Taarey New OS Mission manofying Taani

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!!
How r u all?

Well im here with my second os on demand of MY ANIYATHI VINI(VINIVDLOVER)..
She wants me write the Romantic one..
Iam not at all gud at Writing Romance but still I tried..
Hope u all like tis.
N VINI HOPE I'M UPTO UR EXPECTATIONS...
Here u go...



MISSION MANOFYING TAANI...

Taani:No Rey..I don Wanna Talk to u.
Juzz leave me alone...
Taani shouted at Rey...
Rey looked at her all Calm..
Its not new for him.
Since he proposed her.
Its an usual one for him.
For the past 6months of their Love.
He used to make mistake which made her angry.
N she shout at him.
Always it was blender on his side.
But now he is worrying how to manofy her.Bcuzz it's a biggest trouble.
Rey left the place n went to boys rest room.


Swayam who was standing their found Rey all Sad.
He Guessed what had happened.
He Sat next to him without looking at him.
Rey looked at Right side.
N swayam looked at left side.
Without looking eachother they stated to Talk.
SW:So Fir se jakda?
Re:haan yaar.Is bar be Galdi meri hey.
SW:So ab kya karne wale?
Re:patha nahi Swayam.
Sw:hmmm.Kya mein tuje kuch mathat karu?
Rey's face was brightened at tis.
He looked at him.
R:Really.
Swayam smiled n nooded.
R:Paka tum help karungi na?
SW:haan.first listen to me..
They discussed how to manofy her.
Rey start to work on that.
Rey constantly giving messages to Taani...
All r beautiful love messages with Sorry at the end.
Swayam has so much confident that tis plan will work.




On the Result Taani called rey.
Rey was jumping in joy..
He thanked swayam n went alone to talk.
R:Hello(He told in full romantic mood)
T:R U MAD REY?????
A smile in Rey's face was went..
R:kyun Taani..Kya.kya..huwa?
T:Meine tumse kya kaha tha.Bus thodi theer kiliye akela chod tho muje..
Tune ye kya kiya?
R:vo Taani..
T:shut up.mein vp sir ki saath important meeting discuss karne ki waqt bar bar muje msg bejkar muje irritate kyun kiya?
R:...
T:Tume patha hey?Aaj vp sir phele baar mujse gursa hogai.sirf tumhari vajase..
R:Vo Taani..I Waan..
T:Aur maat bolo.I thought of forgiving u.
Par ab mein tumse bohoth zyaada naraz hun.
With that she cutted the call.
Rey was hell angry that his plan back fires at him.
Swayam came near him.
Sw:So Rey.meine kaha na mera plan zaruur work hongi..
No need to say thanks hun..
Rey looked at him all furious.
R:abhay bewaafcuff tumhari vajase mein trouble mein hun.mein tu me chodungi nahi..
Swayam ran as much as he can n rey behind him..


EVENING:
TAAYAM HOUSE:
It was the same day evening.
Rey came to meet Swayam to discussing about an Dance event.
He pressed the calling bell.
After the few minutes the door opened.
It was Taani.
Rey looking at her all stunned.
She wore a beauitiful brown dress.
Rey forgot to blink..
Her hair flow In the Air..
N she is no less than a godess from heaven..
Whereas Taani looking at Rey.
Since morning after the fight she didn't met him.
N she fighted again through phone..
They both lost in their own thoughts...
LLHH MOMENT.
TAAREY BGM STARTED..
It was Taani who came frm the trance first.
She opened the door fully n moved back inside the house.
Rey came back to the Reality..
R:Swayam kahan hey??
TPOV:So ye bhai se milne kiliye aayi.
Nahi usskimeri parva hey.
Nahi apni pyaar ka.
Tk agar ye itni aatitude thethi hey tho mein bhi kuch kaam nahi.
akir mein TAANI SHIKAWAT hun.
Taani in a stubborn voice.
T:bhai bahar gayi hey..
R:Oh.kab avongi?
T:patha nahi.aap bhai se pucho..
With that she gave an attitude look n went to kitchen.
Rey smiled at her innocance.
She is too cute wen she was angry.
He always love that cuteness.
Rey made a call to Swayam n he informed that he will be back in 15 minutes n asked Rey to stay there.
Rey felt thirsty.
He Wen t inside the kithchen.
There he saw is angel cookng something.
The view infront of him beautiful.
She is beating something in a bowl.
Her hair stands disturbing her again n again.
HE has an urge to put her strands behind her ear.
Taani felt his presence.
She looked at him.


