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Chapter ~ 12

After Making Me Ready For The Mehndi Ceremony, I Was Left Alone In My Room. I Stood There Adoring The Lehnga I Wore. White Color Lehnga, With Fine Work On It, Of White Color Itself, And Pinkish Velvety Borders To It. With Nothing Much, Minimum Makeup, Not More Jewelry, Just Diamond Studs In My Ears, Fine Diamond Necklace, And A Bracelet In My Left Hand.
Just As I Stared Hard At The Person Standing Behind Me, A Few Inches Apart. He Hugged Me From Behind To Which I Smiled. But Then I Realized That He's Not Supposed To Be Here!! :O
I Shrugged Him Off. Faced Him.
J - "What Are You Doing Here Viren!? Just Get Out Before Anyone Sees You!!" I Said Pushing Him.
V - "Easy, Mrs Vadhera...I Just Wanted To See How My Wifey Looks. Dressed Up In This Particular Out Fit!" He Said Grinning.
J - "How Did You Get Inside Viren?"
V - "Through Window...But That's Not Important. Wow! Jeevika Ji You Look Stunning!!" He Kissed My Forehead, Saying So.
J - "Thank You. AND NOWWW...Leave!!" I'll See You In The Evening At The Mata Ki Chowki..."
V - "You're Going To Compensate So Much For Keeping Me Away Always Wifey!" He Said With A Sad Face Of A Kid, Who Doesn't Wish To Go To His School...! :P
J - "What Compensation?" I Said Questioning Him.
V - "You'll Get To Know About It On Our First Night After Marriage!" He Said Winking And Me, And Getting Of The Window. "For Now...Bye..." He Said Kissing Me On My Cheeks, Which Were Crimson Red By Now..

In Next Few Hours We Were All Done With Our Mehendi's.
It Was Lunch Time, Everyone Busy Eating Food. The Ladies Were Fed By Their Men, While Virat Was Feeding His Little Sisy Vedika. I Was Sitting Alone! This Jerk Viren Was Found Nowhere. So I Decided To Skip The Lunch And. Rest In My Room.

I Sat There Adoring The Mehendi. I Closed My Eyes, For Some Time; Resting My Head On The Headrest.
Just As I Sat There Oblivious To The Surrounding I Felt Soft Lips On My Forehead. I Opened My Eyes To Find No One Other Than Viren.
I Stared Hard At A Smiling Viren, "Where The Hell Were You!?"
V - "I Got A Call From The Office, I Had To Go."
J - "Don't Talk To Me! Go Away."
V - "Why Would I Go Away?"
J - "Because You Don't Care About Me!" She Said Crying.
V - "Yeah Right I Don't Care About You..." Her Head Shot Up As He Said That. While Viren Brought Forth His Hand In Which He Held A Plate Full Of Food For Her. Immediately A Smile Formed On Her Face.
V - "Brought This For, But I Guess I Don't Care For You..So I'll Take It Back..."
J - "Please, Don't Go...I'm Hungry Virenji..." She Said Pouting Like Little Kid.
V - "Okay, Then Here, Have This. I'll Go.."
J - "How Am I Going To Eat?!?" Almost Showing He'd Hands Like Kids To Viren.
V - "Somebody Just Said I Don't Care For Them..."
J - "I Really Was Upset With You..You Were Found Nowhere, When The Other Men Were Feeding Their Ladies..."
V - "I Know, And I'm Sorry For Not Being Here Too!"
He Said Feeding Jeevika.
J - "Did You Eat Something? Now This You Eat Please?"
Viren Agreed To Her. He Continued To Feed Her And Himself.

V - "Now Time For My Payment!" He Said Winking At Her. "But Before That, I'll Just Keep This Plate In The Kitchen...I'll Be Back, Get Ready To Give The Payment Wifey!"He Said Leaving A Blushing Jeevika In Room.

When He Returned To The Room He Was Disappointed. Jeevika Sat On Bed Surrounded By Di, Bhabhi, Vedika and Adi... He Left Without Letting Know Of His Presence. But Jeevika Did See Him. She Mumbled "Awwiiiee My Poor Baby..."
V - "Bhabhi? Did You Say Something?"
J - "Huh?!? No, Nothing..."
And Yeh Girls Continued To Chit Chat...

Jeevika's POV
Two Hours Later, We Decided To Remove Off The Mehendi.
I Stood There, Smelling My Hands. I Love The Mehendi's Smell To Core. My Hands Were Deep Maroon.
As I Was Lost In The Fragrance, Viren Held Me Firmly By My Waist, Taking My Hand In His, He Smelled My Hand To, Later He Kissed It, Making Me Smile.
J - "Viren, It's Almost Evening Time, Go Get Ready For The Chowki Now." Just As I Said This He Held Me Tighter.
V - "Before That I Need My Payment You See...And As You Are Late In Paying Me By 3 Hours, You'll Have To, Pay Me More!"
J - "What If I Won't Pay You?"
V - "Sochlo, I Can Have It Myself!"
Saying So He Made Me Face Him. He Leaned Forward To Kiss Me When He Was Stopped By His Phone, It Started Ringing.
Annoyed He Picked Up The Call.
V - "Yes, What Is It!?"

