THE CAGE BIRD ---completed---sultan & madhu - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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He oly knows how much he loved her and he wished oly girl in his life after his mom is Madhu. He remembered the words"Mr. Sultan, she is a prostitute" he closed the eyes in anger and so the door.

PART 2:

By the sound of the door shut her memories came back to her, now his eyes was burning in anger. He came near her and saw the reflection of her back in the mirror, the perfect shaped which he saw before 3 years is still the same"no she is changed, she is not the girl i loved, she is not the girl i saw, no, she is not my chiky" with the trembling hands he was about to touch the body who is standing beside him but he stopped in btw by remembering the words he gave to her"i will not cross my limit". Madhu saw the anger in those magnetic eyes and couldn't understand reason and she saw his lips moving but didn't get the word properly. After asking her to follow him, he moved away from her and was holding the door open for her to come, he turned and looked for her but she was lost in the thoughts of the sudden anger in those eyes so she was standing in the same place not even a inch moved away. Anger in him grown more and with that he pulled her bangle hand closed to him. Due to the heavy weight sarry and sudden pull she slipped in his arm. Her left hand was in his right side of the chest and other the hand is struck in his strong grip. She was lost in some world by seeing those magnetic eyes. She remembers the 1st time wen she saw those eyes and was fainted. She really feared if God had placed some magnets in his eyes while creating. He pushed her back in a strong force, due to that she was about to hit her back but before that a rough hand caught her in time. His one hand was holding her head and the other one was strongly holding the waist. By the sudden touch of his hand in her body made her to close the eyes tightly. He made her to stand straight but his hands refused to remove from the head and waist, his heart remembered the 1st meeting of her in the orphanage. She doesn't know wats happening inside her she felt some think strange but she loved it, she all ways wished someone should take care of her but she dono its him and also she doesn't want know bcz she knew the drama had an end card. Suddenly she heard the voice in her mind "i will not leave u, fire fire fire" by that her whole body started to shake in fear Sultan who was holding her tightly felt the body trembling and realized his hand slowly and saw still her eyes was still shut but now he can see the tears and sweat in the face. "Sultan open the door all are waiting for u both"by hearing the voice she opened her eyes and saw the opening door, so quickly she wiped her tears and sweat. "Mom y u came up any way we both will be coming down oly na, pls take care of ur health" by telling that he cared his moms shoulder."i really can't wait to see my DIL and nothing will happen to my health bcz my daughter came in the DIL form" with that Madhu came and hugged her MIL very tightly, in her life time no one had described her as a daughter tis is the 1st time her ears are hearing the words which her heart wished for 21 years.


Next coming: He was tightening the grip by telling "i have seen u some were Mrs.Sultan, have u been in Mumbai" by hearing those word she stood ter without moving her body inch away in the fear.



Message: The love u have for the person oly comes 1st than the anger u have on them...😳


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Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102198391



Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very sweet loved reading it continue soon its very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandiab

very sweet loved reading it continue soon its very interesting



thank u😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojo1986

loved it update soon



thank u😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanx😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kahan ho tum prabha..tumhe gale se laga lun yr..awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelinasingh

kahan ho tum prabha..tumhe gale se laga lun yr..awesome



Hi can u translate wat u said, i dono hindi so oly asking😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha



Hi can u translate wat u said, i dono hindi so oly asking😉

where r u ...i wanna hug u...itna sweetly written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Madhu came and hugged her MIL very tightly, in her life time no one had described her as a daughter tis is the 1st time her ears are hearing the words which her heart wished for 21 years.

Part 3:

