pls comment on this storyline

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raghav is pulled strongly towards kalpi during this trip and falls desperately in love with her but it is the silent love thru expressiona and slightly physical touches.

Kalpi takes care of him and suffers all his tantrums and also gives jt back.

she too falls ill due to cold and he takes care of her where she talks in her sleep about her dreams of getting in to IAS...Also that she always comes second best and wants someone who she will always comes first with.
Or Prem tries to burn raghav office and kalpi trapped inside ...

Back at office he decides to push her to the liits by giving her challenges to fulfil in the process getting close to her ..He wants her to hate him so that she will prove herself ...

Raghav gets close to pakhi thus making kalpi realise her feelings.Sammy understand raghav feelings and decide to make raghav jealous by getting close to kalpi as he is in love with pakhi.
Raghav cannot stand this and make sure he is always keeps kalpi close to him .

when kalpi finally admits her feelings for him he turns her down and tells her how can a poor girl like her think of marryinmg him...He tells her that to first make somethingof herself and then start dreaming...as he is gonna marry pakhi.

Kalpi writes her ias exams and is selected ..She also gets a scholarship for her fees?(which is actually paid by raghav her unknown benefactor)

She challenges raghav that she will comeback and her hate for him is so much that she will take revenge from him.
Raghav then tells kamala and pakhi that he cannot marry her as he cannot love her as he has only loved one girl all his life and is waiting for her.he gives pakhi a choice to marry him who does not love her or marry sammy who only loves her...pAKHI MARRIES SAMMY AND A NEW FAMILY IS INTRODUCED TO TAKE THE PAKHI STORY FORWARD...

Kalpi returns as Collector and their new story of Kalpi versus Raghav continues... with HATE WHICH WILL ULTIMATLY TURN TO endless love...

They can get married after which raghav mother story can be shown...kamala and vithal and their seperation and reunion...

This will be different and not the uttaran way..they will have to keep Raghav and kalpi together without diluting their chemistry.

Pls adds your views...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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first u got me confused i thut dis was all for sm ff work :)
yeah me too dnt wnt the story to go utran way...
i want pakhi's move more importantly..aftr knowin abt ragna kamala will ask for kalpi to sacrifice n she will do bt whn pakhi comes to knw she'll be the cupid leave behind raghav 😆 this way she can b selfless n she will earn respect...i wnt the story to go dat way
I guess whn raghavs moms role comes it'll get connected with kalpi smhw
Kalpi has to leave thngs behind n go smwhr else to make her career Kapurs wnt let her b successful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I thought this is part of an FF???
Pakhi and Kamal will play a big role in RagNa story and Raghav will mess his life for revenge. Let Kalpana fall in love before thinking further😆I don't think Kalpi will go somewhere to make big in life, at least not so soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly I don't think prem will burn Raghav's office I know he hates Raghav but I'm sure he doesn't want to go to jail 😆
Let's just wait for kalpi to fall in love with Mr.Akdoo first 😆 😉 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have planned out so much!😆
Lets see how the present track unfolds. And why IAS for Kalpi?
I love Raghav's story.
Not only Kalpi's story and RagNa, I'm excited to see his revenge unfold.
But yeah, he really will mess up his life for his revenge.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u have planned so much!!!

kalpi dreamed of becoming of IAS .when ??

kalpi will never tell her feelings to raghav...coz we know kalpi more then u...and even if she says raghav will never turn her down calling her poor girl dreaming high...coz raghav can never be such a mean guy even when he tries to

kalpi can never hate raghav or think of avenging him coz she knows raghav has stood by her family and chawl inspite of all his arrogance and coldness...raghav does confuses kalpi by his arrogence but its impossible to make kalpi hate raghav..Never !!!


Prem burning raghav office.impossible...prem does not have that much power...though he may apply such ideas on kalpi for sure.But as usual Raghav will save her :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amansharma

Raghav is pulled strongly towards kalpi during this trip and falls desperately in love with her but it is the silent love thru expressiona and slightly physical touches.

Kalpi takes care of him and suffers all his tantrums and also gives jt back.

she too falls ill due to cold and he takes care of her where she talks in her sleep about her dreams of getting in to IAS...Also that she always comes second best and wants someone who she will always comes first with.
Or Prem tries to burn raghav office and kalpi trapped inside ...

Back at office he decides to push her to the liits by giving her challenges to fulfil in the process getting close to her ..He wants her to hate him so that she will prove herself ...

Raghav gets close to pakhi thus making kalpi realise her feelings.Sammy understand raghav feelings and decide to make raghav jealous by getting close to kalpi as he is in love with pakhi.
Raghav cannot stand this and make sure he is always keeps kalpi close to him .

when kalpi finally admits her feelings for him he turns her down and tells her how can a poor girl like her think of marryinmg him...He tells her that to first make somethingof herself and then start dreaming...as he is gonna marry pakhi.

Kalpi writes her ias exams and is selected ..She also gets a scholarship for her fees?(which is actually paid by raghav her unknown benefactor)

She challenges raghav that she will comeback and her hate for him is so much that she will take revenge from him.
Raghav then tells kamala and pakhi that he cannot marry her as he cannot love her as he has only loved one girl all his life and is waiting for her.he gives pakhi a choice to marry him who does not love her or marry sammy who only loves her...pAKHI MARRIES SAMMY AND A NEW FAMILY IS INTRODUCED TO TAKE THE PAKHI STORY FORWARD...

Kalpi returns as Collector and their new story of Kalpi versus Raghav continues... with HATE WHICH WILL ULTIMATLY TURN TO endless love...

They can get married after which raghav mother story can be shown...kamala and vithal and their seperation and reunion...

This will be different and not the uttaran way..they will have to keep Raghav and kalpi together without diluting their chemistry.

Pls adds your views...


Nice storyline.. But tht Prem burning Raghav's office was funny.. Hw can he burn an office ?? He can try to burn Raghav if he wants... And before Raghav can even think of flirting wid Pakhi, he himself will run for the hills... He cnt stand her.. Sammy will never flirt wid Kalpi... Raghav ka ghussa bohot bada hai.. He wnt leave Sammy alive... 😆.. You can write OS, SS and FF,,, Your storyline is very nice.. Do write... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanaa_17

Firstly I don't think prem will burn Raghav's office I know he hates Raghav but I'm sure he doesn't want to go to jail 😆
Let's just wait for kalpi to fall in love with Mr.Akdoo first 😆 😉 😳


NO HE'D NVR DO THAT 😆

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