SwaRon OS : Far away for too long... - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

they really are far away for too long...
the way you show patch up n confession part, it was mind blowing...
loved it...

Originally posted by: v_shreyu

Simple yet so beautiful 😳..

I wish Rose day ws somethng like this😳..

I loved tht rehearsal hall scene 😲

❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Os by guru ji😲
Omg dam excited. .
Unres. .
Could not wait till nite to read it. .
Missed ur writing a lot yaar..
Finally ur back..

Now dis is wat i call PHADU os..
Ur a true star guru ji..
I already read it twice am so in love wit it. .
It makes me happy n sad both after reading dis os..
Happy cos its just amazing feeling seeing swaron like dis..
N sad dat v ll never get swaron on d show..
But dis one was simply wow lovely n beautiful..
Am so completely in love wit it. .
N swayam oh gosh he is such a perfect loverboy..
Miss him so much..
Love it love it love it. .
I feel super happy after reading dis. .

N yayy ur bed time stories r back. . Am a fan of ur.s truly i am one..
Love d way u present everything..
Keep writing more more more. .

Simply awesome I loved this write up girl you wrote it beautifully..
The highlight for me would be Sharon's dialogues in the rehearsal hall where she questions Swayam and Swayam's explanations ohhh it was superb just too good you wrote it beautifully..
Also the sweet romantic moments after their patch up and not to forget Sharon's jealousy and Swayam's wicked teasing I loved it all..
Keep writing more..😊.

Originally posted by: nami2811

Mihi thanks a ton for the feedback! It feels really nice to know you read every detail of my work and give a detailed report of it. Encourages me to write more!

Yes I agree the confession lacked emotions and it was all in a hurry. There had to be more of Swayam's dialogues where he tells her he realized her unconditional love for him. Will definitely keep these things in mind and I'm so glad with the feedback that you never know I might write something today! 😛

this was wonderful and awesome and cute os... loved it

Originally posted by: -spongy-

di !

the OS was magical.

you know i really missed your works.

this was amazing.

while reading the OS i was seriously imagining swaron and so wished that the episode have been that way.

it was s beautiful

well written 👏