The crowd made a clap by seeing the beautiful pair coming down. All the eyes were on Madhu to see such a beautiful girl. The gentleman's were describing Madhu as "The Cage Bird" bcz tey very well know about Sultan who was called as a beast in their business society. He is known for his anger, rough behavior, and very strong in girl's side, so many girls have tried him for his money by using ter body but all just went in to vain. He will just push that girl down and move away, never gave his hand to lift anyone who was in the floor. Now all were thinking about the miracle happen in his life. Sultan introduced her to everyone and her mom took to her for introducing to the frnds. Sultan saw the fear in her eyes so he never moved his eyes from her. He was in the conversation with his client and suddenly he felt some strange feelings in the heart so his eyes automatically started to search her, but it could not find its pair of eyes. He excused himself from others and started to search. In the corner of the hall she was standing alone and was lost in the thoughts of the those magical eyes doing to her in the heart, by hearing the gentle voice she turned to see whom it was, the voice introduced itself as Rajesh business partner of her husband. She gave a sweet smile and tried to move away but she was shocked by the touch of his hand. She feared by the touch and was searching for the help to those magical eyes, wen she could not find it she tried herself to free from him by using her strength. But she was failed due to her weakness or by his strong grip. He was tightening the grip by telling "i have seen u some were Mrs.Sultan, have u been in Mumbai" by hearing those word she stood ter without moving her body inch away in the fear. After hearing the word Mumbai and the fear in her eyes and face conformed something to Mr.Rajesh. Madhu was about to fall due to the weakness of her leg and the grip loosening of his hand then she felt some strong hand is balancing her from falling down, her mind flashed Sultan face to her as the answer for the question asked by his heart. Rajesh felt some pain in his hand and pain is growing more and more so left madhu's hand in the pain, he looked up to see who's hand is making such a hard grip to him, he was shocked to see sultan whose face is burning in anger. Sultan came in time and saved madhu from falling, when he saw Mr.Rajesh hands were holding her hand, his anger grows more and now it was burning in his eyes. He twisted his hand while speaking politely to him and in the tiredness Madhu failed to hear the bone breaking sound of Mr.Rajesh's hand and to see the pain and fear in his eyes. After finishing his work he excused himself from him by taking her close to him and for the strong support he place his hand in the waist"let's go for caking cutting my dear chiky"he didn't see her his eyes were fixed oly in his hand. While moving away he turned his head and invited Mr.Rajesh for cake cutting by stressing the word cutting.

After hearing the word chiky she could not stop herself from crying. She hugged him tightly and cried by resting her head in his chest. Sultan could not understand the reason for crying and was stun by the sudden hug; he slowly lifted his hand to touch her back. He slowly smoothed it by reap ting the word relax. But her cry was unstoppable, suddenly he felt something and asked her "did he hurt u" but ter was no replay he gently pushed her aside and took her hand to have look. He was shocked to see imprison of Rajesh's hand prints in her hand and which was reddish in color. He wants to kill him in the very next moment but was stopped by her pleading eyes. Her eyes pleaded to him "pls don't go away, don't leave me alone, i need u" he can't do any more think by seeing those eyes he thought of finishing Mr.Rajesh's chapter tomorrow. Madhu can't believe her ears wat she heard was right or not. After very long time someone had called her in that nick name, it was her name in the home all used to call her by that name oly. But how he knows her name, her pet name she has oly the question but no answer for them. He guided her to the cake area. It was a chocolate cake and she loves chocolate. How he knows it, again the question but no answer. Her hands were shivering in the pain so he guided tem to cut the cake. Wen she felt the touch in the hand she automatically stared in to those magnetic eyes. She can't move her sight from him by using so much power she lowered his eyes. He took one small piece of the cake and made her to eat it that time his finger touched the rosy petals called the lips. His heart felt some magic in them. Madhu was about to take the cake in her hand and suddenly her eyes felt on the brown color XXL size dog which was staring at her, suddenly she could not control her fear and closed her eyes tightly, clinched his coat by using her both hands and buried her head in his chest by shouting "sultan pls take that dog out, it staring at me pls take that out". By seeing this all started to laugh at madhu. Sultan hugged her tightly and shouted for the guards to come "i have already informed u, madhu don't like dogs, yesterday 9t itself i have ordered u to take the tiger to the farm house but wat the hell u r all doing" he roared in anger. Then he stared at the guest who had laughed at her chiky, he want to through all of tem out of his house suddenly he felt the soft hand touching the should as if telling him to calm down, he know by the touch itself it was his mom. In his life time oly two girls have touched and hugged one his mom and now his madhu. Madhu who was hearing his words without lifting her head was again shocked by the question which rose in her mind"how he knows i don't like dogs". The party ended well and the entire guest gave their blessing to the couple.

Precap: Wen the foot step was no more heard she opened her eyes slowly and she saw the broad chest which was shown by the opened buttons. She feared whether he wantedly opened those buttons. She again closed her eyes tightly.



Message: in love we have to do research about our partners wishes and likes and dislikes before they tell them...😳


NOTE: pls hit the like button and do the comment also. dont forget to tell which part or the line u loved the most. Ur comments is the Energy drink to me😃 so pls do comments...

Part 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3928602&TPN=6&#p102347614

Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago

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