An Ashlok Os - khaalipan part 1 updated page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i know that i am an average writter.. but can't resisted my tempation to write on out ashlok.. i am writing on the issue of emptiness in their marriage.. shlok and aastha are not husband and wife in real sense... so, i am focusing on that.. will update in some time.. do you want to read ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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r u writes really good sweety...please update soon...your concept is really nice...i would love to read that ❤️🤗
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Yes we all want to read it please post it thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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want to read it
plz post it
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Yeah hope we get a update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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An Ashlok Os - Khaalipan As per court orders, Aastha and shlok are living under one roof.. 4 mobths have passed.. there is no charm in their marriage... they always fight.. they argue daily.. they both feel they are right in their own way.. their life has a set routine. home to office.. office to home.. Both are very busy.. shlok in buisness and aastha both at home and office.. From last few days Aastha is free.. shlok is on buisness tour.. on the other hand shlok is very busy in finalazing deals with clients... it is night time.. Aastha is on bed.. she is reading a women's magzine.. she reads many columns related to marriage and married couples.. she realises that she is not married in real sense.. she is not active on bed... she is restless.. she decides to lay... she is seeing celling wall now... she sees moving fan... kitni lambi raat hai.. kitna akelapan hai. finally she decides to meet her old age home friends.. on the other hand. shlok sleeping well.. he had a successful day at office.. Next afternoon aastha has finished all work in office.. she is returning home.. she stops at a toy shop to buy toys for kavya.. Mrs.. Ranjana is also their.. she is in early 40s.. she was a kitty member in kalindi's group.. when she used to reside near aastha's home.. Ranjana aunty.. aastha.. she immediately recognizes aastha.. pehchan guyi aap.. asks aastha smilingly.. haaa bachpan se dekh rahi hu tujhe na... they talk for a while.. chal na ghar chal..ji voh.. chal na.. pass mai hi hai.. aastha agrees.. they reach home.. Mrs..Ranjana opens the door..ghar mai koi nahi hai.. aastha asks.. Daro matt. I am not lesbian.. she winks.. aastha is shocked... baitho kya logi ?? she offers water, coffee and snacks.. how is life ?? okk !! aastha replies.. just okk.. common yaar.. you are newly married.. Mrs..Ranjana is amused.. accha sasural se preshan ho.. aastha is shocked.. what to reply ?? nahi voh acche log hai ! replies aastha.. toh phir kya pareshani hai... be happy !! mazey karo !! you know what i mean !! Mrs. Ranjana says in relaxed tone... ji !! aastha replies in shock.. Mrs..Ranjana takes a deep breathe.. you know !! we still do it.. i am in my 40s.. still i crave.. chahiye toh chahiye.. aastha is in more deeper shock.. how her aunty is sharing all this?? see you are married.. i too.. you will be not able to understand. after 20-30 yrs of marriage.. the person gets to know.. how much desire he has ? in starting every one has desire.. people do it often.. very often.. Aastha realizes that the point of talk is on the issue, she was thinking last night.. bahut mzaa aata hoga na.. Mrs..Ranjana smiles.. i am getting late.. okk.. aastha you can go.. plz visit again.. Mrs.Ranjana says and waves hands.. ji aunty.. its evening time now.. aastha reaches home.. she cancels her plan to visit aashram friends.. she is very uncomfortable.. she directly goes to her room.. she is on bed again.. on the other hand , shlok is getting ready to visit his friends anand and vandana.. he goes to market buy gifts and is on the way to their home.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i know crap it is.. last update will be good...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanxx aishaa...jaisa chahti thi likhna.. vaisa nahi likh paayi..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb chapter👏 ...i just loved it...

omg ...aunty said she is not a lesbian...and such a boldness🤣...

waiting for next update to see how much astha is influenced by ranjana aunty...infact naughty aunty😆...

welldone vishu it was awesome👏...

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Originally posted by: crazygul

thanxx aishaa...jaisa chahti thi likhna.. vaisa nahi likh paayi..

vishu it was very well written...aunty already beyond nirma level...😉

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