaha nahi reh sakti aur...

she said when everyone froze...slowly she dropped down into invisible powder...

rey fell on his knees...

"maine hi use maara...mujhe use believe karna chahiye tha...maine hi maara use"rey cried as swayam sat shocked to core...the one he lifted in his arms and brought up more as his daughter was now dead...gone forever...

sharon...she was still in shock...she was just looking at the body...



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rey stretched his arms ... he freshened up and prepared coffe for himself kept beside the tabel...he climbed down the steps sipping his coffee and reading the paper


pyaar tune kya kiya...
yeh pyaar tune kya kiya...

he smiled hearing the voice...he felt very happy that everyday his day ends hearing to that song and today his day started with it...he placed the cup and paper on the table and went into the garden back of the house...

he smiled seeing her...she was singing the song and watering the plants...

he walked and hugged her by waist and nuzzled closer into her hair inhaling her frangrance...

she rested her head back on his shoulder but soon pushed him back...he looked confused and with a pout ...

"rey kitni baar bolun...itni zor se mat pakda karo...mujhe dar lagta hai..for god's sake yaad rakhiye im 6 months pregnent MR."

she shouted on him...

"oops...sorry baatcutter...bhool gaya"rey said making a cute face...

"kya ??? jab se bacha aaya tab se bol rahi hun par aap toh kuch yaad hi nahi rakhte ho..."she again said...

"saamne tum ho aur mujhe kuch yaad rahe???"he asked scooping her in his arms...

"badmaash"she punched him slightly and hugged him...he smiled...

"acha ab aap rukho mai aapkeliye chai leke aati hun"she said pulling back...

"haan table pe hoga"rey said..."paper bhi laa dena"

" ab toh thandi hogayi hogi garam karke laati hun"she said leaving...

"theek hai par dhyaan se..."rey said loudly

"sharon hai rey meresaath"she shouted back...

he smiled and turned around...he smiled wide seeing that...he walked and sat on the grass and caressed the grave in front of him...

"meri baby itni untidy??? nah!!!!"he said and splashed water and cleaned with cloth and placed a bunch of roses on it and kissed it where the forehead will be present approximately...he sat and caressed the grave smiling...that's when she came back...

"rey.."she called

"haan kr...kavya"he said smiling...it was his usual mistake...she looked the print of kriya...exact print...but she is traditional a bit ...always in salwars...a bit long hair...calm and composed girl...

she handed him the coffee...he took it..she was abt to sit down on grass when he stopped her...

"arey neeche mat baito...idhar baito"he said making her sit on the grave at the lower end...he was abt to sit down when she asked...

"rey ..ye kiska hai??? aap aur swayam toh ispe kisiko galti se baitne nahi dete ho na??? par sirf mujhe kyun bithate ho??? kal swayam ne bhi yahi kiya...aakhir ye grave hai kiska.???"she asked ...she is really confused...
rey sighed..he should tell her someday...he cant hide anymore also...

"batayiye na rey...aur aap har din ek hi gaana kyun sunte ho???"she asked confused

he kneeled before her and caught her shoulders and looked into her eyes...

"dekho baatcutter u have to trust me ...mai ab jo bhi bol raha hun u shouldnt MU that"he said...

"haa rey i trust u completely boliye toh sahi"she asked...

"hmmm...dekho kavya u have to listen with a strong heart ...ye grave meri first love kriya ki hai"he said looking at the graving lovingly as a tear rolled down his cheek...

"kriya??? aap mujhe isi naam se bulate te na pehle??"she asked revining the past ...

"haan... coz tum bilkul kriya jaisi lagti ho...one sec"he said and went in...

she sat registering everything and getting clear...understanding what he said...she looked at the grave nothing was written on it except pari!!!

soon rey returned coughing and dusting a big album and after cleaning it he again kneeled before her...

"i dnt think i can bear this secret anymore baatcutter... i have to tell it to u... plzz dnt mis understand me...

kavya looked confused at rey when rey placed the album and opened the first page...

kavya froze ...the whole page was covered by her big pic...only of her face...laughing...at the first look she was shocked how she could be lyk her but soon she adored her...she was now listening to his each word deeply...she turned the page...a small boy in his trousers was holding a naga punga baby!!!

