Omg wow! I am so excited for reading all of them..😳 😛 Res! Will vote soon!😉
Unres.. I would like to review each and every OS... (aadat se majboor I am😆)
OS #1
It was so so romantic.😳 OMG I was grinning all time. 😳 Especially when they slipped over the ice, the way Jalal was whispering all his feelings in her ears..😳 OMG! The JoJa close moments were written very exquisitely! Lovely and romantic OS.😳 👏 LOVED it! 😃 Well done writer.👏 👏 And I think I know the writer.😛 She is always so romantic.😳 (I fear if I am wrong😛😆)
OS#2
Awww... chooo cute OS.😳 It was such a delight to read this.😃 I loved the Salim-Ja-Jo sweet talks.👏 😳 I loved the flashback.😳 Lovely confession.😛 I giggled at the dialogue of Jalal when he said ki tumhari to sirf sleep gone..meri to laugh, smile, sleep, thirst all gone..hehe..cute one!😆😆 And yeah.. It was a perfect relation.😳⭐️ Keep it up writer. 👏
OS#3
That was Beautiful!😳 Very very romantic. Jodha is such a darling.👏😳 Made a very beautiful surprise for her love. 😳 But later on I find, Jalal is no lesser. Aww..the gifts were so cute.. Amazing.. I loved the OS so much.😳 Also, the OS was very realistic one. Great Job writer. (I loved this writing..thinking who might be the writer..😛 )
OS#5
Nice OS. 😳 I liked Jalal's surprise to Jo. 😃 The song was awesome.😳 The dance was sensuous😛. Lovely confession. Good Job writer. 👏
OS#6
OMG OMG! It was BEAUTIFUL!!!! 👏👏👏 I mean, I am awed! I could visualize the whole thing.😳 I got goosebumps when I read the bit when Jalal gave Jo his hand to help her in getting up.😳 Immediately Ishq hai vo ehsaas was in my mind. It was such a lovely piece.😳👏👏👏 Finally the confession in rain, everything was just so romantic and touching. Loved it.😳😳 I don't think I know the writer.. I can bet I definitely know the writer.😛😛
OS#7
That was AMAZING! 😳 I specially love the title -Khoya Khoya Pyaar..😃 Its so peaceful and lovely. 😳👏 The OS was really good. 😃 Jo still remembers him and always wears that locket J. Aww.😳 . Finally they meet after six years.. I liked their confession which was done six years back. Overall I liked this piece a lot. Amazing Job Writer. 👏👏
OS#8
Aww... That was cute. 😳😳 The dress he gave her and she wore it. 😛 She looked gawjuzz hun! Their dance was sensuous. Finally they confessed. Liked the OS so much. Keep it up writer.👏👏
After reading all the OSes, I am seriously at a loss of words.😳 I loved all. Its so difficult to choose one. The three OSes that stand same to me are #1,#3 and #6. I am just not able to select one among them. They are so so so well written and executed.😳👏👏
Okay ..finally..after much thinking I'll go with #6 because I loved the OS very very much. It touched me.😳
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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