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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey TBPians...How are you all...And as u all can see I am here with a RaHi OS.. Me and My RaHi craziness...Ab what to do,I just adore both of them to the core..I hope you all like this OS..So without any delay here we go.

Precious Moment

She headed towards his room in pitch darkness of the house rubbing her eyes , trying her make her vision clearer ,trying her level best to avoid tripping over the strewn socks, shoes, rags ,chips packets and God knows what not..


Panchi cursed under her breath,"kya yaar..yeh Nonu aur Nonu ki habits..aur inke cricket matches. Match nahi ho gaya musibat ho gayi hai.. upar se Indo-Pak match..jab sabne match hi dekhna that oh humhe kyun bulaya...grrr...'OUCH OUCH OUCH!!!!"


Panchi yet again tripped over a cushion and fell down.."ohh my god..my leg..sh*it ..sh*t sh*t owww..mumma..its paining"..She cried holding her foot and nursing to it but soon her pain and misery turned into anger and she got up with a force making up her mind that she will do what she wants NOW!!!!!


Carefully yet fast she headed towards Ranveer's room barging in the room letting the door make a huge noise..Yet she was dealing with her Sweetheart Kumbhakaran here..Who won't even wake up even if earthquake hit!!


''Abe yaar..yeh toh itni awaaz main bhi nahi uthtaa hai..ughhh" she muttered under her breath and pulled her hair in anger..She went to his bed and started waking him up..."utho Nonu..Ranveerr utho naaa..Nonu.." she kept on shaking him but Mr.Sleepy head simply turned around..hide his face in his pillow and dozed off once again..


''Ranveer..utho naa pleesshhh ,Mujhe bhook lagi hai..ghar main khaane ke liye kuch nahi hai...utho naa Ranveer.." she changed her way of talking into a baby voice now because it always worked on Ranveer...her Nonu.


And she was successful yet again..."kya hai Moti ..kyu itni raat main utha rahi ho, I am tired yaar..sone de naa"..he said in a sleepy tone..


"haan Nonu ..ind-pak match ke liye dosto ko invite karo..poora ghar ka naksha bigaad do..mera khana khatam karo aur so jaao"..She said in anger but again calm herself and said..."Ranveer mele ko KFC ka chicken Burger khaana hai..plessshhh take me naaa..pleessshhh.." she made a baby face..but that was It for Ranveer..he was tired because of lots of fun he had with his buddies all evening and now his "ultra sweet" girlfriend and childhood best friend wanted to go to KFC at 1am to have chicken burger..wow !!!


"Panchi..jaao frigde mein kuch hoga..jaake khaalo..and for heaven sake please don't disturb my sleep..I am heck tired!!!! Now go !!!" he unknowingly shouted on her and that was it..Panchi was already in tears..she had not expected her Nonu to behave like this with her..Him and his friends had ruined her whole evening and she didn't say a word and now when she is hungry. She at least deserved to be lil pampered..

Wiping her tears she started making her way out of the room cursing Ranveer.."haan haan so jao..ache se sona..tum aur tumhaare friends ek din mujhe bhooka maar daaloge...poore dinn buddies ke liye khaana banaya..khud kuch nahi khaya..ek baar bhi complain nahi kiya aur mujhe kya mila"...she sobbed and sobbed and went out of the room.


Panchi was sitting on the messed up couch of their living room weeping.."mujhe is night out ke liye aana hi nahi chahiye tha"...she kept wiping her tears..while her stomach made unlimited noises craving for food.


After Panchi exited Ranveer's room..he slowly got up rubbing his eyes and rewinding what just happened between them ,what His Moti muttered when she went out..Ranveer held his head as her words sank in his head.."freak!!! Panchi didn't even have a bite all the evening coz of me and our idiot frnds..ughhh..Ranveer..you are nuts..bechari ne kuch khaya bhi nahi aur maine use daant bhi diya...I am such a jerk!!!" he threw away his sheets and headed towards the living room to find Panchi shedding tears hugging her knees..


"main bahut bura hoon naa Moti?"

Panchi felt her hands being removed from her face gently ..She saw Ranveer kneeling in front of her with an apologizing look on his face. But Panchi was really angry with him this time and she just shrugged his hands away from her and turned away showing him how much she was pissed off and hurt by his behavior.

Ranveer sighed as he knew it is going to be tough to "manaofy" his Moti this time..but did The Ranveer Shergill ever give up that easily ?


"Moti..dekh..I am sorry naa..please maan ja naa..main jaanta hu I was really really rude to you..I mean rude is just an understatement ...I know I ruined your whole evening because of this match...but if I was so bad with you then tumhe bhi toh chup nahi rehna chahiya tha naa..I mean who told you to stay hungry?...Moti..Please meri taraf toh dekh" ...Ranveer saw his attempts to pacify Panchi failing one by one because she didn't even look at him once she just kept staring in her lap and her tears didn't dry up.