"ye swayam hai...aur ye bachi...kriya hai..donon ke parents besties the...ek hi coumpound mei do ghar mei rehte hai...that too almost attached...swayam is the only child and kriya too...swayam jisdin se chalna seekha tab se he started loving her ...apni behan ki tarah treat karta tha..."rey went of speaking abt kriyam and their childhood when kavya was turning pages and matching his story...

ps: ab rey use unki bachpana bata tha hai tab tak hum apni FB mei chalte hai

it took a lot of tym to control rey ..swayam even though broken caonsoled rey...with much difficulty the headed back after burring sid ...

but for next two days rey dissapeared...

all were tensed but his msg that he would be back sound and safe made them quite ...they thought he needed sometym alone...

after two days rey came to house...

"mom dad maine ek naya building khareeda hai...i need money for that...mai job karke wapas kardoonga but plzz..."rey asked

his had never thought twice and gave him how much he wanted...

"guys!!!! can u meet me now"rey spoke to all boys who are in conference...walking out to his car...

"par kaha rey??"swayam asked...

"batata hun"rey said ..all agreed and met him near the forest...

"rey yaha kyun laaya??"swayam said his heart already shrinking into pain ...

"maine ek nahi building khareeda ...bilkul waise jaise kriya chahti thi ki hum chaar saath rahenge *4 meant swaron and kriyaansh*

i finally found one of that kind...humare gharse thoda dur but acha hai...ab kriya ki laash ko wahi pe rakhenge...meri kriya yaha anath jaise nahi rahegi...we can still take care of her...rey said lyk mad...


swayam smiled...all agreed...they took her body to the building and burried there placing it in a box along with all the rituals...

reyam warned everyone that even by mistake none will sit or stand on it...

days went on...reyam used to visit the house twice a day but day by day rey shrinked more...he became totally silent...

after 3 months

reyam were in front...swayam is driving and rey as usual was looking out lost in thoughts...the rest of the gang was sitting at back...

"rey!!!"swyam turned to call him but pressed the break suddenly...

all shouted as they hit someone...

all walked out to her...

a girl in a white salwar fell on the ground and her free long hair covered it...

rey looked normally tensed at her when rest chanted sorry mantra...

"how dare u??"she said and stood up fuming and rubbing her hand...

all were shocked...she was exact print of kriya...rey was shocked beyond limits...

"hey mr...gaadi chalani nahi aati?? zebracrozzing pe aankhein aur bada karke dekhna seekho... agar mujhe kuch hogaya hota toh koun mujhe apna ghar leke jaayega aur kya hoga mera...idiots.car chalaani nahi aati bade aaye car leke... idiots hai sabke sab..."

she was blabbering continuously whe rey hugged her tightly

"baatcutter"rey hugged her tight crying...

"chodo"she pushed him back hard as swayam held him and shouted...

"idiot...ladki se kaise behave karte hai uski manners bhi nahi hai...stupid"she shouted and walked away...

rey stood the smiling at her through tears...

"baatcutter"he mumbled...

"woh pari nahi hai rey"vicky said

rey looked at him and his face fell again... *trip called😆*

at home rey was just remembering her...then kriya 's last words when she kissed him replayed...

" aapko move on karna hoga...meri kasam"she said cutely...

"move on toh nahi karsakta kriya ...par i will make her mine...i will make her fall for me...mai tumhe chod nahi sakta...uss maasoom chehre ko chod nahi sakta..."rey said determined...from next day rey was back of her appologising and pleading her and impressing her *genuine trying ha no evil trying* finally kavya fel for him and they both got married...during that tym rey somewhere started liking her...after marriage they were sent to honey moon...rey refused to go but swaron demanded...rey sighed and agreed...he still has kriya.s chain with him... the trip made them close...rey fell for kavya but he still loves kriya...finally he made her his soulmate and here today there were gonna have their baby after 3 months...

rey told everyone not to tell her abt kriya as she may feel betrayed but he really does love her...

"aur uske baad uss din accident mei mai tuhse mila tha...uske baad toh tum jaanti hi ho..."rey said lookinga ther...

she was lookinga t him shocked...

"baatcutter ...i promise...haan maine o kiya galat hai but now i really do love u... par i love her too...mai use kabhi bhool nahi sakta...aur naahi tumhe kho sakta hun...i will die ..."rey was cut...

