#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Gauri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Amazing part!! Poor zoya...cont soon!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Superb update...!!!!

its really painful...

Asad's past was such full of pain..but now what he is doing is not acceptable...

feel so bad for zoya...

continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

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garimaksgian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Story is movng awesome. Do pm me whn u cont.

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Ramya dear what have you done...

You've made me an emotional wreck😭😭

Your writing was brilliant👏 every scene touched a cord in me...

The flashback with Rashid leaving Dilshaad was superb...

This left me shattered just as the title of this chapter suggested...Awesome...Just super Awesome...

You know...I actually could feel Asad's turmoil and Zoya's pain...I felt like grabbing something and squeezing the life out of it

You left me in awe dear👍🏼

Thank u so so much! I'm just so happy that u guys r happy with the update. As a writer, I just want mt readers to be satisfied with whatever theu read n I'm so happy I cud do that this time. Thnx a million for ur comment, I was grinning my face off while reading it. Thank u so much! 😃

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Hi guys! Well, I'd tried to update today but I have a whole load of projects and tests lined up my back and I'm really caught up right now and on the 10th of March, my annual exams r gonna begin, I need to start to start ny revision too so yeah. I'd said that I'd update on monday of I didn't today, but it might become Tuesday night so plz bear with

By the way, I've posted a very very important right below the preview in this post itself and plz plz read it, its very important.

So here goes the preview for the 15th chapter:

If you will ever love me again...

Zoya groaned loudly. "Allah miyan, what's wrong with these airlines? Why can't at least one of them have an early available ticket to New York? I have to wait for at least two weeks to get one single ticket, that's ridiculous!" She'd been checking for several hours on different websites of airlines for booking a ticket but none of them had turned out to be useful, they'd all been fully booked. Tears reformed in her eyes, "Wherever I go, I'm not staying in this house with Mr.Khan for so long. He can't even bear to look at my face, let alone put up with me for the next fourteen days." She sighed and concluded, "Guess I'll have to stay in a hotel for a couple of weeks, then" She decided to book the earliest ticket available at the moment, which was fourteen days away. She sent the confirmation on her iPad, a message popped up, confirming that her reservation had been made. Zoya stared at the screen. Two weeks. That was it and she would be out of the country, thousands of miles away. She would have to live without those she'd learned to love over time; her beloved phuppi who'd been no lesser than a mother and Najma, who was as dear as her sister, to her. And Asad. She couldn't possibly describe in words about how deeply felt for him. She loved him more than anyone else on the planet, he meant everything to her and even just thinking about leaving him made her stomach churn. She had no idea how she could live without Asad, the one man she'd ever loved. She pressed her temples, everything had happened so quickly that she hadn't even had the time to think over anything, or even try to make things right and now she regretted it. A tear slid down her cheek. "Was I too rash?", she pondered. Maybe she was, but wasn't it Asad who'd destroyed their relationship? She wiped away her tears and fritted her teeth, concluded"No, I wasn't wrong, if there's anyone who was wrong, it was him, not me."

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Ok that was it, I know it was nothing much but plz do leave ur reviews behind!

Now coming to that note I was talking about, here it is(plz read it guys!):

In one of my previous PMs to tbose on my buddy list, I'd said that I was gonna get this FF shifted to the FF forum since they'd limited KSG's fans to one single thread. I'm still very unhappy abt it but I'm kinda reconsidering my own decision. I just need ur feedback on this guys, plz leave a comment behind on ur thoughts abt it, a simple yes or no would do but no bashing plz! I know there's gonna be a lot of u who might say that its my choice, but plz don't say that. I'll end up getting really confused so plz give me ur honest opinion, I won't mind any answer but plz don't sya that its my choice, I know that, but I want u guys to tell me what u want. Some of u might have something to say that u might not want others to see so feel free to pm me, but again, no bashing plz! Plz do leave ur thoughts behind!

Thank you,

Ramya :)

Edited by ..Ramya.. - 11 years ago

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Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

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Yuppie 😃 Me first *dances around* lol😆

I dont want them to seperate😭

All the best for your exams.Do well 👍🏼

About the ff forum or QH forum..Karan is no longer part of Qubool Hai and as it is a Kabhi FF so if u keep the ff here QH will get more rank although Karan is no longer part of it :(

This is just my opinion 😊

Edited by Rosered1 - 11 years ago