Ranveer at last gave up and started heading back when he felt Panchi clutch his hand, trying to stop him


"Nonu'" she spoke in a whisper.


He turned back and Panchi looked in his eyes..There were tears in his eyes threatening to spill anytime and she felt guilty for him..Ranveer was never really an ignorant guy ,I mean he was but from past few months he was really very sweet and sometimes by mistake he did some wrong deeds and then this used to be the outcome every time..But Panchi could never stay angry from him for long because she knew that he never meant any of it ever.


Panchi got up and hugged him tight and Ranveer reciprocated with equal zest...they spoke nothing for what seemed like ages...letting the silence speak volumes for them. Because when they were together. Words never really mattered. Their eyes and the warmth of their togetherness was enough for them..


After some time Ranveer wiped his and Panchi's tears and spoke up..."I am so sorry..chal Moti you are hungry naa..let's take you to KFC..Now even I am hungry and no If's and no but's..We are going to have our time now ,u know Nonu-Moti Moments.. And that's final"..Ranveer said lightening up the mood and started dragging her out of their house to their car..


"Nonu,Ruko..Now I don't want to eat KFC burger"...RV looked at him surprised. "But u r hungry na?"...Panchi smiled and said..''yes Bhuk toh lagi hai but "...She think something and said cutely.."Kuch tum banao na?...please". She said cutely.."..Ranveer Smiled at her and nodded in agreement..


Panchi seated herself on the kitchen table. Looking at Ranveer expectantly.

"Toh Moti ..What would you like to have'.?" Ranveer asked her with a grin'

"I can have anything I want?" her eyes twinkled.

"Yeah anything from Pasta to French toast. I make amazing French toast."

"French toast then.."Panchi shrugged.

RV opened the fridge..Then looked at her and made a face.

"What?" She asked curiously.

"No eggs'" He grimaced...Panchi frowned.

"Well then I guess we should just sleep... This snack. Just wasn't meant to be" Panchi said with profuse melo-drama.

Ranveer rolled his eyes..Then looked at her and asked, "How about Maggi??"

"Maggi..Wow..Bring it on Nonu"...She said excitedly.

He went over to the storage cupboard and returned with one small packet of RaHi's favorite Maggi.

"Nonu..Make it fast now..I am super hungry"..Panchi said innocently

"Just 2 min Moti." He replied scrunching her nose playfully.

"Oh'''''''''.." I grinned'

"Toh Maggi?" He asked her waving the packet in front of my face.

"Yep!" She grinned'

Doing the usual preparation, he turned to put the bowl into the microwave.

"Microwave Nonu?" Panchi asked surprised

"Yeah...Gas is too much of work yaar and trust me this one is gonna be the tastiest Maggi you've ever come across."

Panchi waited till he was done making his extra-ordinary Maggi..She watched him as he carefully heaved two bowls on a tray And walked forward towards her, bowing his head slightly.

"Here you go your highness...Your Maggi!!" He bowed and grinned.

"Thank you'" Panchi replied arrogantly then giggled.

"Would you like anything to go with it?" Ranveer asked her again with that polite tone..Panchi rolled her eyes.

"No thank you!" She grinned

"Haan bas..Enough of being polite..Now I'm gonna attack!!"

After devouring both Maggi's, and of course Ranveer trying to take some from Panchi's..They settled in Hall..

"So how did you like the microwave Maggi??" He asked her with pride.

"Delicious" Panchi replied smacking her lips..She grinned and ruffled his hair..

He finally got up to take the bowls back to the kitchen..Panchi also went in to help him wash up

"No way'...You're my guest of honor tonight...Tum jao I'll just come'"

"But-"

"Arre Moti just go na...waise bhi tu humesha hi karti hai..Aaj mujhe karne de...But this is the only night you're getting this special treatment, from tomorrow we're back to square one, where I annoy you and you go crying to Aunty-"...Ranveer teased her with naughty grin


Panchi looked at him with shocked expression but said:"I don't cry ok .And you annoying me is never gonna affect me".. She took a few splashes of water and threw it on his face..Then quickly ran out of the kitchen before he could retaliate...He chuckled at her antics and shook his head.

Panchi went to hall and sat back down..Carefully laid her head on the table with closed eyes

"My Nonu is really sweetheart..I will never forget the way he took care of me tonight..And his Smile." She smiled at her stupid thoughts.

**

"Accha Moti sun-" Ranveer made his way out to find his Moti asleep with her head on the table, resting on her hands.