"shh...kaisi baat kar rahe ho re??? i understand...mai koi betrayed nahi feel kar rahi hun ...infact im surprised ki itna pyaar??? agar use utna karte ho toh im sure aap mujhe bhi utna hi pyaar karoge"she said hoping a yes...

he nodded a no."tum donon ek hi ho mereliye...do alag log nahi ki use jyaada aur tujhe kam doon... mereliye tum donon ek hi ho"rey said with all love...

"infact isiliye mai aur swayam tumhe yaha baitne dete hai"rey said...

"aur aaj ke baad aap aisa nahi karoge"she stood up...rey looked confused...

she knelt on knees and carresed the grave...i m glad ki meri shakal isse milti hai...nahi toh aapki pyaar kabhi nahi mil pata...she hugged rey...

rey made her sit down and hugged her tight...

suddenly cool breeze started ...

"baatcutter...tum sach mei hurt nahi ho na"he said,...

"linecutter kabhi baatcutter ko hurt kar sakta hai??"she asked hugging him tight and nuzzling more for his warmth,...

"nahi"he replied smiling but his smile soon vanished...he never ever even in the story he mentioned kriya calling him linecutter ...then how?

he pulled back ...she looked confused...

"kya kaha tumne??"rey asked

"maine kya kaha??"she replied...

"line cutter jaisa kuch"he asked...

"arghghh!!!!! rey...pehle tho aap mujhe ye azeeb naam baatcutter diya...par maine socha pyaar se diya...and i dnt have weird thoughts...ki aise naam doon...irritate mat karo..."she said and hugged him again...

he looked her confused... someone sitting on the grave laughed at him...after few secs kavya looked up...

"aap mujhe bhoolke us naam ke peeche pade ho??? "she pouted...

"no dear...love u"he said...

"love u too"he gently took her lips into his...suddenly in between the whether became cool and pleasant and he felt her fragrance in air...he felt the his first kiss he had with kriya ...but he ignored and kissed hard pulling her more close

it was the second tym he felt it first when he became dad ...second now...

they pulled back and she rested her head on his as she felt light as if suddnly loosing weight...


she walked to the grave sat on it pulling her legs together and adoring the couple in front of her and sang...rubbinher arms

"pyaar tune kya kiya"



************

"sharon kriya ne breakfast kiya??" swayam asked entering kitchen

"nahi toh...pata nahi yeh ladki kaha gayi?? kheer maangi...almost hogaya...bulao na use..."sharon said stirring the kheer nad pulling the knife which her one yr old boy just held stitting on the slab and watching her cook...and in between eating the gulab jamun his mom prepared sometym back...

"okay...so samurai chale???"he asked abt to lift his son...

"nahi papa...mujhe yahi rehna hai mumma ke saath"he cried...

"swayam chod do..gulab jamun kha raha hai"sharon smiled...

"reh hamesha apni mumma ke paas ..."swayam showed fake anger and left as sharon giggled shaking her head...

"kr...kavya!!!!!"swayam shouted standing in mid of living room...

"kavya nahi kriya hi bulao mujhe" she said from back...swayam turned in shock...

"rey ne mujhe sab bata diya"she said...

"kavya we didnt mean to hurt u .."he was cut...

"offo swayam...bas karo sab ab...im not at all hurt...i want u all to feel her back...mujhe aaj se kriya hi bulao"she said...

"my baby!!!!"swayam said and hugged her...still hugging and crying he spoke...

"love u dear"

"lub u thooo swayu!!!!!!!"she said cutely ...he pulled back immediately...

"kya kaha tumne??" he asked...

never ever anyone calls him swayu except kriya and she always say the same "lub u thooo swayu"

"maine kya bola??"she asked...

SHE giggled seeing swayam's face

"abhi tumne kuch bola"he asked agai...

"maine nahi tumne bola i love u...ohh answer keliye waiting??? ofcourse i love u too"she said hugging him again

he after fews secs slowly called her as she nuzzled closer hugging him tight...

"baby"he called softly...

"haan swayu..."she said smiling lost in her land...

"i knew it"he smiled through tears and hugged her back kissing her forehead and looked at the grave outside where rey was caressing it



i had some other plans par ye flop nikla...

errr!!!!!!!!!!

i dnt get what i wrote...

sorry for spoiling the end...

acutally jo socha wo bhool gayi...😆

like and comment'

love ya

deetha😳


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