He Talked To Her For The Next 40 Secs, But He Didn't Loosen Up His Grip On Me. Sliding His Phone In His Pocket, "So Where Were We...?"
J - "Here Itself Mr. Vadhera!"
V - "Hmmm, So Shall We Continue??" He Asked Grinning.
J - "No! Go Get Ready! And By The Way, Who's Call Was It?"
V - "Huh!? Aahhh That Was The Call Of My Ex...!"
J - "Hmmm...So What Did You're So Called Ex Cum Secretary Say?" I Could See His Jaw Hanging Down.
J - "Shut Your Mouth Viren!" I Said Giggling.
V - "How Did You.."
J - "Okay, Just Forget About It. Tell Me Mr. Liar Why Did She Call?"
V - "On The Very First Day After Marriage I've A Hearing! She Just Remembered Me About It..."
J - "Okay, I'll Keep That In Mind! Now Go Get Ready!!" She Said Trying To Free Herself From Viren's Grip, But He Was Too Strong For Her.
J - "Viren What Now? Leave Me! And Go Get Ready..."
V - "Don't You Think You Forgot Something Wifey!?"
He Said Leaning Forward.
J - "Virenji..." She Said Pushing Him Back By His Shoulders A Little. "We'll Talk About This Later, Now We Need To Get Ready, We Shouldn't Get Late!"
V - "Jeevikaji, You Can Give Me A Halki Phulki Kiss...Or Else I Won't Leave You..." He Said Winking.
J - "Why Do You Always Have To Blackmail Me!?" She Said Rolling Her Eyes...
V - "Because You Never Listen When I Request You..."
J - "Whatever..." She Said Kissing Him Lightly On His Lips, And Hid Herself In His Chest.
V - "Surprising!" He Said Smirking, To Which Jeevika Smacked His Arms.
J - "Now Fine? Can You Go Get Ready!?"
V - "Not Really..." He Said Making Puppy Face. "But As I Said We'll See To It After Marriage!!" He Said Grinning Ear To Ear. To Which Jeevika Blushed, And Viren Left To Change.

Probably Sending Pm's This Time To EveryOne! Make Sure You Guys Read Chapter ~ 11 (101603038 ) And Give Feedback! Waiting Eagerly!

And Sorry For Keeping You Guys On Waiting! 😊

Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res!!
*unres
yayyy
an update after ages
wow 2 updates
party time
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whooo
aww it was cute
loved it to the core
it was wonderful
aww virika get married
yayy
and there romance
wowww!!
and the kiss
splendid
aww vedika got angry
bless!!
then jeevika gets angry as viren is not there to feed her food wen others feed there wife
awww
wat a cute couple
u rock in every update
and carry on to rock
thnx
cont soon
Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I've read faar moree than this!!
Haha <3
Continue soon :p
P.S. For me ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was amazing
marvellous
beautiful
romantic
fabulous
...
cont soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Charucrazy

I've read faar moree than this!!

Haha <3
Continue soon :p
P.S. For me ;)


It Was A Secret Between Us Mumma!! 😆 You Declared It!?? 😕 😆 😉
I'm Stuck Up!! 😭 But Will Try Writing!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
reaaallyyy amazinggg... lovedd it.. finallyyy Virikaaa getting marrieddd...
keepp continuinggg... eager to read moreee :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooohooo look whose back😊
i missed u so much here🤗
ahhh i am very angry with 😡
u even didn't tell me that u update ur story few days ago😡
i get to know about this today😳😲
and read both chapters too😊
plz don't do this again😒
i waited so long for this update😊
ghosh... u r superb writer 👏
i loved each and every bit of it
too good😊
EEEkkksss... virika getting married🥳
vedu getting upset😆
the kiss ☺️🤗
the romance
god u have just taken my mind away😳🤢
loved each and everything😳
cant express in word sorry😊
splendid job 👏⭐️
keep updating!!!😊
love u ❤️
take care🤗
and plz don't disappear from now from here😡
u r missed by many people here😊😳

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb...
amazing update...
luvd it...
update asap ...
srry for short comment...vry busy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing
superb
its so romantic update
virika's romance haayeee Tooo gooddd
fabulous
love it
Brilliant
awsame
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww shoo cute update
love it,
romance of virika love it
thanks for the pms,
continue soon

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