He smiled at the way she kept scrunching her nose in her sleep. Then she smiled, Spooked at first, he realized she must be dreaming..."But about what?" He thought and looked at her curiously. She still looked like the small girl he had for a best friend in childhood..He mentally kicked himself for behaving like this to her..how could he hurt her..She is his Angel..He just can't imagine his life without him...He sighed.

He looked at her..There was no chance of waking her up now..But he couldn't leave her here on the table..He very well know that Panchi is afraid of being alone in a room especially at a time when there was pin drop silence..If she woke up again she would clearly freak out..He carefully went to her and tried to wake her up...She moaned in her sleep..But it was gesture Ranveer understood..There was no chance this girl was gonna get up now...Great..Now what?"

He chose the only option he had..His last resort..He picked her up carefully and took her upstairs..He wondered if she ever ate anything besides Maggi, since she was surprisingly light..He kicked the door of her room open and walked over to the bed..Kiya and Sheeba were already sleeping there..Aah,what a night out it was..Though Only for Boys..Poor Girls..Indo Pak match ki wajah se bilkul bore ho gayi..Then carefully placing her there he covered her with her quilt..Just as he was about to turn, he found a picture peeping on her mobile desktop..It was the picture of her with a Him...He smiled at this..She is indeed the most important part of his life..No...She is His life..he kissed her forehead and walked back into his own room...To get some sleep after enjoying yet another" Precious Moment".


As Most of you already know, how much I love My RaHi's Maggie and coffee moments😳..I am sure u all too...So I wrote something on RaHi, inspired by their cute chemistry..I really hope u will like it...waiting for your reviews guys..Don't forget to press like button...Love you all

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG. Can someone please help me? I am stuck in Rahiland (although i dont want to cum back but i have to). Geet this was amazing. One of you best works. I just wanted that this os should never end. It was so beautiful.
Perfect rahi essence. A bit romantic a bit passionate and a bit nonu miti style. Loved it. I usually remember rahi while eating maaggi but now i will remember u also. Thanx for such a beautiful os.
And yeah fist one to comment. Yayy.
Going to read once again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww geet Khush aur emotional kar ditta...super cute yaar...tumhain toh TBP ka writer hona chahiye 😳😳😳
I loved it freaking loved it...⭐️⭐️

Boys Indo pak match , & Rahi + Maggie = Rishta purana...haye wow amazing tha yaar...

I loved the end part...Ranveer Panchi ko uske room utha ke lejata hai...and aur woh picture peeping on panchis desktop...

🤗

smriti




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow loved it Dear:) it was soo cute<3 Nonu Moti maggie moments aww.. thanks a lot for the PM:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Geet partner.. vintage Rahi tha yeh.. take a bow .
Cutesy rahi. Check.
Super cute fight. Check.
Angel in tears. Check
Nonu desperate. Check.
Roothna manana. Check
N then the epic Maggie scene. Check
N f this was not enough then that Panchi sleeping n nonu mesmerised was the perfect icing on the cake..
N then nonu noticing panchi n her sleeping antics n then carrying her to the room was out the world..
Babe u managed to tick all the boxes at one go.. amazing.
U gave such an understanding nonu.. I love your presentation f rv.. n panchi toh hai hi sweetie pie.
It was way too romantic..subtle n precious.. gonna remember it for a long time
Thanks a million times.
Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For the first u didn maked me cry.. 😛
It was totally ADORABLE update. 😳

loved each and every part of it.
The way panchi was carving and waking up nonu.
I am imagining her expressin. ⭐️

The way Nonu said sorry to her made maggi for her.

For this OS i wanna give a big big hug to you geet. 👏
I am gonna miss your OS alot in one month. 😭

Keep writting more and more. ⭐️

P.S. - mujhe lag gayi bhuk main chai maggi khane 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just this morning i saw d rahi offscreen bonding interview
n now this amazing os
u hav already made my day rahilicious
i too madly love d rahi maggie moments
n i loved rv made this maggie even more spl
u hav tons of ideas in ur mind wen it comes to rahi
plz consider writing an ff on dem as well :-)
Fabulous os indeed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet it was freaking awesome 👏
u know during school hours that to biology period I would be think about ur story and will be dreaming that rv and panchi r doing all that u have described 😳 (biology is the sleeping period for me and my frnds 😃 )
as I am dreaming I would be smiling so some of my frnds would tease me saying that I have become nuts 😛
loved this story

luv u geet 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG
It was super awesome.
I just loved it.
I need to learn a lot from ew!
Love ew from the bottom of my heart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow yaar Geet... 👏
Kitna cute concept tha yaar... Maggie & Rahi... 😳
Adorable 😉
Loved it... Do write more...
Thanx 4 d pm dear 😊
Muaah 😃

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