LLHH MOMENT.
TAAREY BGM.



T:kya chaye Rey?
R:vo paani..
Rey make is ay to frigde n Taani busy in her cooking.
He drank the water n came near her.
R:kya kare he tu?
T:bhai kiliye chocolate cake..
Taani took a mixture in a spoon n taste that.
Rey was looking at her.
She tasted that n felt happy that everything was perfect.
A small stoke was left in her lips.
R:vo..
Rey pointed her lips.
Taani tried to wipe.
But it Remains.
So he went near her.
Taan start to breath heavily..
Rey came so close to her.
He put his hand on her lips.
Taani closed her eyes.
He is enjoying his affect on her..
He wiped that n tasted that.
R:hmm yummy.
Taani opened her eyes..
R:par thodisi problem he is cake mein.
Chal saath mein sort out kathe hein.
T:no..imean noo need.
But rey didn't listened to her.
He went to her back n placed his both hands over hers.
Taani was in dilemma .
Hetouched her from both o her shoulders till her hands.
Taani breathing haevily..
He engrossed his fingers with hers n dipped in the chocolate mixture.
He took her fingers out n licked that from her fingers.
Taani feels her breath are uneven.
She cant able to stop him.
Rey looked at her n enjoying the effect.
He made her turned.
Now both their hands r filled with choclotes.
He raised his hand n cupped her face.
Taani still didn't opened her eyes..
He moves close to her..
Taani clearly knows what is awaited for her.
She clutched his shirt.
He looked at her closed eyes.
N looked at her juicy lips.
He sided his head.
N he placed a peck on her lips.
Taani shivred.



soon it turned to a sweet kiss.
Rey liked her lips n Taani morned in pleasure'
Soon Rey entered into her mouth.
N he enjoying the sweet taste of her'
Taani too enjoying tis.
she pulled his hair for support.
Soon it became passionate kiss
n it lasted for few minutes.
Soon they pulled away due to short of breath.
I T WAS THEIR FIRST EVER KISS.
Rey looked at n said.
R:IM SORRY.
Taani opened her eyes.
Rey's eyes pleading was clearly visible.
Taani put her hands on his cheeks..
T:ITS OK.men's maaf kiya
N then wen he was about to peck her.
The door bell rangs..
Rey looked all irritated.
R:god.patha nahi muje kyun Romance karne ki moka nahi milre.Koi na koi zaruur aakar disturb karthey the..
Taani smiled at him.

THE END...



I hope u all like..
I make it as long one..
So plz do cmnt n like as its worth for me.
ignore mistakes

Meet u all soon ... 😳 😳 😳

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Aarti_Taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
nice os ... really liked it.. :) 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
super romantic os.

u write very good romantic updates.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
lovely os
taarey romance loved it
reyam part funny
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Really cute nicesweet n short os , loved it , do write more dear 😛 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u thank u thank u chechiii
Love u sooo much 🤗
Aaapto kamal h
Romance b itne ache likte ho????
😉 😉
I loved it chechiii 🤗
Thanks a lot
N the situation was superb 😊
Rey manofying taani ...
Taarey fight hehe
Rey toh galti karne mein expert h kya???
N reyam part hahaha funny 🤣
Swayam ne help kiya
But uski help hi prob bangaya 🤣
N another fight ...poor Rey 😃😃
But chocolate cake part was out of the world ❤️❤️
Omg I'm still blushing 😳😳
Rey licking the cake from taanis lips awww 😳😳
I'm in taarey dream land 😉
N that peck n a beautiful wonderful amazing kisss😳😳😳
Loved it 😳
Thank u sooo much 😊
Hugsss
Keep writing
I seriously loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
cute os ..
keep writing..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
it was a superb romantic os...
i just love u os
great job
well done...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Superb os..
Oh my god..taarey fight
Rey ka plan flop😆
Reyam part was so nice

Aww...taarey romance😳
U wrote it so well
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Awesome os!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
Taani's anger was cute and funny!!
Swayam's plan flop and rey's murderous glare was hilarious!!
Loved taarey romance!!
It was hot and passionate!!
The first kiss was heavenly!!
Please write more works like this!!
Love,
Ash

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