Drabbles: 30. Episode XXXI- Return of the Jallad (Pg 95) [Note Pg 98] - Page 29

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hkdrama

First thing in the morning...I check for your updates.
Loved Parvati ke nuskhe 👍🏼


Originally posted by: shreya_rc

u r up because of the update and I couldnot go to bed becoz of the update.😆😆


Originally posted by: mistyrains

I'm falling in love with the way you write these wonderful drabbles. This also happens to be the first fiction piece I have started reading and they are so brilliantly written. Love <3


Originally posted by: shreya_rc

ab aise naubat agayi that poor,naive,shy paro is trying to seduce the highly revered rudra ??😆 this is one hell of an update,TT !!


Originally posted by: IronButterfly

How innocent is she.

Her subtle ways...


Thank you! Desperate times call for desperate measures. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SS88

What an impasse. He's trying to be the gentleman because he thinks she is too innocent to notice. She's trying to excite him using whatever methods are at her disposal, because she thinks he's not interested. So what is to be done in a situation like this?



Originally posted by: dreamwinner

Heightened awareness of each other is not
going to let them sleep even. Sigh


Originally posted by: awww

Amazing update ,both r simmering !!!!!!!!


Thank you! Impasses are meant to be broken. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

The Lady Who Wanted To Be A Tramp


Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat was that dangerous combination of hurt, angry, and contained. Contained-- because the one her ire was directed at was not at home, and Paro did not believe in washing her dirty linen in public. Hurt and angry-- because of what she had just discovered from her devar, Sumer. Sumer who still had a rather wandering eye where his bhabhi was concerned, had laughingly asked her whether Rudra Banna's late nights were because of BSD work or his mistress, Laila.

Mistress? Laila?

Away from the probing eyes of her in-laws, Parvati sat on her bed-- their bed and drew her knees up to her chest, wrapping her arms protectively around them.

She closed her eyes and bit her lip at her folly.

No wonder he wasn't interested in a forced wife. How could he be? When he had a mistress of his own choosing? And one as tempting as Laila?

She distinctly remembered Laila from the sangeet of her first wedding-- the laughing nautch girl with a twinkle in her eyes and a seductive sway to her hips.

Laila-- who was worldly-wise and well-versed in the mysterious ways of men. Hadn't Laila given Paro her first piece of advice about different kinds of men? Another bit of long-forgotten conversation floated in with the wind.

Jaise ki mhara Rudra...

Laila had mentioned a Rudra. And she'd called him HER Rudra.

She tightened her arms around her knees and gasped-- the sound a sharp gash in the stillness around her.

Sumer was not lying.

But where did that leave her? Rudra's wife?

~~~

By the time Rudra came home, Paro had wiped her tears and shored her courage. The longer you let a wound fester, the longer it took to heal. It was best to cauterize it right away.

She noted that he looked exhausted. Paro knew nothing about his work-- he never shared any information-- but she had a niggling feeling that he ought not look so worried and grim all the time if everything was finally falling into place.

Was it guilt then? For deceiving her? Or regret? At having to leave Laila behind?

Either way, it was unbearable.

With brisk, snappy movements, Rudra unhooked his belt, unpinned his badges, and started undoing the buttons of his shirt while holding out his hand for his kurta. A moment later, he glanced at her with a frown.

Parvati stood tall near the bed, making no move to give him so much as a handkerchief-- forget his kurta. Her eyes held an accusatory light-- one that he hadn't seen in months.

"Where were you?"

He narrowed his eyes. He certainly hadn't expected this question.

"At the fair. Where do you think?"

"Don't you dare lie to me."

He could feel his temper beginning to rise.

"Lower your voice. What is the point of this conversation, Parvati?"

He could see the muscles of her slender throat move as she swallowed.

"I know, Major Saab. I know about Laila."

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Posted: 11 years ago
Two updates. Because I don't want to do ramanchi. 😆 See you all tomorrow.
-TT
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dahling...you have a gift...
Beautiful...sensuous...and free flowing...easy to read..expressive..better than the reel ...
Awesome ..keep writing...plz
Love your chapter headings...the lady and the tramp...and wanted to be a tramp..
So will they or won't they?????????///😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tattle-tale

Two updates. Because I don't want to do ramanchi. 😆 See you all tomorrow.

-TT

i appreciate it I really do...😛

lol now that just left me wanting more...
Edited by CravingKhana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woo hoo! 2 updates, must be our lucky day! Loved them both!
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Posted: 11 years ago
woow ... this is getting interesting...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaah the innocent attempting her hand at seducing her hby...n he backing away due to same quality in her.

Laila going to give them the needed push to take their r/ship the next step?

Yr every sentence is like a story in itself.❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
That is just torture..to stop there...

And im saying with an ankle swollen to twice itssize and no anklet or jaadu and nasha in sight...

Bring on the tempest..soon!!

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