{Journey of a Wife - 5 } - Hum Rajwaade Hain!!!!!! Last ch - Page 146 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Sjkbs

I love this and I'm so excited for the upcoming chapters; however, I have a complaint. I do not like how your story portrays Manyata to be a weak woman when we all know that she is anything but. You are letting Uday punish Manyata for something that wasn't her fault. No matter hoe much I love Uday, he is being unfair, rude, and snobbish. As for Ranjana, she disgusts me. How can she play such a cruel rick on a woman who just lost her baby? Please do not let Uday get the upper hand once again. Do something to make Manyata seem stronger such as making Manyata ask Uday for a divorce. Please, please make Manyata stronger. Thank for you reading this, considering my request, and for writing such amazing FFs.

Hey navi, i was just wondering whether uday and ranjana had any relation before and after manveer's marriage?

Hi navi😳

So sorry for the late edit...😭 but I got unusually busy, and will remain so in the coming days😭. Anyway you know about that na

Thanks so much for the surprise... I never thought you would update that day. And when you said there was a surprise on pg 11, I never thought it would be an update... so full marks for you for giving such a surprise😳

What do I say about the update? As usual this update was sooo awesome and was cute...👏😳

Udita's first tea party na, very cute, my niece takes plates from the kitchen and feeds us all with her toy shhpoon (spoon) . we got to eat it and say its so tasty, then only she will be satisfied... never know how time flies when I am there.😳

Now did I tell you that I don't like jaggat?? Ask me why? I will tell you. 😉Simple because he married jai, and I DON'T LIKE HER .. grrr..😡 now they are trying to "knock sense" to manyta and I felt like "knocking their heads " for that..but their convo was very enlightening. Atleast we knew why manyta has sent her reacting skills for vacation. She blames herself for virat s death and so she fears if she reacts back uday would divorse her and marry some one. She loves uday so much that she cant imagine a life without him, that is why she is suffering all this, isn't it (don't say am wrong)😆

Now why would a grandmother want to spoil her grand daughter's life(its not spoiling, he he he, but am angry so I am blasting everything and everyone in my sight)... I thought uday was the mastermind behing this "make manyta jealous plan:", na, you proved us wrong, it was ds na. does she want to bring manyta back to her old self, and help her forget the trauma she had to undergo after virat's death. Na, it doest not fit there, there must be something more na navi, if uday too must support DS...(thinking , and scratching my head to get an answer)

Love uday sooo much, poor guy I really doubted him , but he loves only manyta . so happy (good thing you made me happy or I would have killed uday, if he had a affair)

Um, jai again offers us some insights. She remembered how manyta was head strong. I really miss those days when she was like that... a total jungle billi, and her language, give us more about that old manyta, na moniya, navi darling

Poor udita, she has to suffer a lot, god knows why the writer has so much enmity towards that baby angel... grrr. First she tries to kill her in the storm, then gives her allergy, a very terrifying fever , and now a hair line fracture, poor baby... now again manyta would blame herself and it would be another stepback to uday's plan of bringing bk old manyta na???bw, my niece too has a fascination for phones and mobiles... its hard to separate her from a phone once she gets it...

Uday know how to pacify his daughter na, smart dad.. and udita crying more when seeing him, he he he, naughty baby... I just cant understand why manyta thinks her curse backfired... navi do us a favor and make manyta's curse true na , please...

Awww!!! Hunter!! What a cute name for a dog. I really like big, vicious looking dogs... they are sooo cute, udita is sooo lucky , I tell you... "hutter" was very nice name... its really nice to hear babies talk. I told you na how my niece pronounces my name giving stress to each syllable... heh he😆

I really liked how manyta compared uday with hunter... it was so hilarious, that just remembering that scene make me laugh so much🤣

Uday is going for a date with himself,,, ha ha ha ... poor guy cant find any girls er? Or did he become too old to date? He he he .. but he did not get the desired result from manyta na... I really thought manyta would stop him, question him, do whatever she wants to make him stay at home, but just like uday I am disappointed. We WANT OLD MANYTA BACK ... bring her back soon navi... please

I had a doubt whether jai was actually trying to destroy manyta's life, but after reading the last line I am sure she is innocent and all she wants is her sister's happiness.. I just hope her" plan make uday jealous"does not back fire and manyta face its consequences.. when is the jaiveer scene coming, I really want to know the truth about that scene😃

Anyway finally I reached the end of the comment... superb update as usual, do update soon navi, I REALLY AM LOOKING FORWARD FOR CHAP 3 (since you told me you know what{grinning})

Thanks for the pm navi... 😳

Love you❤️

Yayeee 😛 Me Second😛 ... thanks for the Update Navi 😳 Really Enjoyed this Part 😊 Uday's Game is Fully on 😃 Now Manyata too on the same track 👏 All Thanks to Jai and Jaggat⭐️ New CareTaker for Udita Baby.. Hunter 😉 Uff!!!! Udita Ki Hutter 😆 uski papa ki bhai 🤣 !!!!!! eagerly waiting to the see both the jealousy Tracks 🤪... also welcome to d new handsome hunk ... thanks For the PM Dear 🤗 Please continue soon

Awesome update navi... 👏
I loved it.
I felt a lil bad for manyata, she has lost a lot of self confidence & is blaming herself for everything... 😔
Uday is planning sumthing wid DS bt what n why, i m nt exactly getting it 🤔
I mean i know uday want old manyata back thats why i guess bt why this way??
Cont soon navi. ..
Navi wen u reply to this pls scrap me that..

Awesome update!!
Loved it to the core!!
Uday is planing everything with ds I'm so shocked!! I wonder why I'm not getting what plan ds and uday is trying to make.
Jai and jaggat are so right though jai bringing in another guy is kinda not good coz it will worsen things I guess let's not hope that it doesn't.
Poor manyata she has lost all self confidence hope she again comes back to her fighter mode.
Update was beautifully written
Do continue asap and if u can plzzz update by sunday plzzz its a pretty please :)
Thanks for the pm.

Hey Amazing Update navi!!👏