Shades of Love #5: The Frog Prince

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shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Finally caught up with this. It was nice role reversal with khushi being Laad governess!

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

I loved this role reversal shikha.

Arnav and khushi in a completely opposite avatar but still you could identify with them. The flashes of the original khushi and arnav still evident.

Once again a great spin indeed...i never thought i would read a frog prince version of Arnav.

You my girl are simply too good with your words and imagination is extraordinary...Kudos to you!

I am going to complete the entire fairytale stories today.

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incarnadine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Woaahhh Shikha! This is a masterpiece! Such a brilliant, awesome, lovely story! I'm seriously running out of words to describe how much I love this!

I was thinking of various scenarios on how Arnav could be our Frog Prince here. When you said that he is Malik here and not Raizada, I was thinking that, maybe he would fall for Khushi - a simple girl - but will hide his identity of being a Singh Raizada - to woo her, so that she won't come to know of his richly status.

But this was completely different!

There's nothing about a rich ASR vs a middle class KKG. It's purely a fresh new story and concept. But still having the essence of ArHi intact.

Loved the way you interchanged the avatars of Arnav and Khushi here.

Arnav, the endearing one. And Khushi, the lady ASR, a.k.a. Laad Governess 😆

Loved the setting too. I could visualize the scenes happening, seeming that I was in Banaras, seeing all this happening infront of my eyes.

It' so brilliant!

Hats off to you! This is my most favourite piece of your Fairytale series, upto now!

Loved it loads! :)