Tarey - PRINCESS OF SWARNA MAHAL * Sneak peak (4) up* pg 31*21/4

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Superb concept
I'm already falling in love with it
Wow Taarey are secretly marry ;)
Lovely CS
Hmm, looks like dadi is the witch in here
Waiting to read more

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Thanx for your response...
Continue giving your support...

Part (1) -> Subhadra's Evil Deeds

[B]SWARNA MAHAL

An old lady was sitting in a rest-chair in a grand room..
Oh! The room had an ancient touch with marvellous interiors..
ROYALTY was oozing through every corner of it...

The old lady was thinking something, her eyes closed,

"I, Subhadra Shekhawat, is the sole owner of this palace..(eyeing the palace)..

Kya kuch nahi karna pada Swarna Mahal ki Malkin banne ke khatir...
Shadi ke ek mahina maa hi apan pati ki dusri shadi karwani padi..
Kya pata ki hume kesan mehsooa hua hoga?
(A Pained e,pression crossed her face)

Aur 3 mahine baad jab wo oo ko chhod hamare pas wapas laute to hume hi unhe jan se marna pad gaya..
(Makes a FAKE crying face..)

My husband's second wife,
Vasudhara, widow of the former King,
QUEEN of Swarna Mahal, gave full authority to her husband after marriage...
ha...ha...ha...

And that's when I became queen of Swarna Mahal, while she was thrown out...

But, the final authority always lay with my husband & one day I came to know he's betraying me!

Me! I found him helping that Ugly family of Vasundhara in disguise..

And THAT was the LAST Day of Rajveer Nandan
Because, I, Subhadra Rajveer Nandan, Shot him in HIS Heart as it was the organ which had developed feelings for the good for nothing Queen..

Even at death bed, he spoke,
"I fell in LOVE with Devki Nandan..
She's so pure..(a smile adorned his face thinking about her)..
And you, Subhadra, you Killed me for this Swarna Mahal, but the
PRINCESS OF SWARNA MAHAL
Will Become the Only RULER of Swarna Mahal...
Uske pehle kadam iss Mahal mein padte hi Tumhare kadam ladkhada jayeneg..."
Before, he could complete the sentence, another gun shot was heard.
Subhadra Nandan Pierced another bullet in her Husband's Heart..

Subhadra was brought out of her Memories of PAST BIRTH hearing a maid calling her,
"Dadisahab, Chote sahab apan sath kisisko lekar aaye rahe..."
The maid stammered while speaking the later part, and bowing her head throughout...

Subhadra stood up & was about to walk ahead when she STUMBLED over her steps..
Uske pehle kadam iss Mahal mein padte hi Tumhare kadam ladkhada jayeneg..."

But, she brushed off the thought thinking No one can Conquer Her..

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At the same time, Chote thakur, Reyansh Singhania, entered inside Swarna Mahal with his One month Wedded WIFE- Tani Reyanash Singhania..

^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^

So, how's the first part?
It was just introduction to Evil Subhadra...
The whole thinking process was of PAST BIRTH...
She killed her husband in this birth too,
How & why,
Revealed later...

Want flashback of Tarey marriage??

Hit like if you're following the story &
Do comment guys...

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poorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

res/unres

its so nice start

the lady was so evil

just only for the swarna mahal she killed her own husband too bad

hate her completely

and wow rey came with taani to mahal superb

yes want flashback of taarey marriage

update soon😊

Edited by poorni_vishali - 11 years ago

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Neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: poorni_vishali
res/unres
its so nice start
the lady was so evil
just only for the swarna mahal she killed her own husband too bad
hate her completely
and wow rey came with taani to mahal superb
yes want flashback of taarey marriage
update soon😊

More evil Dadi will be shown..
Thanx for long comment..

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Sejal

@cherrycola

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

res

unres

mysterious and superb update di

i am loving ur this fic.

how evil can some1 be 😡

killing their own husband

seems like taani is the actual princess and the d/o his other wife

yup we want to see full tr marriage flashback

plz cont. soon and pm me

thanx for da update and pm

Edited by shanz_sejal - 11 years ago

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Nice start :)

Waiting for the story to develop :)

Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

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Ashu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome chapter!!
Hate subhadra for killing her husband two times!!
Now I can proudly say that rey's anger towards her is justified!!
I can't wait till our taani shows subhadra her real place!!
Feel bad for subhadra's husband because he seemed like a nice man!!
Please continue soon!!